last breath

• Artist: ZimJordanJ
• Description: I had to write a poem for english class, so it took me 6 mins? idk lol tell me what you think, i had to fashion it after another poem and the mood was about killing your enemies and anger
• Date: 05/07/2009
• Tags: last breath death

the sun rises upon a new day,
once again i fall into the fray.
so many dead, so many dieing,
wifes at home begin crying.

one by one, the sides will falter,
before the rush, the men will pray,
hoping salvation from an alter,
anxious their steel will yet stay.

soon the blades will begin to sound,
every man begins to shake with terror,
and even if the soldiers are reknown,
the outcome won't cause a tremor.

Comments

[xXsecret_artistXx]

this is good for being written in 6 minutes. ^^

[alsakajb]

its ok...not the best but something to think about...