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Cobra_X
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 02, 2010 8:06 pm


Deil:

1. Instead of saying "All basic" for wind jutsu ... can't you just link the jutsu like you would for all the others?

2. I fixed your Shinobi Skills and parts of your weaknesses for you.
PostPosted: Tue Mar 02, 2010 8:08 pm


Narky:

1. could you supply description and training links for all your jutsu please?

2. Could you also fill out the "Body Type" field in character Information?

Cobra_X
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BluewolfofMibu

PostPosted: Tue Mar 02, 2010 10:22 pm


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Full Name: Zane Hajime
Nicknames: The Ghost of the Mist
Age: 21
Birthdate: 12/17
Gender: Male
Ethnicity: Hispanic

Nindo: Nothing is true...everything is permitted

Behavior: Cold, Ruthless

Personality: Zane is a cold blooded assasin through and through. He will put the mission at hand first and refuses to work with others. His loner demeanor comes from the years of training that he underwent as a hunter nin. Though through the interactions with his students, Zane has become much more open and values the lives of his students before his own.

Backstory: When Zane was just a child, he was taken away from his family and taken underground below the Tower of the Mizukage. It was here that he was trained in the ways of the hunter nin. Zane went through grueling and unimaginable forms of training, to the point that Zane had almost lost his life several dozen times. At the age of 16, he resurfaced as the leader of the Hunter Nins, serving under the rule of Dante the Mizukage. It wasn't up until he turned 21 though that he became a true force to be reckoned with.

Village: Hidden Mist
Rank: Mizukage



________________________________________|B|attle |I|nformation

Summoning: N/A
Bloodline: Supekutoru Annaiyaku (Stage 3)


Weapon of Choice: Hidden Blades

Strengths:
• Stealth
• Speed
• Cunning

Weaknesses:
• Weak Body
• Elemental Vulnerability: Fire
• Sensitive to others emotions


Shinobi Skills:
• Ability to communicate with ghosts
• Near Immunity to Katon and Raiton elements
• Can activate [Stealth]. When in Stealth, ninja of the same rank will be unable to detect you (though certain doujutsu and clan abilities can tell exactly where you are). Ninja of higher rank can sense you, but will not know exactly where you are. You can only hide from Doujutsu and clan abilities (e.g. Sharingan and Inuzuka) when you are a Sannin/Kage.
• Can coat weapons with poison. (Must be approved in Custom Weapons thread)
• Cannot learn Medical jutsu


Chakra Element(s): 2
--> Primary: Wind
--> Secondary: Water (learned at Chuunin, can only learn up to 1 rank below current rank)


Chakra Color: Silver Mist

Total Chakra Points:



________________________________________|S|quad |I|nformation

Sensei:
Team Mate:
Team Mate:


________________________________________|J|utsu |I|nformation

Non-Elemental
Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu)
Kai - Dispell


Wind - Fuuton
Kaze Bunshin (Wind Clone)
Kaze Fuuchuufuyuu (Wind Levitation)
Yadama Furooseigyo (Projectile Control Skill)
Hanpatsu Kaze no Jutsu (Retrieving Wind Technique)
Boufuu Kyouzuu no Jutsu (Gale Surge)
Kaze Bakuhatsu (Wind Explosion)
Yadama Henshin Bakuha (Projectile Deflection Blast)
Okuridashi Kaze (Propelling Winds)
Kamaitachi no Jutsu (Slashing Wind Skill)
Fuuton: Shinkuutai Naihatsu (Wind Element: Air Pocket Bursts)
Bouseki Tate no Kaze (Spinning Shield of Winds)
Kaze Shunshin no Jutsu (Wind Instantaneous Body Skill)
Daikamaitachi no Jutsu (Grand Slashing Wind Skill)
Furyuu no Jutsu (Wind Release: Wind Dragon)
Fuuton: Tei Hakusha (Wind Release: Air Riding)
Hikui Tenkuu Assaku no Jutsu (Low Air Pressure Technique)
Kaze no Yaiba (Wind Sword)
Kaze Gyorai no Jutsu (Wind Torpedo)
Fuuton: Tatsumaki Wana (Wind Release: Tornado Trap)
Mugensajin Daitopa (Great Infinite Sandblast Breakthrough)
Fuuton: Kyoushu no Tosshin (Wind Release: Assassin’s Rush)
Boufuu Bakuhatsu Bunshin no Jutsu (Wind Explosion Clone)
Kuchiyose: Kirikiri no Mai (Summoning: Execution Whirl)
Akki Boufuu (Demon Gale)
Kaze Taihou (Air Cannon)

Water - Suiton
Mizu no Waruasobi (Trick of Water)
Mizu Kagami no Jutsu (Water Mirror Technique)
Uo Tsuba (Fish Spit)
Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu (Water Clone Technique)
Mizu Soujuu (Water Manipulation)
Mizu Peretto (Water Pellet)
Mizutamari no Jutsu (Water Puddle Technique)
Mizu Shuriken no Jutsu (Water Shuriken Technique)
Isonagi no Jutsu (Beach Crab)
Mizu Tate no Jutsu (Water Shield Technique)
Mizu no Yaiba (Water Sword)
Mizutamari Yusuo no Jutsu (Water Puddle Transportation)
Mizukaisou Bunshin no Jutsu (Water Reflection Clone Technique)
Mizu no Yoroi (Water Armor)
Fuuma Mizu Shuriken (Evil Windmill Water Shuriken)
Deido Tama (Mud Ball)
Shunshin no Jutsu (Instantaneous Body Skill)
Suikusari no Jutsu (Water Chains Technique)
Suimenka no Kisoku ( Breathing underwater Technique)
Kirigakure no Jutsu (Hidden Mist Technique)
Suihou no Jutsu (Water Release: Water Cannon Technique)
Kiri Shikaku no Jutsu (Mist Vision Technique)
Doiru Suiyari no Jutsu (Drilling Water Spears)
Suise no Jutsu (Water Torrent Technique)
Mizuhada Bunshin No Jutsu (Water Body Clone Technique)
Suijouki no Jutsu (Steam Technique)
Gekiryuu Chikara (Raging River Force)
Suijinheki (Water Barrier)

Kekkai Genkai - Bloodline
Bourei Choryuu (Apparition Accumulation)
Bakemon Kodachi (Phantom Shortsword)
Dogimo Tate (Spirit Buckler
Ekutopurazumu Boruto (Ectoplasm Bolt)
Amano Chariotto (Divine Chariot)
Biimu no Imi Ranpu (Beam of Holy Light)



________________________________________|A|pparel + |W|eapon |I|nformation


Weapon Type: Hidden Blade
Weapon Range: 10 inches
Special Properties: dipped in poison
Weapon Location: beneath the sleeves

BluewolfofMibu
Name of weapon: Blade of the Assasin
Who owns the weapon: Zane Hajime
Where it was found/Who made it: The ancient assasins
The Range of the weapon: less than 1 ft.
Weakness: Range
Description: User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.

-Gauntlet: The main part which is merely a holding shell for the weapons inside, the gauntlet can be used as armor to help defend against taijutsus and other weapons.

-Hidden Blade: The blade is triggered by a mechanism that is activated when Zane moves his ring finger forward. Thanks to some modifications made, Zane is able to keep his ring finger. This blade can be used for assasinations and to attack. It can also be used to defend against light attacks.

