Waltz

• Artist: Xx-FallenGuardianAngel-xX
• Description: *sigh* Ok, I'm not much of a poet. I have no idea why I wrote the poem, I just felt bored and needed something to write. I'm actually proud of it too. I also have another poem named Under the Moon. Hope you like it!
• Date: 10/10/2008
• Tags: waltz

Waltz
Get ready as you're about to learn
Of the twists and turns
With spins and twirls
And graceful whirls
So be prepared
And you won't be scared
For you will dance into a trance
Of the Waltz.

Comments

[AdamJ14]

I liked it personally. It almost sounded like the intro to a Tim Burton movie, which is never a bad thing. Nice job Twilight.

[OhDearie]

This makes me think of Dr. Seuss writing a mature book.
I love it.
Work on capitalisation and punctuation. Especially punctuation.

[Xx-FallenGuardianAngel-xX]

Thanks Sonic, you're very supportive. *hugs* crying (these are tears of joy)

[Sonic2Fast2See]

5 stars Pika biggrin