Quick Invo Tektek - 300mil Grand Prize! - CLOSED!

[sK1zzL3rz]

inu_spike89

sK1zzL3rz

How exactly does the first one need to be refined? I removed a few items here to make it a little simpler, is that what you meant?

Here's an edit of the rainbow one

Here are some new ones razz

[fei lo]

inu_spike89

xH i d d e n L o v e

Second attempt!

Wow! These are both really pretty. I like the colors, though black and red is playing it pretty safe. Still, they are pretty awesome. ^^

Thanks! I've tried a different color combination, but I just couldn't decide which wing/without looked best ;c

I wanted this one to look like an angel falling from the sky but..idk D:

And a casual cutie that reminds me of nanami c:

[inu_spike89]

DerseKnightDave

inu_spike89

DerseKnightDave

inu_spike89

DerseKnightDave

I would but I have to sleep for the evening I will make some more tomorrow if you'd like

Understandable, understandable. lol This contest is open until July 30th, so please feel free to stop by again! xD

I most definitely will (also was wondering if you wanted to add me as a friend as I can't do that from mobile)

Sure! Request sent. ^^ Ooh, you have a trade still waiting for your approval. xD

yeah I know I can't accept from mobile

Ah, the folly of the mobile app. Good for checking in, not so good for responding and doing stuff. lol

[inu_spike89]

DerseKnightDave

inu_spike89

beige n black broken doll

omg She's gorgeous! Ack, you're killing me with your awesome! /(^o^)/

[fei lo]

inu_spike89

xH i d d e n L o v e

I hope it isn't too dark LOL feedback pls smile

lol She's not too dark at all. A little bit too much going on at the top, though. It might just be one accessory or mod too many. Thank you for participating!!

My feeble attempt at recovering it ahaha

[xe brat prince]

Alright well I apparently decided today would be a good day to kill myself mentally because TURQUOISE WHY.

I know there are a couple of things that are out of place but I figured I'd leave them as such because they're relatively passable and yeah.



Edit:
I'll add more to this post til you respond to it.

[Lucinnia]

inu_spike89

What do you think?

[roleplayingobsessed]

inu_spike89

DerseKnightDave

inu_spike89

beige n black broken doll

omg She's gorgeous! Ack, you're killing me with your awesome! /(^o^)/

well thank you i honestly wish i owned even half your items lol

[inu_spike89]

TERRlBLY

Wow, your invo is fun. I loooove working with wings. You will probably see more from me~

Wow! Thank you so much. xD I worked really hard on this invo; I'm glad you're having fun with it. ^^ These are amazing! I'm going to have a tough time picking out my favorite. lol Thank you for participating!!

[inu_spike89]

MsTufsy

Awww, these are so cute. I like Number 1 a bit more - the background blends into the wings too much. I think we might have to consider some sort of skirt to cover up the dark pattern on the leg mod. Thank you for participating!

[MsTufsy]

inu_spike89

MsTufsy

Awww, these are so cute. I like Number 1 a bit more - the background blends into the wings too much. I think we might have to consider some sort of skirt to cover up the dark pattern on the leg mod. Thank you for participating!

Okay this is what I got

[inu_spike89]

Shiro-Hikari-Chan

inu_spike89

one more try

Oooh, how pretty! I'm really digging Number 3 in this set. Thank you for participating!

[inu_spike89]

papermuse

I gave it a shot and might play around with your invo more later

These are all so cute! I really like Numbers 1 and 2, though black and red is playing it a bit safe. I'm still loving Number 2. I think I might add her to the favorites. ^^

[inu_spike89]

lloohhh

inu_spike89

lloohhh

inu_spike89

lloohhh

will try again later orz

She's pretty, but there's a lot going on. We might want to simplify either the items used or the color pallet. Thank you for participating!

are this better?

I like Number 3 much more than the others, though there is still a lot going on. Also, she's missing her mouth. ( ^ 3 ^ )/

my grammar emotion_facepalm

always forget the mouth :' i thought maybe i should scrap the teal? how're these?

I think leaving the teal out worked out better. I slowly falling in love with Number 3. xD

[inu_spike89]

sK1zzL3rz

inu_spike89

sK1zzL3rz

How exactly does the first one need to be refined? I removed a few items here to make it a little simpler, is that what you meant?

Here's an edit of the rainbow one

Here are some new ones razz

First one doesn't really need that head piece, since the hair is already covering part of her face and you're using the glasses to counteract that. There is also Kottan Bell's, which blend into the sleeve color and make it seem like her arm is extended in an unusual position.
Rainbow could maybe use a leg mod instead of the Run the World heels and Butterfly's Lament leggins. Numbers 2 and 3 of the new set look pretty cute, though. ^^