█HAIR ▬ Red █CLOTHING ▬ Varied █ACCESSORIES ▬ █EYES ▬ Icy Blue █BUILD ▬ Athletic █TATTOOS ▬ She has a series of tribal style chevrons running down her spine numbering 30 in total, marking the number of successful hunts she's been on. It isn't so much a cultural practice from home so much as one within her family. █SCARS ▬ █MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES ▬
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Muay Thai Boxing, █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Adaptation. She also possesses an aptitude for adapting her combat style when facing others. █Other Talents ▬ Elevation Adaptability. She grew up in and around mountains and is used to high elevations as well as often changing elevation. Climbing - She was born and raised in the mountains and has a natural talent with climbing. █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Swordsmanship █Weakest Skill ▬ She has absolutely horrible eyesight. She's effectively legally blind without corrective lenses. She usually wears contacts, but, finds them uncomfortable and distracting and will often revert to glasses when she needs to focus. In addition, her eyesight is slow to adjust to sudden dramatic changes in light levels, leaving her effectively blinded for 1 post. Or, indefinitely while facing the source if it is a strobing light source.
█Other Skills ▬ Cooking, Tracking, Herbalism (Identification and use of plants)
█LIKES █ ▬ Drinking games █ ▬ Anyone lively and entertaining █ ▬ Black and White Pudding Served with stewed potatoes, boiled Egg, and Mutton rashers with sweet Soda Bread █ ▬ Handmade wood figurines █ ▬ Cats █DISLIKES █ ▬ Anyone who is full of shite █ ▬ Sour things █ ▬ Anything slimy or sticky █ ▬ Bugs █ ▬ She suffers from Arachnophobia. It isn't bad enough to paralyze her, but, it is enough to make her falter or act rashly. █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ She is an energetic and headstrong individual who enjoys a good time and a challenge. While appearing brazen, she does in fact think prior to action. Confident and determined, she knows her limits and if backing down is the better course of action, she will do so without any complaint. She does believe in being fair and honest with others and will admit when she feels they got her outmatched without remorse. But, she isn't naive enough to expect the same in return. █Vernacular ▬ She's a run of the mill common girl. Not some poverty-stricken street urchin or wealthy aristocratic girl and possesses neither a formal nor overly crass way of speaking, though, she does possess a strong accent and does have a tendency to use phrases common back home, but, not so much in Vale. (Northern Irish) █Positive Traits ▬ She is a fair and honest person. She isn't the type to lie to someone and is considerate about how they may take it. █Negative Traits ▬ She can be a bit eager to show off and take a challenge if she sees the possibility of coming back out of it at all, regardless of if she's certain she'll win or not
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ Aoibheann grew up in a small village on the border of the kingdom of Vale. Long since cut off from the rest of the kingdom, it survived due to the remote location in a mountain valley. Easily defendable and with a surplus of game and rich crop fields, it became self-sufficient. It was only recently that they managed to get a steady line back to the capital and trade began to flow again. Due to the relative small size of the community and the abundance of resources, many residents worked multiple jobs, ranging from mining ores and dust in the mountain side, to tending and harvesting crops out in the fields, even to guard and patrol duty as well and medical treatment of the injured or ill. As such, she grew up with a bit of knowledge in everything her village offered. Her family wasn't remarkable in any way really. A hard working father who cared for his three daughters and wife and four sons, her mother who worked as an instructor at the local school, two younger sisters who worked the fields with others and attended to bar in the evenings, serving food and drink, and four elder brothers who held a variety of jobs though all joined the town militia officially. But, Aoibheann was far too bored by life in the village. When younger, she showed an unusual interest in sports and talent when getting into playful brawls with the other kids, often coming out the victor despite most of them being with boys who were older and bigger than her. When she was eight, she had been wandering around the woods and encountered a boardbatusk on it's own. It, of course, attacked her, though, she managed to keep away of it's strikes, if only barely. She managed to get backed to a cliff edge, the stone wall cutting off her retreat, but, she noticed how the creature attacked and baited it into charging. She managed to get it to slam into the rocks, stunning it, and was about to attack the exposed underside with a sharp rock when a spear flew out of nowhere, slaying it. The captain of the guard had shown up and commended her on her ability, revealing he used to be a Huntsman and suggested she had potential. From that day on, she took up training under his guidance for the following twelve years. Following his passing, she set out towards Beacon to further her training.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Cloidem █ ▬ It's a telescopic sword with a blade that can extend six inches past it's base form and a hilt that can extend three inches. The primary form is that of a hand-and-a-half sword. The Hilt is hollow and capable of housing a dust crystal with intricate carved grooves along the blade that allow it to utilize the elemental properties of the dust currently equipped. (5 post duration/crystal)
The blade itself it is functionally hollow, with two folding blades on one side. With the press of a switch, they fold open and the blade slides along the guard to expose a rifle barrel.
█Melee Form ▬ Hand and a half sword █Ranged Form ▬ Semi-Auto .308 rifle (10 round mag) █Other Form(s) ▬ Greatsword █Ammo Type ▬ Physical █ ▬ She has to eject any crystal from the hilt in order to swap to rifle mode.