-Poison Blade: The blade has been dipped in a poison brewed by Zane Hajime. This poison, once entering the system via even the tiniest of cuts, can disrupt the flow of the nervous system, preventing the commands of the brain to the limbs. During the first few minutes (the first post) the user can feel the poison running its course. Then (Second Post) the poison begins to slow down the reflexes of the shinobi. (Third Post) After that the won't be able to feel or use their right arm. (Fourth Post) After several minutes, the user won't be able to move at all...completely paralyzed from the poison.

-Poison Fog: Inside the gauntlet lies a mechanism that unleashes a fog of the very same paralyzing poison Zane Hajime created. The fog is unleashed by pulling on the trigger on the bottom of the gauntlet. The radius of this fog is 5 meters and it will stay in the area as long as it is in an enclosed space. If it is outside the fog will stay for 2 posts, for the wind can blow it away. Zane is not affected by this poison for he has build immunity from it. Breathing this fog by anyone else has the same effects mentioned above.

-Senbon Gun: By using gunpowder in conjuction with extremely durable sebons, the gun fires a senbon at such speeds that only highly trained shinobis or doujutsu users can see coming. It takes one post to recharge the senbon into the gun.


Headband Location | Style | Color:
|
Flack Jacket Style | Color: N/A

Kunai Holster Location | Color: Left thigh / black
|
Projectile Holster Location | Color: Right thigh / black
|
Scroll Holster Location | Color: Back hip / black
|

Exploding Smoke Grenade: 3
Makibishi: 5
Shuriken: 10
Flash Bombs: 3


________________________________________|C|haracter |I|nformation

Height: 5'8
Weight: 160
Body Build: (dont fill out yet)
Eye Color: Brown
Hair Color: Black
Family: None
Theme song:


________________________________________|M|ission |I|nformation

S Rank: 2
A Rank: 5
B Rank: 12
C Rank: 4
D Rank: 20
PostPosted: Tue Mar 02, 2010 10:24 pm


I know i probably have a million things wrong with this profile, but just remember that my profile was made way before the new rules and such. I probably should have done this a lot sooner but oh well. So go on Cobra, hit me with it ^_^

BluewolfofMibu


Cobra_X
Vice Captain

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 02, 2010 10:27 pm


Well, let's start with this...

Take all the information you have here and transfer it to the new profile format. Your strengths and weaknesses have to be chosen from the lists provided in your selected ninja class.
PostPosted: Wed Mar 03, 2010 3:15 am


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Full Name: Havik (No last name)
Nicknames: None as of yet
Age: 18
Birthdate: 04/24
Gender: Male
Ethnicity: Unknown (Has a pale complexion)

Nindo: "Fight until their is nothing to fight for"

Personality: Havik try's to make friends however he is brash and never holds his tongue so he says thing that would anger most people making him end up with a small amount of friends.

He is easy going and likes to relax however this is only when he has free time or just after a big fight or good training session. When he is on mission or in the midst of training he walks tall and carries himself with dignity so that people he comes across will think highly of the sand.

The last thing you need to know about Havik is the Sand village is all he has, if he were to come across someone talking down about his village they would live to regret it, well they might live.

Behavior: While in combat Havik is calm and protective of his comrades he will put his own body threw hell and back to make sure his team makes it back alive, his does not change much when he takes controle of Kaku's power, however if he loses control he disregards his team and trys to completly destroy anything that steps in his path, even if it was his own team.

When Havik is out of combat and by himself he tends to look back on the past, if it is only a few hours or and entire year. When he is with others outside of combat he is easy going but will call people out or tell them how he feels whether they like it or not.

Backstory: Havik was raised by an old women who he knows little about, the only real thing he knows is her name, the way she looks and that she would look at him for hours while he was out throwing kunai.

Havik never really had friends in his child hood, his pale complexion made him a easy target for the other children to make fun of, and with his above average strength he ended up hurting a few of them and eventually the other kids avoided Havik all together.

After the years went on he tried finding work in shops around the village but they were all mundane and tedious so Havik always went home feeling incomplete. When he turned eighteen he decided to become a ninja and even tho he was rather old to start a life of a ninja he passed all the test and even showed great progress when it came to the earth style jutsu.


Village: Sand
Rank: Chuunin


________________________________________|B|attle |I|nformation

Summoning: None

Weapon of Choice: Hands

Ninja Class: Ninjutsu

Strengths:
--> Primary: Great Chakra control
--> Second: Cunning
--> Tertiary: Durability

Weaknesses:
--> Primary: Elemental Vulnerability
--> Second: Taijutsu cost more Chakra
--> Custom: No matter what the difference in power Havik will let no one talk down about the sand Village


Shinobi Skills:
• Doton control (Cost one less point to use Doton based jusu)
• Learn ninjutsu in 1 less post than needed
• Can learn Medical Ninjutsu at Kage/ Sannin (Only up to Chuunin)

Tremor
Rank ll B - ranked
The User creates a series of simple hand signs before Stamping there Foot and Causing a Small Tremor during this Tremor sometimes ground Cracks, this Tremor makes it incredibly difficult to stand or balance even Jounin Would find Standing difficult.

Earth Plate Defense.
Rank ll B - ranked
This Jutsu simply creates a small plate of earth that will Deflect oncoming attacks up to a level of B-Rank or lower for two posts. this Jutsu will be broken by any jutsu of the Thunder jutsu instantly.

Earth tile Shuriken (small)
Rank ll B - ranked
This jutsu lifts small plates of earth of the ground witch are then shot at opponent the amount fired can be many so this can be hard to dodge.

Earth Staff
Rank ll A - ranked
The user Charges the fist into the ground before pulling out a long staff created completely of earth witch can be used against any weapon and preform well, unless the weapon is charged with lightning.

Earth Plate Barrage
Rank ll S - ranked
huge Chunks of Earth Are thrown at the enemy like shuriken because of the amount that can be created and the size this is hard to dodge and causes great damage. also causes tremor effect.


Chakra Element(s): 3
Primary -->Earth
Secondary --> Lightning (learned at Chuunin)
Third --> Fire (learned at Jounin, can only learn up to 1 rank below current rank)

Chakra Color: Yellow

Total Chakra Points: 60

Bijuu modifier, for Shichibi (Seven Tails), Kaku

On Mastery of First Tail: +10 chakra points

On Mastery of Second Tail: +10 chakra points

On Mastery of Third Tail: +10 chakra points

On Mastery of Fourth Tail: +7 chakra points

On Mastery of Fifth Tail: +6 chakra points

On Mastery of Sixth Tail: +2 chakra points

On Mastery of Seventh Tail: +2 chakra points

Total Chakra Point Bonus (after full tail mastery): +47 chakra points



________________________________________|S|quad |I|nformation

Sensei:
Team Mate:
Team Mate:


________________________________________|J|utsu |I|nformation


Non-Elemental
Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu)
Kai - Dispell



Doton

Rank E - (Basic)
Bunshin no Jutsu(earth clone skill) Description
Koujin Bunshin no Jutsu(dust clone skill) Description
Iwa Tounyuu no Jutsu(rock throw skill) Description
Doroku Gaeshi(Rock Sheild)Description
-Gou no Doro(Mud Moat)Description
-Ishi Yoroi no Ude(Stone Bracers)Description
-Tsuchi Tou Tou (Swift Earth)Description

