War

• Artist: Shadowangelnight
• Description: Tribute to all the soldier at war and who died in war.
• Date: 09/04/2008
• Tags: tribute sadnees

Come by day
Come by night
Neither is a sailor’s delight
When the signs of war
Come knocking on their door
Blood spilt up on the sand
Yet the land
It did cry
For all those who did die.

Comments

[trant_or_henru]

On the contrary to the post before me, I thought the ending was stronger than the beginning, but i also agree very good piece.

[Silvia Pearl]

it starts well but kind of fades toward the end. Over all a nice piece of writing