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Greetings, this is my journal and i invite all to read and comment on it. Gaia is all about interacting with others and that's what i hope to do. I don't get on much so my updates will probably be farther apart then most.
The Parents continued............. stare again

Looking back up at him so quickly it tousled her hair and speaking rather forcefully. "NO!" An almost apologetic look crosses her face before she looks back down just as quickly, her voice returning to it's mild tone. "Of course not....... I....... it just...." Aaron just chuckled slightly at her out burst. "Then is it really your fault is it? The beast chose to kill those people, the guilt is not yours unless you willed it to happen right?" Setting the ladle back in the bucket Brandy scooted back against a tree to sit hugging her knees to her chest with one arm and absentmindedly/nervously played in the dirt with her free hand. "But.... I.. I should be able to control it...... somehow..." Aaron simply sigh and stretched out on his back with his arms crossed behind his head as a pillow. It wasn't his problem, no use worrying about it. Closing his eyes, "If you're still hungry you'll have to hunt something yourself, I don't care if you're there in the morning or not. The next full moon isn't for a couple weeks so you don't have to transform for at least that long. then he was silent. She watched him for a little while before getting closer to the fire and curling up to go to sleep.






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night_shade36
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commentCommented on: Fri Jul 03, 2009 @ 06:50am
xD 'again'

pssst! unescessary 'and' in one of your sentences.


commentCommented on: Fri Jul 03, 2009 @ 10:10pm
razz HA WRONG!!!! I believe the sentence you are referring to is the one where Brandy scoots "back against a tree to sit hugging her knees to her chest with one arm and absentmindedly/nervously...." they are/were as they're supposed to be, you just read it wrong. POINT FOR MOMENTIE!!! blaugh




stare .............if not, then I'm still missing it.......



l-Momentie-l
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night_shade36
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commentCommented on: Sat Jul 04, 2009 @ 03:55am
*tsks* right sentence, wrong 'and' Momentie. 'Setting the ladle back in the bucket Brandy AND scooted back...' That just makes no sense my friend. The way I see it, that sentence would sound best if written, 'Setting the ladle back in the bucket Brandy and scooted back against a tree to sit hugging her knees to her chest with one arm and absentmindedly/nervously playing played in the dirt with her free hand.'

smile


commentCommented on: Mon Jul 06, 2009 @ 07:11pm
stare Now I just sound like an a**........ crying I HATE being wrong!!!!!!!! stressed -Sigh- Alright it's fixed.



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