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ Hunting Knife █ ▬ .45 Semi Auto Pistol with 15 round mag █ ▬ Multi-functional Survival Shovel. Usable as a telescopic shovel, but can be used as a hand saw, hand axe, multiple hunting spear head attachments, with pointed base used as a hand-pick. █ITEMS █ ▬ Scroll █ ▬ Medallion from her parents █ ▬ Her Mentor's ring
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Aegis Skin █*AURA COLOR ▬ Green █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ Her Aura is visible when her semblance is activated and shifts around her constantly, creating a fluid-like barrier around her. This barrier protects her from most injuries, though, the physical force of blows does pass through. █*LEVEL 0 ▬ Once activated, the barrier surrounds her, almost negating the effects of piercing and slashing attacks, though, it does not keep them from hitting her, meaning she does experience the physical force behind them. She can maintain the barrier up to 4 posts. 1:2 cooldown. █*LEVEL 1▬ At this stage, the barrier takes on the ability to nullify a portion (Half as effective) of basic elemental damage as well. Wind, Water, Fire, Earth, Lightning. In addition, she can maintain the barrier up to 5 posts. 1:2 cooldown. █*LEVEL 2▬ At second stage, more complex elements are also partially nullified. Gravity, Ice, Plant, Steam, Hard Light. Post extension to 6. 1:2 cooldown. █*LEVEL 3 ▬ At the final stage, her barrier can absorb a portion of elemental attacks rather than simply partially nullifying them and incorporate them into it's defense. 1:2 cooldown. █*DRAWBACKS ▬ Up until the final stage and specifically with the utilization of Hard Light dust being used, this barrier is completely useless against physical impact. She is effectively immune to something piercing her or cutting her with this up, however, until that very specific point, the physical force will still pass through. A sword strike won't cut, but it will be like hitting her with a metal stick, or a bullet/arrow won't pierce, but, it will be like the butt of a metal rod striking her. Furthermore, Aura attacks can bypass the barrier if the fight drags on too long or she is running out of steam. It also requires an insane number of calories to keep using the semblance. While she doesn't have a set limit to the number of times she can use it in a day, it is restricted to how often she can replenish the calories needed to fuel it. For each 3 posts of cumulative use, she burns the caloric equivalent of a full meal, requiring her to eat more. After 10 posts of cumulative use per day, her barrier starts to weaken to aura attacks.
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VJammer || Aoibheann Dunn
█ █ ╫ C O R E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Aoibheann Dunn █*AGE ▬ 21 █*FACTION ▬ ℣ale █*ROLE ▬ Student █*SEX ▬ Female █*SPECIES ▬ Human
█*CURRENT TEAM ▬ (Leave blank if you do not have a team yet) █*PARTNER(S) ▬ (Teammates, if you have any) █NICKNAME(S) ▬ Eve, Eevee █OCCUPATION ▬ Student, Freelancer
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ 5'10" █WEIGHT ▬ 145
█HAIR ▬ Red █CLOTHING ▬ Varied █ACCESSORIES ▬ █EYES ▬ Icy Blue █BUILD ▬ Athletic █TATTOOS ▬ █SCARS ▬ █MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES ▬
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Sizing someone up. She has an uncanny gift for determining a broad idea of someone's capabilities by looking at them. How they likely fight, their strong points in combat, their role, their shortcomings. This comes from her observations of a person and little else, often formed on the spot. █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Adaptation. She also possesses an aptitude for adapting her combat style when facing others. █Other Talents ▬ Martial Arts. She is proficient in multiple forms or martial arts, including Judo, Krav Maga, Jiu Jitsu, Muay Thai Boxing, Wing Chun Kung Fu, and a handful of disciplines from other styles. A Master in None, she is still quite proficient in the ones she knows. She is also a capable swordsman with extensive training in the use of both one-handed and two-handed swords. █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Her adaptability has proven to be her greatest strength. allowing her to switch things up to better handle a variety of situations. █Weakest Skill ▬ She is just a human, as still young. While she has the stamina to fight, her endurance and physical strength are not exceptionally high. She relies more on precision and speed to fight, meaning it isn't overly difficult to outpower her and while she can take a hit, many others can withstand far greater blows far easier than her. █Other Skills ▬ (Pick up to 3)
█LIKES █ ▬ Drinking games █ ▬ Anyone lively and entertaining █ ▬ Black and White Pudding Served with stewed potatoes, boiled Egg, and Mutton rashers with sweet Soda Bread █ ▬ Handmade wood figurines █ ▬ Cats █DISLIKES █ ▬ Anyone who is full of shite █ ▬ Sour things █ ▬ Anything slimy or sticky █ ▬ Bugs █ ▬ She suffers from Aracnophobia. It isn't bad enough to paralyze her, but, it is enough to make her falter or act rashly. █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ She is an energetic and headstrong individual who enjoys a good time and a challenge. While appearing brazen, she does in fact think prior to action. Confident and determined, she possesses a strong will, but doesn't really fall to pride. She knows her limits and if backing down is the better course of action, she will do so without any complaint. She does believe in being fair and honest with others and will admit when she feels they got her outmatched without remorse. But, she isn't naive enough to expect the same in return. █Vernacular ▬ She's a run of the mill common girl. Not some poverty-stricked street urchin or wealthy aristocratic girl and possesses neither a formal nor overly crass way of speaking, though, she does possess a strong accent. (Northern Irish) █Positive Traits ▬ She is a fair and honest person. She isn't the type to lie to someone and is considerate about how they may take it. █Negative Traits ▬ She can be a bit eager to show off and take a challenge if she sees the possibility of coming back out of it at all, regardless of if she's certain she'll win or not
