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  • Edward Elric
  • Title: Edward Elric
  • Artist: XxChimichangaxX
  • Description: hey guys, i need your help. this is just the beginning of the picture. do u guys think his hands are to small for his body btw. i knda thought they might be. help me out. am i going in the right direction? i'm thinking of eventually coloring it... well? p.s. plz try not to be too harsh, unless it really helps

    thnx ^_^


    Edit: i have finished the picture, plz come see the final version
  • Date: 11/09/2008
  • Tags: edward elric
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • your initial diagnosis - 06/13/2009
  • It's pretty good, but the mouth is weird - looking.
    And like a previous comment, the hair looks more like it has a pipe cleaner bending it into that shape than the wind straying it.
  • XxChimichangaxX - 06/12/2009
  • ty, that is very helpful! i think i might have gotten better with hair. i tried in some of my lastest drawings with Captain Riza, so ty sooo much! >_<
  • - - asphyxiated xx - 06/12/2009
  • It looks rather nice. The hands are small, but no biggy. The hair looks a little stiff, when drawing, try using passive strokes with your pen/pencil, whatever you use. Be a little gentler when drawing hair that sways with wind. That is the effect your trying for right?
    Anyhow, it's good and I give you a 5/5. ^^
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