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Addicted to TEARS
The sweet salty addiction SMACKS a grin on my face.
The sensational sorrow of the moment,
the release of a thousand tears.
Aggressively crying myself dizzy.
Spiraling
Spinning
SPILLING...
BLOOD!
Crouching in a puddle of ruby red blood,
my leaking arms feeding the puddle
more and more.
The SILENT SCREAMS on my arms cause me to cry more,
Crying myself to Death...
- by dutchbrosdude |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/25/2009 |
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- Title: Adicted to Tears
- Artist: dutchbrosdude
- Description: Well The tears part is a cover up for the word cut or cutting, and if you read it with replacing the word then it makes more sense. I wanted it to be a kind of mystery though. Tell me what you think of it (be honest) and please leave me some suggestions so i can improve. ^_^
- Date: 04/25/2009
- Tags: cutting crying poem emotional depressing
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Kitsune_Chibi_madness - 04/27/2009
- very nice, if i cut it would be difficult not to drink it...it may sound wierd but blood makes me sleepy ^-^ and i dont want blood in my hair XD
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- dutchbrosdude - 04/25/2009
- Ya I get that alot =I
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- mrlemonhead - 04/25/2009
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You're a freak
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- xXClickAndDieXx - 04/25/2009
- great poem
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