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Shanyume

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 26, 2021 5:11 pm


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APPROVED

MAJOR REVISION
Character Name: Slidr Vauxite
Reason for Revision: ORP side swap - Approved
Link to Old Profile:Slidr
Link to Revised Profile:Vauxite

Note: PMed the Civ Name Change.
PostPosted: Tue Oct 26, 2021 5:23 pm


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MAJOR REVISION
Character Name: Lysithea
Reason for Revision: Corruption
Link to Old Profile: Here!
Link to Revised Profile: Here Last name used with permission from Strick!

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Sweenys_Revenge

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 31, 2021 6:40 pm


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MAJOR REVISION
Character Name: Alpha Leporis --> Youma Angora
Reason for Revision: ORP side swap - Approved
Link to Old Profile:Alpha Leporis
Link to Revised Profile:Angora
PostPosted: Sun Oct 31, 2021 8:14 pm


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MAJOR REVISION
Character Name: Sailor Suzaku
Reason for Revision: ORP Corruption
Link to Old Profile:Devlyn Cain / Suzaku
Link to Revised Profile:Rosaria R / Suzaku

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 01, 2021 12:35 am


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APPROVED

MAJOR REVISION
Character Name: Megumi Himura / Shiroyama of Mars -> Ei Kujou / Akaganeite
Reason for Revision: oops, all sideswaps
Link to Old Profile: [x]
Link to Revised Profile: [x]
PostPosted: Mon Nov 01, 2021 5:53 pm


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MINOR REVISION
Character Name: Dark Mirror Eternal Acubens
Reason for Revision: I'm changing her super and basic attacks to make room for an enhancement.
Revisions Requested:
Basic Attack
Velociraptor Dash
Type Offensive
Duration and Timing The charge lasts five seconds, and the effect lasts about thirty. She must wait five minutes before she can attack again, and can only attack three times.
Uses Acubens' attack is used to dash at her opponents. He is able to cover large spans in a relativity short amount of time, reaching the speed of an Olympic runner if she gets out in the open. With this speed, she is able to close distances, and even get some punches in if she aims well.
Drawbacks This attack will give Acubens the speed of a velociraptor, but none of the grace. This means she can go pretty much only in a straight line. Turns will be wide if she can do so at all. For this reason, she's pretty easy to dodge. She's also almost unable to stop, having to take quite a while to slow or resorting to running into something, resulting in personal injury.


Revised Basic Attack
Sailor Scout Attack
Stalking Velociraptor
Type: Defensive / Distracting
Duration and Timing: The attack lasts 30 seconds and can be used twice in battle.
Uses: Acubens calls the name of her attack, and all enemy combatants (people actively trying to harm Acubens) within five feet of Acubens feel like they are being stalked by… something. They may feel tingling on the backs of their necks, like they are being watched, or feel the need to look around for whomever or… whatever… is stalking them. Basically, it creates a sense of vague paranoia that can be distracting. The stronger a character is, the easier it is to shake or ignore this feeling.


Super Attack
Velociraptor Agility
Type Offensive
Duration and Timing The charge lasts five seconds. She can use this attack once every three minutes, and can only attack twice, with just enough energy left over for a Velociraptor Dash after a five-minute charging period.
Uses A power-up of her first attack, Acubens now is able to get up to cheetah speed. Besides that, however, he is also a great deal more agile. She can now turn, for instance, and while it may not be on a dime, at least she can change direction. She can also stop sooner and without having to run into things.
Drawbacks Because the turns are still pretty sloppy, it's still pretty easy to dodge Micah's attack. It's still also pretty hard to stop, so Acubens might actually end up running into something while she is trying to do so.


Revised Super Attack
Super Sailor Scout Attack
Hunting Velociraptor
Type: Defensive / Distracting
Duration and Timing: The attack lasts 30 seconds and can be used twice in battle.
Uses: Acubens calls the name of her attack, and all enemy combatants (people actively trying to harm Acubens) within ten feet of Acubens fall under the illusion that they are being hunted by... something. This time there are hallucinations as well as the general feeling of being watched, including hearing footsteps around them, hearing growling coming from shadows, and feeling breathing on the backs of their necks. This is an increased feeling of paranoia and is more distracting than her basic level attack. Stronger characters can still shake or ignore this feeling, but it is more difficult.

