in loving memory

• Artist: king_snake_in_shadows
• Description: i hope u can get this poem if u cant i understand
  but yea i hope u get it
• Date: 10/21/2008
• Tags: loving memory deep poem noface

in loving memory
its what we hear
in a voice so dear
we hear muffled by tears
for your face embedded in our
memory we miss u like the kid who misses his bear
like a kid missing his mom
holding tight
not letting go
not yet
oh no
the framed picture it snaps in his arms
he bleeds hopping to see his mom again
he faints and sees his mom in the darkness

Comments

[Ess Tee Eff Yuu]

I would have liked it better if you spelled out "u" and followed poetry format. There's such a thing as capitalizing the first letter.
Anyway, I didn't really like it. The last two lines just really...Lost me.

[Sea of Rains]

amazing

[CrowleysGirl]

Brilliant! i am speecheless... i dont know what else to say....loved it!!!!!

[Msxpoison Has GGG]

Wonderful poem when i read it, it brought tears to my eyes i understand your style of writeing keep up the poems they are good!

[xXNemoXxXHeartlessXx]

Awww that made my heart hurt >.<