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No one seems to know why some people get picked or why they are brought to this world in the first place. All are different from eachother, tall, short, skinny, fat, shy, temperamental, well know actor, the everyday clerk.... the list goes on and on!
There are only 2 things that seem constant. A strange item the person gets so attached to and the opening of a portal when there's no one around!!!
Then they suddenly find themselves in a strange, medieval world, where all modern comodities are an alien thing, and soon afterwards the so dreaded changes, with all the superstition and persecution that follows

In this horror based setting where people lose all of their normal lives to be set in a world where no confort exists besides those who suffer the same fate and try their best to survive, we are looking for realistic, unique, original characters to bring this place to life
By that we don't mean someone who masters 30 different fighting styles at the handsome age of 20, speaks 10 different languages fluently and a sinless, pure heart to match is saphire blue eyes and marvelous golden hair. Nor do we want the stereotypical cheerleader who has more beauty than brains and the perfect body to match

We want "normal" people who are interesting because of all those little quirks that makes them human, people who could live in our own world before getting targeted by those who bring them to this place
It will be part of the job of the staff to look at your character, and the creature he/she will become, and tell if they are ready to be part of this setting

Note that we will be giving honest critics and point out the details we think are not fir enough. It's not mandatory for you to receive the seal of aproval, but it helps knowing if you are ready or not to be brought in
We are not building your character for you however. Please only use this thread once you think you are ready to be submited for aproval

Notes
- No unnatural hair or eye color, or anything similar The person can arrive with dyed hair or such, but even if he/she has an extra bottle those features will eventually fade away
- Only human characters Animals aren't being brought in and there aren't any creatures in our own world
- No "perfect" characters Everyone has flaws and that's what makes people interesting and the rps challenging. Besides perfection is boring and a clear sign of lack of imagination
- Avoid hybrids Such as anthro dragons or winged centaurs. There's plenty more to chose from
- No human like creatures Such as elves or vampires. There's no much point in paying for a transformation when only a slight part of your body changes. And there are plot reasons for that as well
- No heavily magic dependent creaturesSuch as djinns or demons. Magic here doesn't work the same way you'll find in other rps

Official Critique Request

Username: Blythe Dautry / Kaho-kun
Character's name: Blythe Dautry
Creature: Cryo-sphinx
Quest Thread: Cold Begets Cold

Official Critique Request

Username: Nikorasu-kun
Character's name: Jamie Lewis
Creature: Faun
Quest Thread: Here

I've got writer block at the moment, so any critique on Jamie in general and thoughts on what i should add would be helpful.

I can't find anything wrong with your character. She's very well developed and the elements fit her perfectly. She's really fiery in the cold sense. I like that approach xd

So I am honored to present you with the seal of approval whee

A quite interesting character, but there isn't much information for us to go on
True there isn't much background to write for a 13 year old, but one thing you could explain in more detail is why he likes to do things so much. Was it something he was taught at a young age, or did he decide on his own after some event? Little things like that can offer some interesting perspectives on your character 3nodding
You can also write about his relationship with his family and the few friends he has. And give more detail on the pets. Often they're a good way to tell more about the type of character he is

Other thing we need to know about is the pukka. What is it, how did he get it and why that object in particular. We could use some reasons for the faun as well, why that creature in particular
As for the elements, what you wrote isn't enough to tell if they match him or not. Try elaborate his personality some more, or give more details of what types of things he likes or not, type of clothing, etc

Official Critique Request

Username: Captain Kidd1
Character's name: carlos jose garcia
Creature: Quetzalcoatl(the snake)
Quest Thread: a little to close to home

Official Critique Request

Username: Samurai Jack1
Character's name: carlos jose garcia
Creature: Nidhogg
Quest Thread: big dragon eek

2nd attempt mrgreen

Official Critique Request

Username: Elizabeth-Stevens
Character's name: Elizabeth Stevens
Creature:dryad/gargoyle
Quest Thread: Waring traumas

I know its not perfect but its overall finished in basic info and explanations. <.< >.>