Rank D - (Genin)
Shuriken no Jutsu(Stone Shuriken Skill)Description
Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu(Inner decapitative Jutsu)
Tamaishi Danmaku(Pebble Barrage Jutsu)
-Rikujou Douyou no Jutsu(Ground shaking Skill)Description
-Jihibiki Kansei no Jutsu(Ground temor Skill) Description
-Ohitsuji Kashira(Ram head)
-Tsuka no Tsuchi Souzou(Earth mound Creation)Description
-Geigeki no Doro(Mud Interceptor)Description
-Sekkai Koutetsuban(Stone Breast Plate)Description
-Kajuu no Doro(Mud weights)Description

Rank C - (Chuunin)
Karyoku Bunshin no Jutsu(Lava Clone Skill)DescriptionPost learned
Doryuudan no Jutsu(Earth Dragon Blast)DescriptionPost learned


Rank B - (Special Jounin)




Rank A - (Jounin)




Rank S - (Sannin/Kage)




Lightning - Raiton

Rank E - (Basic)





Rank D - (Genin)




Rank C - (Chuunin)




Rank B - (Special Jounin)




Rank A - (Jounin)




Rank S - (Sannin/Kage)





Genjutsu

Rank E - (Basic)




Rank D - (Genin)




Rank C - (Chuunin)




Rank B - (Special Jounin)




Rank A - (Jounin)




Rank S - (Sannin/Kage)





Bloodline Abilities





________________________________________|T|aijutsu - |S|tyles , |M|aneuvers , and |A|bilities

Taijutsu/Weapon Styles Allowed:

Primary Style:
--> Current level of Mastery:


(Provide brief descriptions below. Also provide a link to your approved Taijutsu style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)

Maneuvers

Abilities

____________________________________

(Use the format above for Secondary and onward Taijutsu styles)


________________________________________|W|eapons - |C|ustom |W|eapons and associated |W|eapon |S|tyles

# Custom Weapons Allowed: 0

Weapon Type:
Weapon Range:
Weapon Location:
Weapon Description:
Special Properties:


________________________________________|A|pparel

Headband Location | Style | Color: Middle of Large coat
|
Flack Jacket Style | Color: N/A
|
Kunai Holster Location | Color: Left hip
|
Projectile Holster Location | Color: Right hip
|
Scroll Holster Location | Color: N/A
|

Exploding Smoke Grenade:10
Makibishi: 10
Kunai: 10
Shuriken:10
Flash Bombs:10


________________________________________|C|haracter |I|nformation

Height: 5'11
Weight: 200
Body Build: Short but thickly built with large arms and round shoulders.
Eye Color: Black
Hair Color: Black
Family: None
Theme song:None


________________________________________|M|ission |I|nformation

S Rank: 0
A Rank: 0
B Rank: 0
C Rank: 0
D Rank: 0


Shichibi (Seven Tails), Kaku
Kaku is a bijuu in the form of badger. Its Kanji is also read as Mujina, which is the name the Japanese subspecies of badger (Meles Meles Anaguma) receives in some parts of Japan. It has seven tails, and is the smallest bijuu out of the nine; though it is the most cunning and stealthy. Kaku hunts its prey underground most of the time. It kills by crumbling/destroying the piece of land that is under its target, making it fall right into his open mouth. Above land, whenever he is around he can transform into any type of creature, but he is unable to do it if he doesn’t have clay.

Description:
Kaku is the smallest Bijuu. It has a blue color, and is good at using clay camouflage. Kaku is very difficult to bump into.

Restrictions:
This demon is strong but still is weak to some others. It can use Earth. The major restrictions is that this demon can not Create an all mighty Earthquake that destroys all.

Levels of demon:
Stage 1 - The host is surrounded by an aura of visible blue chakra that gives him a slight appearance of a badger, eyes, skin tone / fur, claws and an elongated snout. They're senses of smell, hearing, and touch are better then ever. This stage unlike any other will begin the most important part of the demon. A single tail will form, made of earth / dirt of course but there are more to come. With great training the host will obtain more tails unleashing true power.


Stage 2 - The last stage the host will grow only a little bit due to being the smallest demon. This does not hold him back, allows him to move around the field easy with any other demon. Those will now have fur of a badger, scenes switch are off the scale, and eyes that will can stun any foe.


Fighting Style
Bulky and brave, very strong; tunnels underground and uses earth to both hide and attack. Prefers attacks from underground and usually fails to be stealthy, its clawing attacks are usually given away by the rumbling of the ground.

Abilities:

• Transformation (Henge)

• Earth elemental control, cannot create earthquakes at a tectonic level.


• Can use any Earth Technique at your level or below.

• Able to smell out anything very well.

• Host may somewhat preform earth bending style but still takes chakra.

• Can split the ground.

• Can feel vibrations of the ground.

• Can camouflage its self on any type of dirt, but may not perform any jutsu.

• Cannot control others earth attacks only over power them not take control

-o-Havik-o-
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 03, 2010 3:28 am


Cobra_X
Gohan:

1. Instead of saying "All basic" for Earth and water jutsu ... can't you just link the jutsu like you did for all the others?

2. Your Wood Manipulations need links to their descriptions and proof of training.

3. I fixed your Shinobi Skills and parts of your weaknesses for you.

4. Could you also fill out the "Body Type" field in character Information?

Well, I didn't learn the Earth and Water Basics, neither did I the Wood techniques, you approved it like that actually in the start.
PostPosted: Wed Mar 03, 2010 6:31 am


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Full Name: Kurocku Uchiha
Nicknames:Rocku, KuKu
Age:13
Birthdate:09/09
Gender:Male
Ethnicity:Caucasian

Nindo: I will be great without my family's name.

Personality: Outgoing/ fun loving

Behavior: Same

Biography: Kurocku though out going he always hid one thing from everyone. He was an Uchiha loving the fact that he had a great ability within him he didn't like the thought of being pushed because of his name. In school he was known as the Prankster Prince always playing various jokes on fellow class mates and the occasional teacher. Though he rarely got away with the pranks on his teachers they would always say the same thing "Kurocku why do you act like this? This isn't how an Uchiha would act," Kurocku would look up at his teachers and give them the same reply as always "I want to be know as Kurocku not Kurocku Uchiha." Afteitr the year of school past Kurocku made it pass the final exams. Reaching for his head band one of his teachers looked up at him and said "Well done Kurocku," Kurocku smiled his teachers would always call him Kurocku Uchiha.


