Love

• Artist: The_unborn_sin
• Description: its something i wrote when i was on a road trip or something
• Date: 10/12/2008
• Tags: love

In songs they say
that love is everlasting
that you can make more
if you need it
but in my heart
love is not
once my heart was full of love
and not a drop was gone
but now there is hardly any left
for now I have none to make
and none to give
intil the right guy comes along
then my heart can make
all the love I want.

Comments

[HUMIDIFIER]

pay no heed to the preceding comments, this is boring, trite, and uninteresting. 'intil' is not a word. angsty thoughts articulated poorly with random line breaks does not a poem make.

[Sasori Puppet Master_001]

really good

[QuestionablyRoyal]

wow!