blood tears

• Artist: Queen_ChaCha_15
• Description: i wrote this wen i was feeling really bad
• Date: 08/12/2008
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Ii've Been to hell n baq
I had a knife to my neck
A gun to my head and was put on my knees n told to beg
I've been to my cuzin wedding and watched him get got a year later
I've been to the birth of a still born baby and seen the cofen of my fater
I fought death 4 tyme n he put me on my a** twice
I feel in love but then that love died!
Has you can c im no stranger to crying
Its just that i have cryed so much that my eyes are dryed up
So i use the next thing i can
Now i cry blood tears

Comments

[lost in my frozen dreams]

wrost poem ever

[Takashi Kyo]

two things: spell check and theme. there are a lot of misspelled words and shortcuts to words. also there is not definite theme. it seems as though you are just venting, which is not bad. but the poem still needs work.

[wallerrob]

many spelling errors and i am not quite sure what line 4 is supposed to mean. lots of emotion.