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Lets rip it up,
and not look back,
because none of it really matters.
stay with me,
I'll need you forever,
because you made it that way.
- by Liquid-Valo |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/16/2008 |
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- Title: Rip it up
- Artist: Liquid-Valo
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Description:
ehh... I'm not sure what to say about this one ^^ I like it though... it poped into my head one day so I wrote it down. yeah I know it doesn't rhyme,and I don't know where the book is so this isn't the original... but I don't much care...
enjoy! - Date: 07/16/2008
- Tags: ripitup
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Comments (4 Comments)
- LittleNewcomb - 01/23/2009
- sometimes, the simpler the poem the better... do not change it
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- Eleiza0250 - 07/17/2008
- you should expand upon both verses and connect them
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- Kawaii Katsy - 07/16/2008
- They don't really go together. You should have elaborated or posted them separate.
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- Kimiaki - 07/16/2008
- .....?
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