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- | Submitted on 02/09/2009 |
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- Title: One day
- Artist: 0rgasmic 0reo
- Description: One day you'll see...This is my second writing entry so go easy on me plz.
- Date: 02/09/2009
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- markbluedaemon - 02/11/2009
- I see no problem with this poem exactly as it is. I, too am an author, and while a publisher might suggest you make certain changes (why in place of how come for instance) the would not require it. Great poem.
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- Bridget Paloumar - 02/11/2009
- Grammar is terrible, but the emotional contact is good. You have talent. All you need to do now is polish it up and work at this sort of stuff more. (Trust me, I'm an author myself.)
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