Sweenys_Revenge

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 14, 2021 9:19 pm


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APPROVED

MAJOR REVISION
Character Name: Deneb/Richelsdorfite
Reason for Revision: corruption/minor rewording of attack effects
Link to Old Profile: here
Link to Revised Profile: here
PostPosted: Thu Nov 18, 2021 2:41 pm


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APPROVED

MINOR REVISION
Character Name: Super Sailor Hydor
Reason for Revision: Upgrading his eternal!
Revisions Requested:

Old Eternal:
Quote:
Eternal Sailor Attack: Hydor's Cyclone!
Hydor whirls a finger above his head and points it at an enemy. This enemy will find themselves entrapped in a mesocyclone. It's humid, rainy, and a bit chillier than it was. The pressure within the mesocyclone is rather low, resulting in the enemy feeling effects that people may feel associated with severely low pressure, especially after a rapid drop -- headaches, joint pain, lowered blood pressure. The enemy can attempt to exit the cyclone, but the clouds around them rotate rapidly due to strong gusts, making it difficult to escape. Anyone else in a close radius near them will also find themselves trapped within the cyclone.
Uses: 1 use per battle
Duration: 45 seconds
Range: 10ft radius


New Eternal:
Quote:
Eternal Sailor Attack: Cyclonic Genesis!
Hydor raises both his hands into the air, summoning a gust of wind around a point. All targets within a fifteen-foot radius around this point will find themselves wrapped up in an individual cyclone. It's very humid, rainy, and chillier than it was. The pressure within the mesocyclone is very low, resulting in the enemy feeling effects that people may feel associated with severely low pressure, especially after a rapid drop -- dizziness, headaches, joint pain, and lowered blood pressure. At player discretion, they can also utilize the deeper effects of very low pressure (examples: restriction on breathing, nausea/vomiting, and fatigue/fainting). The target can attempt to escape their cyclone, but the clouds around them rotate rapidly due to strong gusts, making it difficult to escape. These cyclones may pick up items nearby and fling them around, perhaps at the targets within, perhaps at those surrounding.
Uses: 1 use per battle
Duration: 45 seconds
Range: 15ft radius

Seiana_ZI

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Daekie

Stellar Wildcat

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 18, 2021 7:37 pm


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APPROVED

(I'm probably going to be doing these in bursts throughout the week, given two-possibly-three other characters still need rewrites, but I figured I'd get the first three officially up for judgement.)
MAJOR REVISION
Character Name: Clementine Drew / Sailor Onnie
Reason for Revision: Aged up + personality changed a bit, magic rework
Link to Old Profile: here
Link to Revised Profile: here

MAJOR REVISION
Character Name: Poppy Anania | Corrupt Chrysocolla of Moods
Reason for Revision: Profile rewrite & magic rework
Link to Old Profile: here
Link to Revised Profile: here

MAJOR REVISION
Character Name: Lily-Rose Loughlin / DMS Juliet of Whiteouts
Reason for Revision: Character has been out of play for a few years & went to therapy in the meantime.
Link to Old Profile: here
Link to Revised Profile: here
PostPosted: Fri Nov 19, 2021 11:32 pm


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APPROVED

MAJOR REVISION
Character Name: Super Sailor Hydor
Reason for Revision: I wrote his profile in 2010 for his quest originally and finally felt the motivation to update it 💯
Link to Old Profile: Here
Link to New Profile: Here

Seiana_ZI

Codebreaking Conversationalist


Sunshine Alouette

Eternal Senshi

PostPosted: Sun Nov 21, 2021 9:16 am


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APPROVED

MINOR REVISION
Character Name: Lieutenant Roselite
Reason for Revision: His weapon progression is kinda pathetic and therefore no bueno and he only needs one more battle before upgrading so I figured I might as well take care of that now.
Revisions Requested:

Old progression:
Quote:
Lieutenant – A dinky butter knife
Captain – A letter opener (What??? Me, what was you thinking???? Why???)
General – A Misericorde, a.k.a a Mercy Giver. (Better, but also would be even more better as a Captain weapon.)


New progression:
Quote:
Lieutenant – A dinky butter knife.
Captain – A Misericorde.
General – An Estoc, used primarily for thrusting/poking, but a good hit from the blunt edges can still hurt.
PostPosted: Sun Nov 21, 2021 6:32 pm


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APPROVED

MAJOR REVISION
Character Name: Corrupt Sailor Mizuki
Reason for Revision: She was forcefully corrupted
Link to Old Profile: [ Old ]
Link to Revised Profile:[ New ]


a-disgruntled-dragon



Noir Songbird
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 27, 2021 1:18 am


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APPROVED

MAJOR REVISION
Character Name: Sailor Guinevere, Senshi of Obsession
Reason for Revision: Meta forced corruption!
Link to Old Profile: [x]
Link to Revised Profile: [x]
PostPosted: Sun Nov 28, 2021 12:56 pm


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APPROVED

MAJOR REVISION
Character Name: Idrialite -> Ile d'If of Saturn
Reason for Revision: Purification!
Link to Old Profile: [x]
Link to Revised Profile: [x]

Noir Songbird
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