Village: Konohanagakure
Rank: Chuunin


________________________________________|B|attle |I|nformation

Summoning:
Bloodline: Sharingan


Weapon of Choice: Twin Hooks

Ninja Class: Ninjutsu

Strengths:
● High chakra reserves
● Great Chakra control
● Durability

Weaknesses:
● Water
● Intelligence
● Genjutsu


Shinobi Skills:
● Can copy body movement and jutsu
• Can learn Ninjutsu in 1 less post than required
• 1 more post than required to learn Genjutsu and Taijutsu.
• Cannot learn Medical Ninjutsu (except at Sannin/Kage: Can learn up to Chuunin level)

Chakra Element(s):
- Primary: Katon
- Secondary: Raiton (learned at Chuunin)
-Teritary Fuuton (learned at Jounin)


Chakra Color: Light blue



________________________________________|S|quad |I|nformation

Sensei:
Team Mate:
Team Mate:


________________________________________|J|utsu |I|nformation

Non-Elemental
Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu)
Kai - Dispell


Element - Katon
Ichi (Fire release one)Desricption
Ni (Fire Release: Two)Desricption
Hi Shinten no Jutsu (Fire Re,ease: Flame Spread Technique)Desricption
Yojin Bunshin no Jutsu (Fire Release: Ember Clone Technique)Desricption
Bounetsu no Jutsu (Fire Release: Flame-Resistance Technique)Desricption
Housenka no Jutsu (Fire Release: Mythical Fire Flower Technique) Desricption
Hoteri Ougigata no Jutsu (Fire Release: Flash Fan Technique)Desricption



Page 7-8
Element - Raiton






Element - Fuuton






Genjutsu






Kekkai Genkai - Bloodline







________________________________________|T|aijutsu - |S|tyles , |M|aneuvers , and |A|bilities

Taijutsu Styles Known:

Primary Style: _________ (learned at Genin/Chuunin/Jounin/Special Jounin/Sannin/Kage)

(Provide brief descriptions below. Also provide a link to your approved Taijutsu style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)

Maneuvers

Abilities


____________________________________

(Use the format above for Secondary and onward Taijutsu styles)



________________________________________|W|eapons - |C|ustom |W|eapons and associated |W|eapon |S|tyles

# Custom Weapons Allowed: 0

Weapon Type:
Weapon Range:
Weapon Description:
Special Properties:
Weapon Location:

Associated Weapon Style:

((Provide brief descriptions below. Also, provide a link to your approved weapon style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)

Maneuvers

Techniques



________________________________________|A|pparel


Headband Location | Style | Color:Forehead/Normal/Blue
|
Flack Jacket Style | Color:

Kunai Holster Location | Color:Right hip/ blue
|
Projectile Holster Location | Color:left hip/ blue
|
Scroll Holster Location | Color:left lower back/ blue
|

Exploding Smoke Grenade:4
Makibishi:10
Shuriken:20
Flash Bombs:4



________________________________________|C|haracter |I|nformation

Height:5'6
Weight:125
Body Build: Athletic
Eye Color:blue
Hair Color:brown
Family:none that he knows of.
Theme song:


________________________________________|M|ission |I|nformation

S Rank:
A Rank:
B Rank:
C Rank:
D Rank:

Genin --> Chuunin , Proof


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Narkosa2512


Lance Fulgurant

PostPosted: Wed Mar 03, 2010 7:58 am


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Full Name: Kaizen Minoru Uchiha
Nicknames: Kai
Age: 14
Birthdate: April 25
Gender: Male
Ethnicity: Yes

Nindo: Only through struggle can we grow

Personality: Kaizen is a bit aloof around people he doesn't know, but once he has become friends with someone he is extremely loyal.

Behavior: Usually Kaizen will challenge people when he first meets them, believing that only during battle is one's true self revealed.

Village: Kirigakure
Rank: Chuunin


________________________________________|B|attle |I|nformation

Summoning: N/A
Bloodline: Uchiha stage 1 (three tomoe)
Curse Mark: N/A

Weapon of Choice: Daisho (Katana and Wakizashi paired together)

Ninja Class: Assassin

Strengths:
• Speed
• Stealth
• Agility

Weaknesses:
• Weak-Bodied
• Elemental Vulnerability: Wind
• Likes to work alone
• Arrogant


Shinobi Skills:
• Copy Jutsu
• Enhanced Movement Tracking
• Can activate [Stealth]. When in Stealth, ninja of the same rank will be unable to detect you (though certain doujutsu and clan abilities can tell exactly where you are). Ninja of higher rank can sense you, but will not know exactly where you are. You can only hide from Doujutsu and clan abilities (e.g. Sharingan and Inuzuka) when you are a Sannin/Kage.
• Can coat weapons with poison. (Must be approved in Custom Weapons thread)
• Cannot learn Medical jutsu


Chakra Element(s):
- Primary: Raiton
- Secondary:Katon (learned at Chuunin, can only learn up to 1 rank below current rank)

Chakra Color: Crimson



________________________________________|S|quad |I|nformation

Sensei: Zane Hajime
Team Mate: Axel Hajime
Team Mate:


________________________________________|J|utsu |I|nformation

Non-Elemental
Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu)
Kai - Dispell


Lightning - Raiton
Teikou no Kuntou (Electricity Resistance Training)
Rank:N/A
(E)Range:N/A
Description: While not necessarily a technique that must be taken, most Cloud-nin are taught this at the Academy. As most know electricity in general is a deadly and somewhat scarce element, generally one could only collect the necessary electricity necessary to perform techniques if they were fighting in the middle of a thunderstorm, or near an electrical source. However current training standards in the academy show how a cloud-nin tends to make electricity through the use of chakra, turning most Cloud-nin in to human capacitors, technically. The process is generally quite painful and requires about 5 months of mental and physical conditioning to resist the charges you activate onto your body. As it is written, this technique is optional. A person who doesn't take this skill will generally feel pain when even performing their own electricity based techniques, also one who tends to take this ability tends to notice that minor shocks generally do not hurt them as badly.
Note: This skill is passive.
Raiku Bunshin no Jutsu(Lightning Clone Jutsu)
Rank biggrin
Range:N/A
Description:This technique makes a simple clone of the shinobi however unlike the standard bunshin, which is a genjutsu, this bunshin takes an actual physical form through the use of electrically charged chakra. One can easily touch and hold this clone like it was in fact an actual person, however when it is attacked it quickly disperses into smoky, hot air. It is also able to attack using taijutsu, however it's ability to attack is around 1/10 in perspective to the user, in return for this weakness it's attacks deliver shocks of electricity to the opponent's body.
Nagare Isou no Jutsu
Description: An overall simple yet very effective technique, the Cloud-nin creates a sort of electrical current on his hand, this current can then be transferred onto any weapon he happens to be holding at that moment be it a kunai, senbon, shuriken, or even a sword. The next physical attack he performs is charged with this electrical current, if he blocks a weapon attack with his own weapon the current transfers over shocking the attacker. If by chance the user is not carrying a weapon he can transfer this current into his opponent's weapon shocking him, or can even hit him with this current.
Yaiba no Jutsu
Description: This skill allows the user to charge chakra in the form of electricity in the palm. Then, the chakra eventually works up to the fingers, where a blade of electricity is formed between the index and middle finger. The blade is very thin, and depending on the user's chakra, anywhere from 8 inches to a foot long. It is around 2 to 3 inches wide, and it lacks a hilt. The blade is held between the fingers, but as soon as it is let go, the blade vanishes into thin air. The strength of this blade isn't as strong as a normal blade, as it is nowhere as dense or as heavy. But because the blade is very thin, it is capable of doing some major damage, if used properly. However, this blade can also hurt the user, anywhere except for the fingers where the blade is held.
Raiton: Raikou Kousen no Jutsu (Lightning Release: Lightning Beam)
Description: This is the pinnacle of the single-target ranged lightning jutsu. The attack from Lightning Blast has been upgraded further, making it into a beam twice as wide as before, and much more damaging. Targets hit head-on with this jutsu will experience a fantastic amount of pain and be stunned after the jutsu ends. Also, nearly missing with this jutsu also has some effect. Because of the high amount of voltage, small lightning bolts can arc from the beam to someone standing within two feet of it, causing shocks a little bit more damaging than those of Lightning Bolt technique. This jutsu can be ended prematurely by the user.






