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Just because her eyes don't tear,
Doesn't mean her heart never cry's,
And just because she comes off strong,
Doesn't mean there is nothing wrong.
- by salina_colene_wolf |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/14/2008 |
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- Title: Just because
- Artist: salina_colene_wolf
- Description: To girls who fake a smile. To boys who think she is okay.
- Date: 10/14/2008
- Tags: just because
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Comments (6 Comments)
- PinchOfSoul - 10/15/2008
- DAM,YOUR GOOD
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- AliceCullen93 - 10/14/2008
- that was TOTALLY awesome. Good job! ^-^
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- Blood Of a Demonic Angel - 10/14/2008
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thats really good
(and that fits me all the time to)
its perfect5/5 - Report As Spam
- The Devils Advocate91 - 10/14/2008
- Hey that sounds like something I would wright and its awesome
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- neat overdose - 10/14/2008
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i like it even though its short
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- tksunshine93 - 10/14/2008
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short and to the point
i like how the second line doesn't rhyme, sometimes with short poems it can draw attention from the end but yours did not, even though it is short it is also very powerful. 5/5 - Report As Spam
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