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ Aoibheann grew up in a small village on the border of the kingdom of Vale. Long since cut off from the rest of the kingdom, it survived due to the remote location in a mountain valley. Easily defendable and with a surplus of game and rich crop fields, it became self-sufficient. It was only recently that they managed to get a steady line back to the capital and trade began to flow again. Due to the relative small size of the community and the abundance of resources, many residents worked multiple jobs, ranging from mining ores and dust in the mountain side, to tending and harvesting crops out in the fields, even to guard and patrol duty as well and medical treatment of the injured or ill. As such, she grew up with a bit of knowledge in everything her village offered. Her family wasn't remarkable in any way really. A hard working father who cared for his three daughters and wife, her mother who worked as an instructor at the local school, two younger sisters who worked the fields with others and attended to bar in the evenings, serving food and drink. But, Aoibheann was far too bored by life in the village. When younger, she showed an unusual interest in sports and talent when getting into playful brawls with the other kids, often coming out the victor despite most of them being with boys who were older and bigger than her. When she was eight, she had been wandering around the woods and encountered a boardbatusk on it's own. It, of course, attacked her, though, she managed to keep away of it's strikes, if only barely. She managed to get backed to a cliff edge, the stone wall cutting off her retreat, but, she noticed how the creature attacked and baited it into charging. She managed to get it to slam into the rocks, stunning it, and was about to attack the exposed underside with a sharp rock when a spear flew out of nowhere, slaying it. The captain of the guard had shown up and commended her on her ability, revealing he used to be a Huntsman and suggested she had potential. From that day on, she took up training under his guidance for the following twelve years. Following his passing, she set out towards Beacon to further her training.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Cloidem █ ▬ It's a telescopic sword with a blade that can extend six inches past it's base form and a hilt that can extend three inches. The primary form is that of a hand-and-a-half sword. The Hilt is hollow and capable of hosing a dust crystal with intricate carved grooves along the blade that allow it to utilize the elemental properties of the dust currently equipped. █Melee Form ▬ Hand and a half sword █Ranged Form ▬ Semi-Auto .308 rifle (10 round mag) █Other Form(s) ▬ Greatsword █Ammo Type ▬ Physical █ ▬ She has to eject any crystal from the hilt in order to swap to rifle mode. And while the elemental attacks of the sword equipped with a crystal can be used at range, the range is only about fifteen feet or so.
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ Hunting Knife █ ▬ .45 Semi Auto Pistol with 15 round mag █ ▬ █ITEMS █ ▬ Scroll █ ▬ Medallion from her parents █ ▬ Her Mentor's ring
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Aegis Skin █*AURA COLOR ▬ Green █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ Her Aura is visible when her semblance is activated and shifts around her constantly, creating a fluid-like barrier around her. This barrier protects her from most injuries, though, the physical force of blows does pass through. █*LEVEL 0 ▬ Once activated, the barrier surrounds her, almost negating the effects of piercing and slashing attacks, though, it does not keep them from hitting her, meaning she does experience the physical force behind them. She can maintain the barrier up to 5 posts. 1:2 cooldown. █*LEVEL 1▬ At this stage, the barrier takes on the ability to nullify a portion (Half as effective) of basic elemental damage as well. Wind, Water, Fire, Earth, Lightning. In addition, she can maintain the barrier up to 6 posts. █*LEVEL 2▬ At second stage, more complex elements are also partially nullified. Gravity, Ice, Plant, Steam, Hard Light. Post extension to seven. █*LEVEL 3 ▬ At the final stage, her barrier can absorb a portion of elemental attacks rather than simply partially nullifying them and incorporate them into it's defense. █*DRAWBACKS ▬ Up until the final stage and specifically with the utilization of Hard Light dust being used, this barrier is completely useless against physical impact. She is effectively immune to something piercing her or cutting her with this up, however, until that very specific point, the physical force will still pass through. A sword strike won't cut, but it will be like hitting her with a metal stick, or a bullet/arrow won't pierce, but, it will be like the butt of a metal rod striking her. Furthermore, Aura attacks can bypass the barrier if the fight drags on too long or she is running out of steam. It also requires an insane number of calories to keep using the semblance. While she doesn't have a set limit to the number of times she can use it in a day, it is restricted to how often she can replenish the calories needed to fuel it.
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✘ Judge, Jury, and Executioner ▄ ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ ▄ Greetings, it seems unfortunately for you I shall be your judge this evening. Whether that bodes good or ill all depends on your cooperation. I shall review the file I have on you to ensure you have filled it out adequately; that you are neither underselling yourself nor overestimating your ability. Once I am satisfied, you may proceed on with your life. Until then, you are left under my rules and whims. And subject to any number of questionings for an undetermined amount of time. For your sake, I do hope you were accurate and of right state of mind when you filled out this form. If not, we may be here for quite a while. So, without further ado, let us begin this assessment and see what you, Dunn, are truly capable of...and who you truly are.
