Envious

• Artist: Solace Light
• Description: Alright, this one is a bit creepy then my other poems, so be warned. Our assignment was to write a poem about a color, and I chose green. When I think of green, immediately Envy comes to though, so this is what it brought to mind.
• Date: 07/20/2008
• Tags: essence beauty envious hatred

That beauty, That grace,
I want it for myself.
The shine of her hair,
The smoothness of her skin,
How all the guys chase her,
I want it for myself.
Those pretty blue eyes,
Such valuable clothes,
I want it for myself.
Pull out her hair,
Rip her eyes from their sockets,
Tear out the tongue,
Rip her parts limb from limb.
Claim them as my own,
Absorb the essence of her beauty.

Comments

[Xxhells bloodxX]

bravo! love how much u want to rip her appart cuz u luv her so much

[The Sharpie Prototype]

Huh. Well I find it intriguing, to say the least. when I think of green, I think of earth so I like that you wrote about envy. This poem describes what many of us feel about others in terms of jealousy. I know I do. You just want to hurt them because they're so perfect. Good job on capturing that. 4/5.