Fire - Katon






Genjutsu






Uchiha Clan Jutsus






Copied Jutsus







________________________________________|T|aijutsu - |S|tyles , |M|aneuvers , and |A|bilities

Taijutsu Styles Known:The Way of the Silent Blade [Yaiba no Mokumoku] stage 3

Primary Style:


ManeuversOshi-Ten Dageki (Pressure Point Strike): The hunter-nin can no longer look at an opponents body regularly. To their eyes, the opponent's body is riddled with the pin point bullseye's of the pressure point targets used in this stage of training. This technique can run from the chuunin level at twenty strikes, to the satsubatsu level of one-hundred and twenty strikes. The strikes begin at the lower parts of the body. Always. This is to ensure that the hunter works his way quickly up the opponents body, striking pressure points in order to not only paralyze limbs (10 Posts), but to rupture blood vessels, and redirect blood flow to different areas of the body to cause massive heart trauma. The pinacle of this technique is the five point heart strike. Initiated around the heart in a pentagram, this causes an individual's heart to literally cease pumping blood and drown itself with it, causing it to literally burst within five minutes (5 posts).

Abilities

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(Use the format above for Secondary and onward Taijutsu styles)



________________________________________|W|eapons - |C|ustom |W|eapons and associated |W|eapon |S|tyles

# Custom Weapons Allowed:

Custom Weapon 1: _________ (attained at Genin/Chuunin/Jounin/Special Jounin/Sannin/Kage)

((Provide brief descriptions below. Also, provide a link to your approved weapon in the Custom Weapon Approval thread)

Weapon Type:
Weapon Range:
Weapon Description:
Special Properties:
Weapon Location:

Associated Weapon Style:

((Provide brief descriptions below. Also, provide a link to your approved weapon style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)

Maneuvers

Techniques


____________________________________

(Use the format above for any other Custom weapons / Weapon styles)


________________________________________|A|pparel


Headband Location | Style | Color: Waist | Sash | Black
|
Flack Jacket Style | Color: Like pic, but black

Kunai Holster Location | Color: Left thigh
|
Projectile Holster Location | Color: Right thigh
|
Scroll Holster Location | Color: Lower Back
|

Exploding Smoke Grenade: 5
Makibishi: 30
Shuriken: 20
Flash Bombs:
5


________________________________________|C|haracter |I|nformation

Height: 5'4"
Weight: 117 lbs
Body Build: athletic (for an 11 year old anyway)
Eye Color: Black
Hair Color: White
Family: Father is a chunin of the village and has trained Kai since he was five in preparation for the academy. He has an older sister, Sosay Uchiha, but they were separated when they were younger, so they haven't seen each other in a while.
Theme song:
1000 Apologies

________________________________________|M|ission |I|nformation

S Rank:
A Rank:
B Rank:
C Rank:
D Rank:


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PostPosted: Wed Mar 03, 2010 8:37 am


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Full Name: Outou Kurama
Nicknames: Cherry, Smiling Demon
Age: 19
Birthdate: 14th February
Gender: Female
Ethnicity: Australian/German

Nindo: "Your World is my Delusion"

Personality: Calm, solitary, unfeeling of death.

Behavior: (How do you behave when: Alone/ With Others / In Combat / Out of Combat

Backstory:
Outou Kurama , nicknamed 'Cherry' when she was younger, usually has a
happy-go-lucky aura surrounding her, and is always found with a smile
on her face. Cherry, like her mother, is a genjutsu specialist, born of the
Kurama clan, and is often found creating illusions of anything that catches
her interests. However, Cherry dislikes showing weakness and has a
slight fear of men, and the things that appear to capture her interest most
is the subject of Death and the possibility of an 'Afterlife' or 'Immortality.'
Born in Mist, once Cherry became a Genin, she was assigned a team.

Ever two years or so, one would graduate to Chuunin and their position
would be filled by another Genin. Cherry has yet to graduate. Her fighting
abilities - or lack there of - earned her the nickname 'Smiling Demon'. On
a mission with her team, they were attacked. It was a simple C-Ranked
Mission which turned into a B-Ranked Mission with the attack of bandit-nin.
Cherry was the only one to get out without much injury. She suffered a broken right wrist, one teammate died, the other went to critical care and her sensei had to go through rehabilitation for a shattered knee-cap. Cherry survived by unleashing the full fury of her genjutsu abilities, mentally crippling the bandits, the leader having been the first to call Cherry 'Smiling Demon'.

Cherry is cruel and harsh when angered, not fearing death, as she realizes that she may die that very day if a second 'self' emerges within her. A trade-off for being born with the full potential of her clan. However, all Cherry wants is someone to call a friend, who will look into her pink eyes and not fear her heightened abilities. Cherry believes she may have found that very person not a month after the decimation of her team. Cory Lei, a Leaf Sannin possessing the chakra tendril ability captured her interest with his claim of immortality and she captured his with her strange demeanor. Ultimately, the two have suffered similar lives, being constantly feared and just seeking companionship among their fellow peers.

However, though it only took a day for the two to find solid common ground and a potentially strong and long-lasting friendship, it abruptly ended. A traitor named Blue killed Cory before Cherry's pink eyes. The Leaf Sannin gave Cherry his own heart which now resides within her chest, having pushed its way through, sealing itself inside with the very tendril threads Cory used to control. Now, Cherry seeks the killer named Blue, wanting his death ingrained in her mind and his blood staining her hands just as Cory's did.

Having heard of a Mist assassin trying to kill Blue, Cherry went to investigate, finding Blue's apprentice, a Sand Genin who used puppets. His name was Cory Lei, just like the Leaf Sannin Cherry had befriended. They battled into a pause and agreed to go their separate ways, Cherry now having an increased knowledge of puppetry and an incentive to train harder to take down the Genin with Cory's name. Cherry returned back to the Mizukage where she was finally assigned another team - with the Mizukage as the sensei. After learning some techniques, she had a mock battle with her teammate - and lost. It was then that Cory the Genin appeared and Cherry unleashed her genjutsu abilities, making the Genin burn and blister from fires so real but were actually illusioned. After showing him the pain she felt at Cory the Sannin's death, Cherry released the genjutsu and the Mizukage took her to hospital. That day, she had learned all the Genin techniques for wind jutsu. The next day, all of the Chuunin techniques.

The day afterward, Cherry began taking missions, starting off with some typical D-Ranked missions before given a C-Ranked where she was to escort an individual to the fishing village near Kirigakure. They took a cargo boat to the village but where soon attacked by pirates. Cherry took the man she was to protect down under the deck while the crew handled the pirates, used to being attacked. A pirate managed to get through and found Cherry waiting at the bottom of the stairs. The pirate was over confident and easily fell into her favourite Genjutsu, Beautiful Delusion before she slit his throat and was covered in his blood as a result. Cherry finished her mission and returned to Kirigakure.

Cherry was then placed under the tutelage of the Hunter Nin who had killed Blue, mysteriously named Z, along with two other Genin, brothers Hideki and Cody, puppet masters and able to use the ability of Iron Sand. The Hunter Nin, seeing Cherry's curiosity to the head of Blue he had brought to the Mizukage's desk, asked if she wanted to feel the pain Blue went through after she had asked how painful Blues death was. Cherry readily agreed and fell into the genjutsu which showed her Blue's pain and felt released and refreshed from the experience, knowing her vengeance has been appeased.

