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Melting snow running,
Like tears flowing down my face.
Tongue stuck to flagpole.
- by We Have A Winnar |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: Winter Haiku
- Artist: We Have A Winnar
- Description: A breif poem about the perils of wintertime curiosity.
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: winter haiku
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Comments (6 Comments)
- 123456tyi - 01/17/2011
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horrible and thats all i have to say
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- Symptom_of_Society - 11/29/2010
- i think its good, but the last line doesnt fit it.
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- Alaniah - 07/12/2009
- nice. haikus are very brief but they leave good impression with strong words. i like it!!
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- kalenicole - 02/22/2009
- I like haiku. But I really don't think the last line should be there. Otherwise it was great!
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- Ryu_Wolfy - 12/16/2008
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its a haiku purplekittycat
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- PurpleKittyCat - 12/16/2008
- umm.. 3 lines? It started out great though..
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