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He had just walked out of an alley fight, bruised with a bloody nose and scraped knuckles. His name was Jared. He was born in 1980. He was only 13
But was a prized boxer. Every time he had gotten into a fight he usually came out on top. But not this time.
- by Doomed Riku |
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- | Submitted on 10/25/2009 |
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- Title: Prize Fighter (Prolouge)
- Artist: Doomed Riku
- Description: Jared is awesome. and this story takes place in 1993 but this is only the beggining
- Date: 10/25/2009
- Tags: prize fighter prolouge
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Comments (4 Comments)
- ElectraShocked - 04/03/2010
- that's the point isn't it? an ominus beginning leading to a wonderful story. its the prolouge its not supposed give too much away...
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- xXxSparkly_Asian_AngelxXx - 01/13/2010
- i dont get it.. sad
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- auraofalara - 01/13/2010
- might want to give more background and more details on the fight: how did it start? why did "Jared" lose? but other wise great premis
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- hazuinf - 11/01/2009
- a bit wierd
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