Sensei Z holds the ability to talks to ghosts and has one bound to him named Ezio. Not long after they first met, he and Cherry began to know more about each other and their own troubles with society. Then, another squad appeared which held a rather clueless and uncaring girl named Haruken. Cherry instantly felt a dislike to her and her ignorance and
attitude and confronted her. The result ended in Cherry feeling the fracture of her mentality and the overwhelming strength of her other half. Flames surrounded themselves around her and grew in strength, so strong that even her sensei felt their heat. Cherry's father appeared and demanded that Z kill his daughter, fearing her mentality would permanently break and her other half would destroy Kirigakure.

Sensei Z denied the order and instead stayed by Cherry's side, talking to her and helping her to gain back control over her own mind. The damage was done however and her mind became rather frail for a while as she remained in bed at her sensei's dojo. As she slept, Z trained his other students, Haruken arriving and aggravating Cherry further, only causing memories of pain and fire to arise when in her presence. When Cherry was rested, Z took his squad on a mission to Sand, not giving them any details but three masks and Cherry his cloak as she was still covered in blood from the C-Ranked mission and they didn't want to attract attention.

Arriving in Sand, Z gave each student a note and told them to only open it once they arrived at a nearby restaurant. They passed through the gates, after having removed anything linking them to Mist. Arriving at the designated building, they read their notes. They were to cause a great disturbance. Cherry left the building, noticing someone watching the three of them; a genin by her appearance. Cherry managed to create the signal that started the mission and the two puppet wielders began destroying the building with their puppets. Cherry stayed outside, keeping watch and using her clan abilities to make the illusion of the flames engulfing the building, stopping anyone else entering. While this was happening, their sensei was actually impersonating a Cloud ninja and tried to assassinate the Sand's Kage. When a Sannin arrived and started to attack the three of them, they fled and Cherry dragged them away from the gates to retreat back to Mist, not liking their situation, leaving their sensei behind.

Arriving back at Mist, Cherry jumped into the water at the dock, washing away the blood and sand before retreating back to her sensei's dojo. There, she stripped down to her underwear and dried the clothes and cloak by the fireplace. Not long after, their came a knock on the door. Still in her underwear, Cherry answered the door, cold, wet and only wearing her underwear. On the other side was Tensai and Haruken of Squad Two. Tensai was obviously embarrassed but had come to inquire about possible Taijutsu training under Z's care. Haruken had come to apologize. Hideki, seeing how tired Cherry was, brought out a roll-up bed for her by the fire to rest and stay warm, even giving her his jacket to help.

Sensei Z returned to the dojo after resting at the hospital and gave Cherry a white cloak to wear instead of Hideki's jacket to help her stay warm. He taught her how to create a paralyzing concoction out of the toxin from the Pufferfish and its antidote. Not long after, Cherry went to her household to collect her belongings but was attacked by her uncle, nearly killed if not for the intervention of her sensei. However, a strange man named Zaiaku appeared and lured Cherry away to the forest where he implemented the genjutsu of "Lust" on her and Cherry fell helplessly to its effects. He carried Cherry off to the hospital where two members of the Akatsuki were located, having invaded Mist, and asked Cherry to burn the hospital to the ground, seducing her already succumbed mind with words of kinship and understanding before stealing her first kiss. Cherry razed the Hospital to the ground before being knocked out by an Akatsuki member.

Once unconscious, Cherry's other half appeared, going on to continue to burn down the hospital when Zane finally arrived. The other half went away on its own accord, leaving Cherry weak and feeble. Zane comforted her and revealed his face to her, the trauma of Cherry's other half pushing Zane to finally reveal himself in his haste to protect her. She was tended to before taken off to the dojo by Zane to rest. During her slumber, Cherry's mother visited her, carrying the sword which was only to be carried by the Kurama head. Cherry tried to stop her when she awoke to see the sword sitting before her but was too weak. By the time she managed to explain to Zane what the blade meant, it was already too late and Cherry was then, by right, the Clan Head. Realizing this, Cherry took a vow and took on her family name of Kurama instead of Yamazakura; her mother's maiden name.



Village: Kirigakure
Rank: Chuunin


________________________________________|B|attle |I|nformation

Summoning: Spiders
Clan/Bloodline: Kurama Clan

Weapon of Choice: Razor-Edged Fan

Ninja Class: Genjutsu Class

Strengths:
--> Primary: Great Chakra Control
--> Second:
--> Tertiary: Agility

Weaknesses:
--> Primary: Weak Body / Frail physique
--> Second: Low physical power
--> Custom: Close Combat Fighting


Shinobi Skills:
• Can learn Genjutsu in 2 fewer posts than normal.
• -2 Chakra Point costs for all Genjutsu.
• If you are 1 rank above the opponent, they cannot break out of the
Genjutsu UNLESS they are also in the Genjutsu class or Medical class.
• 1 more post than required to learn Ninjutsu and Taijutsu.
• Can learn 5 Taijutsu techniques of one Taijutsu Style at Jounin
• Can learn 10 Taijutsu techniques of one Taijutsu Style, (or 5 techniques of 2 different styles) at Sannin/Kage.
• Taijutsu attacks are counted as one rank lower then normal.
• Cannot learn Medical Ninjutsu


Chakra Element(s):
Primary --> Fuuton
Secondary --> (learned at Chuunin, can only learn jutsu up to 1 rank lower then current rank )


Chakra Color: Grey

Total Chakra Points: 40


________________________________________|S|quad |I|nformation

Sensei:
Team Mate:
Team Mate:


________________________________________|J|utsu |I|nformation

Non-Elemental
Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu)
Kai - Dispell



Wind - Fuuton

Rank E - (Basic)
Kaze Bunshin (Wind Clone)
Yadama Furooseigyo (Projectile Control Skill)

Rank D - (Genin)
Kamaitachi no Jutsu (Slashing Wind Skill)
Kaze Bakuhatsu (Wind Explosion)
Bouseki Tate no Kaze (Spinning Shield of Winds)
Fuuton: Shinkuutai Naihatsu (Wind Element: Air Pocket Bursts)
Okuridashi Kaze (Propelling Winds)
Kaze no Yoroi (Armor of Wind)

Rank C - (Chuunin)
Fuuton: Tei Hakusha (Wind Release: Air Riding)
Kaze Gyorai no Jutsu (Wind Torpedo)
Daikamaitachi no Jutsu (Grand Slashing Wind Skill)
Kaze no Yaiba (Wind Sword)
Fuuton: Furyuu no Jutsu (Wind Release: Wind Dragon)
Fuuton: Tatsumaki Wana (Wind Release: Tornado Trap)
Kaze Shunshin no Jutsu (Wind Instantaneous Body Skill)

Rank B - (Special Jounin)




Rank A - (Jounin)




Rank S - (Sannin/Kage)




Element - Japanese Element Name

Rank E - (Basic)





Rank D - (Genin)




Rank C - (Chuunin)




Rank B - (Special Jounin)




Rank A - (Jounin)




Rank S - (Sannin/Kage)





Genjutsu

Rank E - (Basic)