I find your primary talent curious, indeed. To be able to learn so much about a person at a simple glance; their strengths, their weaknesses, fighting style and all. It is an invaluable talent to have for battle; to be able to almost predict and counter act an opponent before they are able to pull something off. To know what they are more likely to do, how to prepare, and take advantage of it all from a simple glance. Many fail to reach such skill, as it is prized for a fighter. Even for myself, I am only able to glean things so with my semblance. As such…I find it hard you are able to do all this at a mere glance.
Moving on, I see you lack understanding of what the weakest skill is on the form. That is fine, but I shall correct you on it. This is a weakness of yours that can be exploited, pure and simple. Being average at something, as everything you listed here is, would not a weakness. Strangely, you even say your fighting style relies on speed and precision but you lack speed as a talent of your own there. There is a significant difference, for example, in being weak or having an average strength. So rather than keep the bravado and bluster and lacking a weakness, I ask you to be honest and list your weakness here to make this process go smoother.
Onto my final point for now, your weapon. I merely have two things I need explained for it. The first is how it allocates/ uses dust and if you are sure about the type you are using. Different weapons can channel it for different lengths, depending too on the type used, and as such that should be known. The latter part…is the weapon itself. I am curious to see how it can shift between telescopic sword to gun. I have seen guns and swords before, that part is nothing new, but depending on the telescopic sword as that is much rarer and how that factors into its transformation…is something I am not familiar with. So please, enlighten me below in your description of it for how it transforms.
Judgement
∰- Core
∰- Age: As stated in the profile rules section, students are between the ages of 16-20 when enrolling. She is too old to be a student. Please change the age or the role.
∰- Archetype
∰- Primary talent: This is like meta game the talent. The closest things we have to this that is accepted was a semblance that specifically focuses on learning about opponents. Insight is a possibility, but guessing everyone’s strength and weaknesses by sight alone on the spot…No. This will not work.
∰- Martial arts other talent: These are waaaay to many. You can only have 1 for talent or skill. So if you want more, you can move some to other skills.
∰- Strongest skill: What do you mean by switch things up with this adaptability? Mainly because you already have adaptation as a bonus talent
∰- Weakest skill: You have not stated a weakness here. You’ve said she is average at everything, relies on speed and precision (which she has no talent for speed). But nowhere did you say, she is bad at this. Because average strength, in example, is not the same as weak. And not being able to take a hit as much as some others, when her semblance is to tank hits….
∰- Nature: So you know, strong will is an actual talent. Not something for flavor to describe the character. Please remove unless you add it as a talent/ skill.
∰- Inventory
∰- Primary weapon: - How long does dust last for it? If it is a dust crystal, you only have 3 to use. - How does it transform from simple telescopic sword to a semi auto .308 rifle? - https://youtu.be/IVkOC6CJN-g (Video I found on a telescopic sword…which im having trouble seeing turn into the semi auto rifle)
∰- Semblance
∰- I will be getting to this next round.
∰-Conclusion
This is all I currently see the need to change/ be clarified for now. This does not mean it shall be the end of it, as more questions may arise as we progress and I may have missed something. I am willing to be flexible on some things if given good reason to, and i'll be open for any discussion you have or if you need any help with this. Thank you for your taking the time to go through this, and I will post another judgement once we've gone through all this. Hopefully this will not take more than one or two more judgements, and you can fully begin your adventure in beacon...whether pleasant or otherwise. Feel free to contact me at any point... just send a message with the crows. ✘ Status: Inquiring ▄ ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ ▄
█HAIR ▬ Red █CLOTHING ▬ Varied █ACCESSORIES ▬ █EYES ▬ Icy Blue █BUILD ▬ Athletic █TATTOOS ▬ She has a series of tribal style chevrons running down her spine numbering 30 in total, marking the number of successful hunts she's been on. It isn't so much a cultural practice from home so much as one within her family. █SCARS ▬ █MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES ▬
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Elevation Adaptability. She grew up in and around mountains and is used to high elevations as well as often changing elevation. █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Adaptation. She also possesses an aptitude for adapting her combat style when facing others. █Other Talents ▬ Muay Thai Boxing, She is also a capable swordsman with extensive training in the use of both one-handed and two-handed swords. █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Swordsmanship █Weakest Skill ▬ She has absolutely horrible eyesight. She's effectively legally blind without corrective lenses. She usually wears contacts, but, finds them uncomfortable and distracting and will often revert to glasses when she needs to focus. █Other Skills ▬ Cooking, Tracking, Herbalism (Identification and use of plants)
█LIKES █ ▬ Drinking games █ ▬ Anyone lively and entertaining █ ▬ Black and White Pudding Served with stewed potatoes, boiled Egg, and Mutton rashers with sweet Soda Bread █ ▬ Handmade wood figurines █ ▬ Cats █DISLIKES █ ▬ Anyone who is full of shite █ ▬ Sour things █ ▬ Anything slimy or sticky █ ▬ Bugs █ ▬ She suffers from Arachnophobia. It isn't bad enough to paralyze her, but, it is enough to make her falter or act rashly. █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ She is an energetic and headstrong individual who enjoys a good time and a challenge. While appearing brazen, she does in fact think prior to action. Confident and determined, she knows her limits and if backing down is the better course of action, she will do so without any complaint. She does believe in being fair and honest with others and will admit when she feels they got her outmatched without remorse. But, she isn't naive enough to expect the same in return. █Vernacular ▬ She's a run of the mill common girl. Not some poverty-stricken street urchin or wealthy aristocratic girl and possesses neither a formal nor overly crass way of speaking, though, she does possess a strong accent and does have a tendency to use phrases common back home, but, not so much in Vale. (Northern Irish) █Positive Traits ▬ She is a fair and honest person. She isn't the type to lie to someone and is considerate about how they may take it. █Negative Traits ▬ She can be a bit eager to show off and take a challenge if she sees the possibility of coming back out of it at all, regardless of if she's certain she'll win or not
