The War of Earth

• Artist: Giand
• Description: In the year 2453 a race of aliens bent on destroying Earth. You are Earth's elite team called the "Ravens" . You are rank B student , you are kinda famous. You are very good at fighting. Your high tec guns are very good. You are a Sgt.
  The race your fighting agaist evil its trying to kill humans. Some how the aleins are some how human like. But powers unlike anything , powers that gods have. You have that power.
• Date: 08/09/2008
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Now that the intro is done. Ill tell what plane,mecha,swords and guns you have. The plane u have is a rank B fighter class machine gun that can destroy a building in one shot. Mecha is a Karar Class Rare class some people dont get it not even the people with Rank A will get some will but rare B. Sword is a solid Karat class not rare. Gun is a Vesix class command class. Ok now you on ship heading for planet Arcton you sat by a girl/guy u like. But few secounds later your ship was under attack by a Fagine enemy ship fighters are rare on that ship. But the ship was gone in a flash the secound you got ur gun but the ship is landing now. Now you have position a front line. The enemy heard ur ship coming down prepared the for the fight. You did not know cause UR SHIP NO WINDOWS! Ok u dont ur powers yet. But u look back and saw 9 of your troops taking there position intil u saw a whole fleet of ships. Now hundreds are troops are following you the enemy is being destroyed. But u lost alot of troops doing that attack. End of Chapter 1

Comments

[Thorn Of The Sky]

And one thing,when you write,please don't use stuff like,"ur and u"its not right.Im just saying,online its semi ok,but if you had tried to get it published,then of course you should know it wouldn't be.And still....ok then....

[xxxSPARTAN 119xxx]

realism comments (sorry if i'm too nit-picky):
1.Swords? WTF, swords have no place on a modern battlefield, let alone a 25th century battlefield, you'd get shot to pieces before you got close enough to use it.
2.Mecha, while a staple of sci-fi, are unlikely to replace tanks, as many science fiction stories suggest. I mean, any sort of mechanize walker would be slower than a tank, and more likely to get stuck in mud or snow. Also, it would be an easy target for enemy aircraft.

[Joeyc2410]

hahahahahaha LOL!