london and the key (k h)

• Artist: TaRtz_ichiru
• Description: this is just an installment
• Date: 08/05/2008
• Tags: keyoflondon

Mr.Sweeny Todd. "I can't it's closed by a force an affiar has gone wrong in this world perhaps something bad has happened as he said that a group of heartless and a man in judge robes appear. "Oh great heartless," said Kibez as he takes them out the barber attacks the man in robes but is knocked back "Sweeny let me handle this" Kibez said as he attacked the man and Sweeny threw the barber razor at the man's neck and blood squirted everywhere before he died he said "Benjamin Barker!". The keyblade lunged forward and sealed the keyhole

Comments

[mysticrydder]

Sweeny Todd was the serial killer barber who would feed his victims to anyone who ate his pies. you just stole this idea from the movie. please try to bo a bit more creative. its not even worth rating.

[Marcus Evans]

Spelling and grammar errors, nonsense "action" (I presume that's what you were aiming at) that you clearly don't have a grasp of how to write, and a character that is only a name and uses a weapon from a video game. 1/5