angel

• Artist: darksangel34
• Description: random....don't ask..LEAVE COMMENTS!!!!
• Date: 03/26/2009
• Tags: angel love loss hope trial

she twirls around
you talk to her
is she your
angel?
when you
kissed me
i thought i was you
angel.
but maybe
i'm not
someone will
treat me
right
but i will
always
be
your











angel.


if you want me.

Comments

[Xx_Making-Time_xX]

it's sweet, i've felt like that a million of times, when i think that person is mine and im his, he goes around and finds another....I love it!

[gabbwee2]

I like this poem just like i like PIE

[x Solo Lobo x]

we all have our angel and we all dream of finding them. i luv it

[290DarkStars]

great job! even though it lacked rhyme, IT DIDN'T NEED ANY! yes indeed. You have shown us an emotion that we have all felt. And you translated it into this form of ryhtem and haunting (in a good way) lyrics. great job! 5/5. Comment back please! I would be honerd to have you comment on my stuff! mrgreen

[Demonio69]

Everyday, we look torwards the sky, and we hope to see the angel of our dreams..Yet when we look, all we see is our emotions mirrored back at us..We wait and we love, but in the end, we find that angel, they know the roads we crossed..