The light

• Artist: Dont Tell Cookie
• Description: sad tear heart breaking
• Date: 04/26/2010
• Tags: light

Lucy had a dream she was in a plane crash she was the one who survived the crash she saw here parents death as she tryed to wake them she grew weaker and as she tryed so hard she just dropped a tear and she new her likfe wasnt the same no more she was a different angel she saw her 3 year old brother lying there shattered glass everywhere it was different her love was gone and now shes alll alone she never gave up hope and that one day she was now a betiful angel but hse loslt all ehr love but they never died in her heart

Comments

[Kaypar]

There's a great idea behind this little vignette, but there are several spelling and grammatical errors, and it's simply too short. Could use serious revision and expansion.

[Rainbow Donkey Princess]

Wow... That made me depressed...

[The Angel Dystopia]

Sad... rather.... rather sad