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ Aoibheann grew up in a small village on the border of the kingdom of Vale. Long since cut off from the rest of the kingdom, it survived due to the remote location in a mountain valley. Easily defendable and with a surplus of game and rich crop fields, it became self-sufficient. It was only recently that they managed to get a steady line back to the capital and trade began to flow again. Due to the relative small size of the community and the abundance of resources, many residents worked multiple jobs, ranging from mining ores and dust in the mountain side, to tending and harvesting crops out in the fields, even to guard and patrol duty as well and medical treatment of the injured or ill. As such, she grew up with a bit of knowledge in everything her village offered. Her family wasn't remarkable in any way really. A hard working father who cared for his three daughters and wife, her mother who worked as an instructor at the local school, two younger sisters who worked the fields with others and attended to bar in the evenings, serving food and drink. But, Aoibheann was far too bored by life in the village. When younger, she showed an unusual interest in sports and talent when getting into playful brawls with the other kids, often coming out the victor despite most of them being with boys who were older and bigger than her. When she was eight, she had been wandering around the woods and encountered a boardbatusk on it's own. It, of course, attacked her, though, she managed to keep away of it's strikes, if only barely. She managed to get backed to a cliff edge, the stone wall cutting off her retreat, but, she noticed how the creature attacked and baited it into charging. She managed to get it to slam into the rocks, stunning it, and was about to attack the exposed underside with a sharp rock when a spear flew out of nowhere, slaying it. The captain of the guard had shown up and commended her on her ability, revealing he used to be a Huntsman and suggested she had potential. From that day on, she took up training under his guidance for the following twelve years. Following his passing, she set out towards Beacon to further her training.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Cloidem █ ▬ It's a telescopic sword with a blade that can extend six inches past it's base form and a hilt that can extend three inches. The primary form is that of a hand-and-a-half sword. The Hilt is hollow and capable of housing a dust crystal with intricate carved grooves along the blade that allow it to utilize the elemental properties of the dust currently equipped. (5 post duration/crystal)
The blade itself it is functionally hollow, with two folding blades on one side. With the press of a switch, they fold open and the blade slides along the guard to expose a rifle barrel.
█Melee Form ▬ Hand and a half sword █Ranged Form ▬ Semi-Auto .308 rifle (10 round mag) █Other Form(s) ▬ Greatsword █Ammo Type ▬ Physical █ ▬ She has to eject any crystal from the hilt in order to swap to rifle mode.
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ Hunting Knife █ ▬ .45 Semi Auto Pistol with 15 round mag █ ▬ Multi-functional Survival Shovel. Usable as a telescopic shovel, but can be used as a hand saw, hand axe, multiple hunting spear head attachments, with pointed base used as a hand-pick. █ITEMS █ ▬ Scroll █ ▬ Medallion from her parents █ ▬ Her Mentor's ring
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Aegis Skin █*AURA COLOR ▬ Green █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ Her Aura is visible when her semblance is activated and shifts around her constantly, creating a fluid-like barrier around her. This barrier protects her from most injuries, though, the physical force of blows does pass through. █*LEVEL 0 ▬ Once activated, the barrier surrounds her, almost negating the effects of piercing and slashing attacks, though, it does not keep them from hitting her, meaning she does experience the physical force behind them. She can maintain the barrier up to 4 posts. 1:2 cooldown. █*LEVEL 1▬ At this stage, the barrier takes on the ability to nullify a portion (Half as effective) of basic elemental damage as well. Wind, Water, Fire, Earth, Lightning. In addition, she can maintain the barrier up to 5 posts. 1:2 cooldown. █*LEVEL 2▬ At second stage, more complex elements are also partially nullified. Gravity, Ice, Plant, Steam, Hard Light. Post extension to 6. 1:2 cooldown. █*LEVEL 3 ▬ At the final stage, her barrier can absorb a portion of elemental attacks rather than simply partially nullifying them and incorporate them into it's defense. 1:2 cooldown. █*DRAWBACKS ▬ Up until the final stage and specifically with the utilization of Hard Light dust being used, this barrier is completely useless against physical impact. She is effectively immune to something piercing her or cutting her with this up, however, until that very specific point, the physical force will still pass through. A sword strike won't cut, but it will be like hitting her with a metal stick, or a bullet/arrow won't pierce, but, it will be like the butt of a metal rod striking her. Furthermore, Aura attacks can bypass the barrier if the fight drags on too long or she is running out of steam. It also requires an insane number of calories to keep using the semblance. While she doesn't have a set limit to the number of times she can use it in a day, it is restricted to how often she can replenish the calories needed to fuel it. For each 3 posts of cumulative use, she burns the caloric equivalent of a full meal, requiring her to eat more. After 10 posts of cumulative use per day, her barrier starts to weaken to aura attacks.
