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- | Submitted on 03/24/2009 |
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- Title: Lunar's first date with Jude.
- Artist: xxx_Adoring_Maybe_xxx
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Description:
OH MY GOSH!
Kerstin,What shall I were?
Kerstin:Wow that dress makes you look like a PROM QUEEN!.
Your totally right Kerstin I am so wearing it.
Kerstin:Crystal?
Yes Kerstin?
Kerstin:Good luck on your first date.
Aw thanks Kerstin!
TO BE CONTINUED! - Date: 03/24/2009
- Tags: lunars first date withjude
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Catarina Una - 04/04/2009
- o.o i couldn't understand the story that much. . . it seems rushed. like she knew she was going on a date and just threw something together. the pink sleeves. >.>
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- loveheart93 - 04/04/2009
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Colors don't match, gloves out of place, beads just shoved in there and I agree with the others your grammar is appalling sorry and there really isn't a story here, besides seems overly self centered don't you think?
One more thing make her SMILE if it's her first date confused - Report As Spam
- Luna The Scarred - 04/02/2009
- Really simple, but not terrible. The story is cute, but should be better written.
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- MisokaDemonFox - 03/31/2009
- like ohmygod kerstin we're like such 14 year old like wannabes and like this entire like outfit like totally sucks and like i entered it like in the arenas like anyway even though like i knew like everyone would like rate it a 1/5
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- snowbelle3 - 03/30/2009
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total confusion.
It just looks like some girl. And your grammar usage is diminutive in your 'story'.
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- iiRawryou_x - 03/29/2009
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horrible grammar.
"What shall I were?"
seriously?!?!?!?
like omfg.
grade one much?
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