Rank D - (Genin)
Magen: Narakumi No Jutsu (Demonic Illusion: Vision of Hell Technique)
Bouzenjishitsu no Jutsu (Stupification Technique)
Meisai no Jutsu (Camouflage Technique)
Ikamono Chishio (Fake Blood)
Fukushi no Jutsu (Double Vision Technique)
Suiganmourou no Jutsu (Drunken Sight Technique)
Magen: Kokuni Arazu No Jutsu (Demonic Illusion: False Surroundings Technique)
Kori Shinchuu no Jutsu (Sly Fellow Mind Skill)

Rank C - (Chuunin)
Mind's Sight {Custom} - [Jutsu Description]
Wa-Suto Akumu (Worst Nightmare) - [Jutsu Description]
Tatsumaki Naraku (Hell Tornado) - [Jutsu Description]


Rank B - (Special Jounin)
Beautiful Delusion {Custom} - [Jutsu Description]



Rank A - (Jounin)




Rank S - (Sannin/Kage)






________________________________________|T|aijutsu - |S|tyles , |M|aneuvers , and |A|bilities

Taijutsu/Weapon Styles Allowed:

Primary Style:
--> Current level of Mastery:


(Provide brief descriptions below. Also provide a link to your approved Taijutsu style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)

Maneuvers

Abilities

____________________________________

(Use the format above for Secondary and onward Taijutsu styles)


________________________________________|W|eapons - |C|ustom |W|eapons and associated |W|eapon |S|tyles

# Custom Weapons Allowed: 0

Weapon Type: Razor-Edged Fan
Weapon Range: Close, (Mid to Long with Wind Jutsu)
Weapon Location: Right Hip
Weapon Description:
Special Properties: Weighted/Designed specifically to be used with Wind Jutsu.

____________________________________

Weapon Type: Kurama Ceramonial Sword
Weapon Range: Close
Weapon Location: Left Hip
Weapon Description:
Special Properties:


________________________________________|A|pparel

Headband Location | Style | Color: Neck | Tied | Black
|
Flack Jacket Style | Color: None
|
Kunai Holster Location | Color: Right Thigh | Black
|
Projectile Holster Location | Color: Left Thigh | Black
|
Summoning Scroll Holster Location | Color: Lower Back, Horizontal | Black

Exploding Smoke Grenade: 5
Makibishi: 30
Kunai: 10
Shuriken: 20
Flash Bombs: 5


________________________________________|C|haracter |I|nformation

Height: 1.45m
Weight: 64kg
Body Build: Thin, Frail
Eye Color: Pink
Hair Color: Pink
Family: All Deceased
Theme song:


________________________________________|M|ission |I|nformation

S Rank: 0
A Rank: 0
B Rank: 0
C Rank: 1
D Rank: 6

Genin --> Chuunin , Proof

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Cobra_X
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Aged Gaian


Deil Grist
Crew

PostPosted: Wed Mar 03, 2010 2:19 pm


Gohan Uchiha92
Cobra_X
Gohan:

1. Instead of saying "All basic" for Earth and water jutsu ... can't you just link the jutsu like you did for all the others?

2. Your Wood Manipulations need links to their descriptions and proof of training.

3. I fixed your Shinobi Skills and parts of your weaknesses for you.

4. Could you also fill out the "Body Type" field in character Information?

Well, I didn't learn the Earth and Water Basics, neither did I the Wood techniques, you approved it like that actually in the start.


Yeah, that's the same with me. The "Basic Ones" for wind are the ones I started with as a genin. When you start as a genin, you automatically know all of the basic jutsu for your primary element.
PostPosted: Wed Mar 03, 2010 4:33 pm


Deil Grist
Gohan Uchiha92
Cobra_X
Gohan:

1. Instead of saying "All basic" for Earth and water jutsu ... can't you just link the jutsu like you did for all the others?

2. Your Wood Manipulations need links to their descriptions and proof of training.

3. I fixed your Shinobi Skills and parts of your weaknesses for you.

4. Could you also fill out the "Body Type" field in character Information?

Well, I didn't learn the Earth and Water Basics, neither did I the Wood techniques, you approved it like that actually in the start.


Yeah, that's the same with me. The "Basic Ones" for wind are the ones I started with as a genin. When you start as a genin, you automatically know all of the basic jutsu for your primary element.

Alright, well in some cases, such as my character... it doesn't make sense for them to know anything, but I suppose the basic jutsu dont need links for proof... HOWEVER, they should still be listed with a link to the descriptions just for ease.

Cobra_X
Vice Captain

Aged Gaian


Deil Grist
Crew

PostPosted: Wed Mar 03, 2010 4:56 pm


Done. Approved?
PostPosted: Wed Mar 03, 2010 9:06 pm


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Full Name: Kingu Shisui
Nicknames: Kingu,
Age: 11
Birthdate: 4/19
Gender: Male
Ethnicity: 50% African, 50% Caucasian

Nindo: "I can hear it, the world screaming for help....Unfortunately I'm deaf to it's words. When my ears are open I'd rather everything just become still...Like stagnant water"

Personality: Kingu is a highly skilled ninja and he knows it, so he can be pretty c**k-sure and even downright arrogant. He is a very heated individual, seeming to be very emotional at his young age. He does have training in being emotionless but he usually masks his face when he want's to hide his emotions. One of Kingu's biggest faults is being unsure of himself and during those times he becomes quite cold and distant, alienating friends and family in order to reclaim himself.

Behavior: Kingu is a hardworking, arrogant, and highly intellectual youth. He is dedicated to being a ninja, working night and day in perfecting his skills. He has applied his teachings to his way of life to the point of constant suspicion, unusually aware of his surroundings, and even outright deceptive.

Biography: (Back Story) Kingu was born underwater while his mother was struggling to escape a sealed basket she had been captured in. The basket was large, containing ten other captives, all of who helped deliver Kingu and all of who were saved by Kingu's father.

In the years that followed it became apparent Kingu was made to be a ninja, displaying extraordinary traits and abilities during his time in the Academy. Due to his young age and the advice from one of the Academies councilors Kingu remained in the Academy for two extra years. In all of these years he was near the top of his class, and one of the more capable ninja without any bloodlines. When he finally graduated from the Academy he took a trip with his brothers and sisters into the wilderness of Kumogakure, intent of proving to them how good of a ninja he was. It took three months for them to return, and when they did all five of them were near the point of death. They had insisted that no search party be sent after them during those months and encountered bandits and wild animals while scrounging for food and water. Sometime into this trip Kingu was separated from his brothers and sisters and was confronted by a team of bandits. During the ensuing battle Kingu activated his Rinnegan, but was still unable to defeat them alone. His brothers and sisters protected him from the bandits combined attacks, seeming to be dead until after Kingu drew upon the Rinnegans powers to kill the bandits.

Drawing on the Rinnegans power so early and for so long left him weak, leaving him comatose while his everly injured brothers and sisters took him home with them. Kingu would remain in this coma for an additional two weeks, claiming to have started on a path through hell with his Rinnegan able to be activated, albeit through a series of hand seals.


Village: Kumogakure
Rank: Chuunin



________________________________________|B|attle |I|nformation

Summoning: N/A
Bloodline: Rinnegan


Weapon of Choice: Kingu maintains equal prowess with all weaponry, however Kumogakure supports skill in kenjutsu, thus Kingu has basic skill with a katana

Ninja Class: Ninjutsu

Strengths:
● Great Chakra Control
● Intelligence
● Durability

Weaknesses:
● Elemental Vulnerability- Because Kingu has inherited the Rinnegan he is able to master all six forms of nature manipulation but out of all of these elements he displays a notable weakness to Fire techniques.
● Cunning
● Age-Being very young means that Kingu may not be able to maintain constant attacks as long as his seniors.