█HAIR ▬ Red █CLOTHING ▬ Varied █ACCESSORIES ▬ █EYES ▬ Icy Blue █BUILD ▬ Athletic █TATTOOS ▬ She has a series of tribal style chevrons running down her spine numbering 30 in total, marking the number of successful hunts she's been on. It isn't so much a cultural practice from home so much as one within her family. █SCARS ▬ █MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES ▬
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Muay Thai Boxing, She is also a capable swordsman with extensive training in the use of both one-handed and two-handed swords. █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Adaptation. She also possesses an aptitude for adapting her combat style when facing others. █Other Talents ▬ Elevation Adaptability. She grew up in and around mountains and is used to high elevations as well as often changing elevation. Climbing - She was born and raised in the mountains and has a natural talent with climbing. █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Swordsmanship █Weakest Skill ▬ She has absolutely horrible eyesight. She's effectively legally blind without corrective lenses. She usually wears contacts, but, finds them uncomfortable and distracting and will often revert to glasses when she needs to focus. █Other Skills ▬ Cooking, Tracking, Herbalism (Identification and use of plants)
█LIKES █ ▬ Drinking games █ ▬ Anyone lively and entertaining █ ▬ Black and White Pudding Served with stewed potatoes, boiled Egg, and Mutton rashers with sweet Soda Bread █ ▬ Handmade wood figurines █ ▬ Cats █DISLIKES █ ▬ Anyone who is full of shite █ ▬ Sour things █ ▬ Anything slimy or sticky █ ▬ Bugs █ ▬ She suffers from Arachnophobia. It isn't bad enough to paralyze her, but, it is enough to make her falter or act rashly. █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ She is an energetic and headstrong individual who enjoys a good time and a challenge. While appearing brazen, she does in fact think prior to action. Confident and determined, she knows her limits and if backing down is the better course of action, she will do so without any complaint. She does believe in being fair and honest with others and will admit when she feels they got her outmatched without remorse. But, she isn't naive enough to expect the same in return. █Vernacular ▬ She's a run of the mill common girl. Not some poverty-stricken street urchin or wealthy aristocratic girl and possesses neither a formal nor overly crass way of speaking, though, she does possess a strong accent and does have a tendency to use phrases common back home, but, not so much in Vale. (Northern Irish) █Positive Traits ▬ She is a fair and honest person. She isn't the type to lie to someone and is considerate about how they may take it. █Negative Traits ▬ She can be a bit eager to show off and take a challenge if she sees the possibility of coming back out of it at all, regardless of if she's certain she'll win or not
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ Aoibheann grew up in a small village on the border of the kingdom of Vale. Long since cut off from the rest of the kingdom, it survived due to the remote location in a mountain valley. Easily defendable and with a surplus of game and rich crop fields, it became self-sufficient. It was only recently that they managed to get a steady line back to the capital and trade began to flow again. Due to the relative small size of the community and the abundance of resources, many residents worked multiple jobs, ranging from mining ores and dust in the mountain side, to tending and harvesting crops out in the fields, even to guard and patrol duty as well and medical treatment of the injured or ill. As such, she grew up with a bit of knowledge in everything her village offered. Her family wasn't remarkable in any way really. A hard working father who cared for his three daughters and wife, her mother who worked as an instructor at the local school, two younger sisters who worked the fields with others and attended to bar in the evenings, serving food and drink. But, Aoibheann was far too bored by life in the village. When younger, she showed an unusual interest in sports and talent when getting into playful brawls with the other kids, often coming out the victor despite most of them being with boys who were older and bigger than her. When she was eight, she had been wandering around the woods and encountered a boardbatusk on it's own. It, of course, attacked her, though, she managed to keep away of it's strikes, if only barely. She managed to get backed to a cliff edge, the stone wall cutting off her retreat, but, she noticed how the creature attacked and baited it into charging. She managed to get it to slam into the rocks, stunning it, and was about to attack the exposed underside with a sharp rock when a spear flew out of nowhere, slaying it. The captain of the guard had shown up and commended her on her ability, revealing he used to be a Huntsman and suggested she had potential. From that day on, she took up training under his guidance for the following twelve years. Following his passing, she set out towards Beacon to further her training.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Cloidem █ ▬ It's a telescopic sword with a blade that can extend six inches past it's base form and a hilt that can extend three inches. The primary form is that of a hand-and-a-half sword. The Hilt is hollow and capable of housing a dust crystal with intricate carved grooves along the blade that allow it to utilize the elemental properties of the dust currently equipped. (5 post duration/crystal)
The blade itself it is functionally hollow, with two folding blades on one side. With the press of a switch, they fold open and the blade slides along the guard to expose a rifle barrel.
█Melee Form ▬ Hand and a half sword █Ranged Form ▬ Semi-Auto .308 rifle (10 round mag) █Other Form(s) ▬ Greatsword █Ammo Type ▬ Physical █ ▬ She has to eject any crystal from the hilt in order to swap to rifle mode.
