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Peace on earth,
Happy as can be
Where warm sunshine gleams on me.
The rain falls on everything,
The earth is the place for you and me.
So many, many things to do,
Living on Earth
Me and you.
Hope you enjoyed my poem!
heart heart heart
- by TOCWGoggles |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/19/2008 |
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- Title: Peaceful World
- Artist: TOCWGoggles
- Description: a poem inspired by National peace day
- Date: 07/19/2008
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Comments (6 Comments)
- NakedJack - 12/26/2008
- sunshine, yay, happiness. The positive poems are never as deep as the dark ones though. The deep positive ones are inspirational, like Tool's Parabola or Lateralus.
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- TOCWGoggles - 07/24/2008
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thx ppl
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- NefariousShark - 07/20/2008
- fianlly a positive poem lol. not bad it's ........ really not that bad
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- Zajas - 07/20/2008
- Short, simple and structured, nice job. 4/5
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- supi_kun - 07/19/2008
- hahaha, it's full of positive thoughts
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- daanny22619 - 07/19/2008
- peace that's wat i need oh wat i'm saying that is a wonderful poem peace to u
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