Shinobi Skills:
● Rinnegan-After using a brief series of hand seals the young Kingu is capable of activating his Rinnegan, allowing him to sense chakra and spiritual energy(including barriers and traps), extend and include his senses into any clones or bodies that possess his Rinnegan, along with granting him the ability to manipulate all six forms of nature manipulation and learn techniques faster than other ninjas. The Rinnegan, at this stage, drains chakra from Kingu but a relatively small amount. Once activated his pupil emits a series of concentric circles and gray fills the space between.
● Can learn Ninjutsu in 1 less post than required
• 1 more post than required to learn Genjutsu and Taijutsu.
• Cannot learn Medical Ninjutsu


Chakra Element(s):
- Primary: All Six forms of Nature Manipulation.

Chakra Color: Kingu's chakra is a deep blue




________________________________________|S|quad |I|nformation

Sensei:
Team Mate:
Team Mate:


________________________________________|J|utsu |I|nformation

Non-Elemental
Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu)
Kai - Dispell
Walking on Walls
Water Walking

Lightning-Raiton
E ranked→
Flickering Lights
Static Strings
Electricity Resistance Training
D ranked→
Lightning Clone
Current Transfer
Lightning Bolt
Lightning Transformation
C ranked→
Raiton: Raikou Hitofuki no Jutsu (Lightning Release: Lightning Blast Technique)
Kanri Soushitsu no Jutsu (Control Loss Technique)
Raiton: Raikou Shunshin (Lightning Release: Lightning Instantaneous)
Hikuhiku Eda no Jutsu (Twitching Limb Technique)
Raiton: Raikou Kousen no Jutsu (Lightning Release: Lightning Beam)
Dendou Bakuhatsu no Jutsu (Electric Detonation Technique)
Water - Suiton
Water Clone
Fish Spit




Genjutsu






Rinnegan/Custom
Bansho Ten'nin & Shinra Tensei-Not yet learned
Directly derived jutsu-Heavenly Rejection of Gods Tool-Not yet learned



Cloud Release
Directly derived jutsu


________________________________________|T|aijutsu - |S|tyles , |M|aneuvers , and |A|bilities

Taijutsu Styles Known: Sutansu no Kitsune - The Fox Stance

Primary Style: Sutansu no Kitsune - The Fox Stance (learned at Genin)

Description: Fox Stance is prized for its speed and deceptiveness. It specializes in movement, agility, and countering an opponent's strikes. Not holding to any standard conventions, users of Fox Style have an odd stance: arms out to the side, fingers splayed, with a slight curve. Legs apart, bent low, with a slight curve to the back. This provides a good spring point, allowing for quick movements, and the low center of gravity aids in defense. Chakra is concentrated in the limbs, for movement, speed, and power. The loose formation of the style allows for kicks, even in a style as mobile as this, similar in mechanic to Drunken Master. Fox Stance has excellent movement and range, good kicks and grapples, and fair punches and blocks. The very open structure of the stance make the users very unstable. Fox Stance works well with Fire, Lightning, and Bladed Weapons. Ranged Weapons also provide a distinct advantage, but are usually weapons designed to bewilder or confuse. It does not work well with Earth, which it is resistant to. It is weak to Water and Wind. Unlike other, similar styles, Fox Style is relatively new, and, as such, relatively unknown. Created as an alternative to the Three Stance Styles, Fox Style incorporates elements from all three, balancing the strengths and weaknesses of the three to create a sort of "jack-of-all-trades style". An amalgam of different fighting techniques, first introduced by the Sangre Clan, Fox Stance is well-suited to anyone with an incredible natural defense, such as a rock-hard body, or a body that can easily absorb impact. Any strong defensive attribute.

Rules:
Must continously train otherwise, you will lose the stamina, speed and movement.

Must have Katon or Raiton Chakra


Maneuvers
Name: Vicious Elbow
Rank: D
Range: Grapple
Jutsu Type: Taijutsu
Element: None
Description: The user exerts a burst of chakra into their elbow with a simultaneous strike. If the concentrated pressure successfully lands on the opponent's temple, it will stun them for seeral seconds and cause blurry vision. If it lands on their solar plexus, it will take the wind out of them and stun them for a moment.

Name: Counter Strike
Rank: D
Range: Melee
Jutsu Type: Taijutsu
Element: None
Description: A carefully timed attack designed to contact the opponent at the same moment as the opponent's strike. When an incoming attack is made, the user attempts to deliver a straightforward attack at a weak point on the enemy, such as a armpit or groin. Because the attack is so perfectly timed, the target must either pull their own strike or take the full force of the user's. This technique is especially effective with bladed weapons.

Name: Tremor
Rank: D
Range: 2 meter (2 yard) radius
Jutsu Type: Taijutsu
Element: None
Description: The user builds chakra into their hands and then slams their fists or palms into the ground. By exerting enough force, they are able to send out a ripple that can stun or trip any moving ninja caught in the effective range. This technique cannot be used in quick succession, as it puts a strain on the user's chakra network and arms.

Name: Skullcrusher
Rank: D
Range: Grapple
Jutsu Type: Taijutsu
Element: None
Description: To use this technique, the defending ninja must be stunned or otherwise paused for a second. The user grabs the stunned opponent around the abdomen and picks them up. Then, with a sudden twist of the arms, they invert their captive and slam the defender's head into the ground. This causes fairly intense pain and a loss of concentration.

Name: Shoulder Catapult
Rank: D
Range: Grapple (close-medium range throw)
Jutsu Type: Taijutsu
Element: None
Description: This technique can be used when the defending warrior has one arm outstretched, such as the apex of a strike or other horizontal punch. The user ducks low, grabbing the defending warrior at the armpit and the wrist. The user then applies torque with their torso and throws the opponent over their wrist, launching them away and upside down.

Abilities


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(Use the format above for Secondary and onward Taijutsu styles)



________________________________________|W|eapons - |C|ustom |W|eapons and associated |W|eapon |S|tyles

# Custom Weapons Allowed:

Custom Weapon 1: _________ (attained at Genin/Chuunin/Jounin/Special Jounin/Sannin/Kage)

((Provide brief descriptions below. Also, provide a link to your approved weapon in the Custom Weapon Approval thread)

Weapon Type:
Weapon Range:
Weapon Description:
Special Properties:
Weapon Location:

Associated Weapon Style:

((Provide brief descriptions below. Also, provide a link to your approved weapon style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)

Maneuvers

Techniques


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(Use the format above for any other Custom weapons / Weapon styles)


________________________________________|A|pparel


Headband Location | Style | Color:
| Forehead
Flack Jacket Style | Color:
N/A
Kunai Holster Location | Color:
| Thigh and waist pouch
Projectile Holster Location | Color:
| Waist pouch
Scroll Holster Location | Color:
| Waist pouch

Exploding Smoke Grenade: 3
Makibishi: 30
Shuriken: 15
Flash Bombs: 3



________________________________________|C|haracter |I|nformation

Height: 4'9
Weight: 76
Body Build: Ectomorphic
Eye Color: Deep Gray
Hair Color: Black
Family: Shisui
Theme song:


________________________________________|M|ission |I|nformation

S Rank:
A Rank:
B Rank:
C Rank:
D Rank:

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