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ Hunting Knife █ ▬ .45 Semi Auto Pistol with 15 round mag █ ▬ Multi-functional Survival Shovel. Usable as a telescopic shovel, but can be used as a hand saw, hand axe, multiple hunting spear head attachments, with pointed base used as a hand-pick. █ITEMS █ ▬ Scroll █ ▬ Medallion from her parents █ ▬ Her Mentor's ring
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Aegis Skin █*AURA COLOR ▬ Green █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ Her Aura is visible when her semblance is activated and shifts around her constantly, creating a fluid-like barrier around her. This barrier protects her from most injuries, though, the physical force of blows does pass through. █*LEVEL 0 ▬ Once activated, the barrier surrounds her, almost negating the effects of piercing and slashing attacks, though, it does not keep them from hitting her, meaning she does experience the physical force behind them. She can maintain the barrier up to 4 posts. 1:2 cooldown. █*LEVEL 1▬ At this stage, the barrier takes on the ability to nullify a portion (Half as effective) of basic elemental damage as well. Wind, Water, Fire, Earth, Lightning. In addition, she can maintain the barrier up to 5 posts. 1:2 cooldown. █*LEVEL 2▬ At second stage, more complex elements are also partially nullified. Gravity, Ice, Plant, Steam, Hard Light. Post extension to 6. 1:2 cooldown. █*LEVEL 3 ▬ At the final stage, her barrier can absorb a portion of elemental attacks rather than simply partially nullifying them and incorporate them into it's defense. 1:2 cooldown. █*DRAWBACKS ▬ Up until the final stage and specifically with the utilization of Hard Light dust being used, this barrier is completely useless against physical impact. She is effectively immune to something piercing her or cutting her with this up, however, until that very specific point, the physical force will still pass through. A sword strike won't cut, but it will be like hitting her with a metal stick, or a bullet/arrow won't pierce, but, it will be like the butt of a metal rod striking her. Furthermore, Aura attacks can bypass the barrier if the fight drags on too long or she is running out of steam. It also requires an insane number of calories to keep using the semblance. While she doesn't have a set limit to the number of times she can use it in a day, it is restricted to how often she can replenish the calories needed to fuel it. For each 3 posts of cumulative use, she burns the caloric equivalent of a full meal, requiring her to eat more. After 10 posts of cumulative use per day, her barrier starts to weaken to aura attacks.
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Judgement:
Archetype:
1. Weakest skill: Please add another weakest skill for when she has contacts on. Given its hard to knock them out in a fight (as shown recently in combat class), and unless she forces herself to wear glasses every combat scenario, there needs to be something that can be exploited in a fight for while she has contacts.
∰-Conclusion
This is all I currently see the need to change/ be clarified for now. This does not mean it shall be the end of it, as more questions may arise as we progress and I may have missed something. I am willing to be flexible on some thing if given good reason to, and i'll be open for any discussion you have or if you need any help with this. Thank you for your taking the time to go through this, and I will post another judgement if necessary once we've gone through all this. Hopefully this will be the only judgement needed, and you can fully begin your adventure in beacon...whether pleasant or otherwise. Feel free to contact me at any point... just send a message with the crows. ✘ Status: Inquiring ▄ ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ ▄
Posted: Thu Jun 24, 2021 12:15 pm
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VJammer || Aoibheann Dunn
█ █ ╫ C O R E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Aoibheann Dunn █*AGE ▬ 20 █*FACTION ▬ ℣ale █*ROLE ▬ Student █*SEX ▬ Female █*SPECIES ▬ Human
█HAIR ▬ Red █CLOTHING ▬ Varied █ACCESSORIES ▬ █EYES ▬ Icy Blue █BUILD ▬ Athletic █TATTOOS ▬ She has a series of tribal style chevrons running down her spine numbering 30 in total, marking the number of successful hunts she's been on. It isn't so much a cultural practice from home so much as one within her family. █SCARS ▬ █MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES ▬
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Muay Thai Boxing, █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Adaptation. She also possesses an aptitude for adapting her combat style when facing others. █Other Talents ▬ Elevation Adaptability. She grew up in and around mountains and is used to high elevations as well as often changing elevation. Climbing - She was born and raised in the mountains and has a natural talent with climbing. █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Swordsmanship █Weakest Skill ▬ She has absolutely horrible eyesight. She's effectively legally blind without corrective lenses. She usually wears contacts, but, finds them uncomfortable and distracting and will often revert to glasses when she needs to focus. In addition, her eyesight is slow to adjust to sudden dramatic changes in light levels, leaving her effectively blinded for 1 post. Or, indefinitely while facing the source if it is a strobing light source.
