the eyes of the fire

• Artist: synystermage
• Description: this is a song i just wrote at the top of my head.
  tell me what you think about it... this song is meant to have a three pased beat.
  
  
  thank you-shadow (a.k.a. synystermage)
• Date: 07/25/2009
• Tags: eyes fire

you see me lookin through the window.
knowing how much you hurt. i feel your pain i know your game but you still see the fire burnin in my eyes. know that im here lost without the pain ,still loosin this game. hatred burns in the eyes of the fire. fire burns without the love hate loves without the pain. but you still see the fire.

you, dont know what its like to lose the one you love. before you even knew his name. your already loosin this game.
life, burns in the eyes of fire.

i feel your pain i know your game but you still see the fire burnin in my eyes. know that im here lost without the pain ,still loosin this game. this is the eyes of the fire.

Comments

[Velveteen Fancy]

I have a feeling that I'm not going to make and friends with this comment. I know these are song lyrics, however I do believe if you're putting this up to be rated, you need to clean it up: capitalise your Is, and letters at the beginning of a sentence, don't drop apostrophes, basic conventions like that.

Now from a writers stand point, I don't like this whole woe is me, I'm in pain, idea there's no real deep meaning in this. There's an attempt but in reality nothing deep

[Yumi Salmoni]

pretty ^^

[Cerumei]

i'm not a composer, but i think your lyrics are good :]