█Other Skills ▬ Cooking, Tracking, Herbalism (Identification and use of plants)
█LIKES █ ▬ Drinking games █ ▬ Anyone lively and entertaining █ ▬ Black and White Pudding Served with stewed potatoes, boiled Egg, and Mutton rashers with sweet Soda Bread █ ▬ Handmade wood figurines █ ▬ Cats █DISLIKES █ ▬ Anyone who is full of shite █ ▬ Sour things █ ▬ Anything slimy or sticky █ ▬ Bugs █ ▬ She suffers from Arachnophobia. It isn't bad enough to paralyze her, but, it is enough to make her falter or act rashly. █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ She is an energetic and headstrong individual who enjoys a good time and a challenge. While appearing brazen, she does in fact think prior to action. Confident and determined, she knows her limits and if backing down is the better course of action, she will do so without any complaint. She does believe in being fair and honest with others and will admit when she feels they got her outmatched without remorse. But, she isn't naive enough to expect the same in return. █Vernacular ▬ She's a run of the mill common girl. Not some poverty-stricken street urchin or wealthy aristocratic girl and possesses neither a formal nor overly crass way of speaking, though, she does possess a strong accent and does have a tendency to use phrases common back home, but, not so much in Vale. (Northern Irish) █Positive Traits ▬ She is a fair and honest person. She isn't the type to lie to someone and is considerate about how they may take it. █Negative Traits ▬ She can be a bit eager to show off and take a challenge if she sees the possibility of coming back out of it at all, regardless of if she's certain she'll win or not
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ Aoibheann grew up in a small village on the border of the kingdom of Vale. Long since cut off from the rest of the kingdom, it survived due to the remote location in a mountain valley. Easily defendable and with a surplus of game and rich crop fields, it became self-sufficient. It was only recently that they managed to get a steady line back to the capital and trade began to flow again. Due to the relative small size of the community and the abundance of resources, many residents worked multiple jobs, ranging from mining ores and dust in the mountain side, to tending and harvesting crops out in the fields, even to guard and patrol duty as well and medical treatment of the injured or ill. As such, she grew up with a bit of knowledge in everything her village offered. Her family wasn't remarkable in any way really. A hard working father who cared for his three daughters and wife, her mother who worked as an instructor at the local school, two younger sisters who worked the fields with others and attended to bar in the evenings, serving food and drink. But, Aoibheann was far too bored by life in the village. When younger, she showed an unusual interest in sports and talent when getting into playful brawls with the other kids, often coming out the victor despite most of them being with boys who were older and bigger than her. When she was eight, she had been wandering around the woods and encountered a boardbatusk on it's own. It, of course, attacked her, though, she managed to keep away of it's strikes, if only barely. She managed to get backed to a cliff edge, the stone wall cutting off her retreat, but, she noticed how the creature attacked and baited it into charging. She managed to get it to slam into the rocks, stunning it, and was about to attack the exposed underside with a sharp rock when a spear flew out of nowhere, slaying it. The captain of the guard had shown up and commended her on her ability, revealing he used to be a Huntsman and suggested she had potential. From that day on, she took up training under his guidance for the following twelve years. Following his passing, she set out towards Beacon to further her training.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Cloidem █ ▬ It's a telescopic sword with a blade that can extend six inches past it's base form and a hilt that can extend three inches. The primary form is that of a hand-and-a-half sword. The Hilt is hollow and capable of housing a dust crystal with intricate carved grooves along the blade that allow it to utilize the elemental properties of the dust currently equipped. (5 post duration/crystal)
The blade itself it is functionally hollow, with two folding blades on one side. With the press of a switch, they fold open and the blade slides along the guard to expose a rifle barrel.
█Melee Form ▬ Hand and a half sword █Ranged Form ▬ Semi-Auto .308 rifle (10 round mag) █Other Form(s) ▬ Greatsword █Ammo Type ▬ Physical █ ▬ She has to eject any crystal from the hilt in order to swap to rifle mode.
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ Hunting Knife █ ▬ .45 Semi Auto Pistol with 15 round mag █ ▬ Multi-functional Survival Shovel. Usable as a telescopic shovel, but can be used as a hand saw, hand axe, multiple hunting spear head attachments, with pointed base used as a hand-pick. █ITEMS █ ▬ Scroll █ ▬ Medallion from her parents █ ▬ Her Mentor's ring
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Aegis Skin █*AURA COLOR ▬ Green █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ Her Aura is visible when her semblance is activated and shifts around her constantly, creating a fluid-like barrier around her. This barrier protects her from most injuries, though, the physical force of blows does pass through. █*LEVEL 0 ▬ Once activated, the barrier surrounds her, almost negating the effects of piercing and slashing attacks, though, it does not keep them from hitting her, meaning she does experience the physical force behind them. She can maintain the barrier up to 4 posts. 1:2 cooldown. █*LEVEL 1▬ At this stage, the barrier takes on the ability to nullify a portion (Half as effective) of basic elemental damage as well. Wind, Water, Fire, Earth, Lightning. In addition, she can maintain the barrier up to 5 posts. 1:2 cooldown. █*LEVEL 2▬ At second stage, more complex elements are also partially nullified. Gravity, Ice, Plant, Steam, Hard Light. Post extension to 6. 1:2 cooldown. █*LEVEL 3 ▬ At the final stage, her barrier can absorb a portion of elemental attacks rather than simply partially nullifying them and incorporate them into it's defense. 1:2 cooldown. █*DRAWBACKS ▬ Up until the final stage and specifically with the utilization of Hard Light dust being used, this barrier is completely useless against physical impact. She is effectively immune to something piercing her or cutting her with this up, however, until that very specific point, the physical force will still pass through. A sword strike won't cut, but it will be like hitting her with a metal stick, or a bullet/arrow won't pierce, but, it will be like the butt of a metal rod striking her. Furthermore, Aura attacks can bypass the barrier if the fight drags on too long or she is running out of steam. It also requires an insane number of calories to keep using the semblance. While she doesn't have a set limit to the number of times she can use it in a day, it is restricted to how often she can replenish the calories needed to fuel it. For each 3 posts of cumulative use, she burns the caloric equivalent of a full meal, requiring her to eat more. After 10 posts of cumulative use per day, her barrier starts to weaken to aura attacks.
