Constructive Criticism: A Pricing Thread

What do you think of this idea?

I think it's a great idea!	77.0%	[ 47 ]
I think it's a stupid idea.	1.6%	[ 1 ]
I think it's not going to work.	4.9%	[ 3 ]
I'll definitely use it!	14.8%	[ 9 ]
Other (post about it!)	1.6%	[ 1 ]
Total Votes:			[ 61 ]

[a busted radio]

Lukewarm City

haha okay.

can't wait to see when you;re done 8D
it does look really nice.

[bunnysan]

and dis is mah chibi, whatchuu think? surprised

price wise?

[Vivequinox]

bunnysan

and dis is mah chibi, whatchuu think? surprised

price wise?

awwe I love it!!
5-10bil maybe cx

[bunnysan]

Amour Belle et Deces

bunnysan

and dis is mah chibi, whatchuu think? surprised

price wise?

awwe I love it!!
5-10bil maybe cx

crying crying crying crying oh my god really? i feel so proud.

i used to draw like poo.

http://samurai-kenshin.deviantart.com/gallery/

[Vivequinox]

bunnysan

Amour Belle et Deces

bunnysan

and dis is mah chibi, whatchuu think? surprised

price wise?

awwe I love it!!
5-10bil maybe cx

crying crying crying crying oh my god really? i feel so proud.

i used to draw like poo.

http://samurai-kenshin.deviantart.com/gallery/

personally i like that stuff even more. o-o

[bunnysan]

Amour Belle et Deces

bunnysan

Amour Belle et Deces

bunnysan

and dis is mah chibi, whatchuu think? surprised

price wise?

awwe I love it!!
5-10bil maybe cx

crying crying crying crying oh my god really? i feel so proud.

i used to draw like poo.

http://samurai-kenshin.deviantart.com/gallery/

personally i like that stuff even more. o-o

xD oh god nooo! don't say that. i see everything that is wrronnnggg

[Vivequinox]

bunnysan

xD oh god nooo! don't say that. i see everything that is wrronnnggg

two completely different art styles. well, several, really. all nice.

[bunnysan]

Amour Belle et Deces

bunnysan

xD oh god nooo! don't say that. i see everything that is wrronnnggg

two completely different art styles. well, several, really. all nice.

>.> i think it was a phase where i was trying to figure out which art style was right for me.

[Vivequinox]

bunnysan

Amour Belle et Deces

bunnysan

xD oh god nooo! don't say that. i see everything that is wrronnnggg

two completely different art styles. well, several, really. all nice.

>.> i think it was a phase where i was trying to figure out which art style was right for me.

I'm there right now. ;___;

[bunnysan]

Amour Belle et Deces

bunnysan

Amour Belle et Deces

bunnysan

xD oh god nooo! don't say that. i see everything that is wrronnnggg

two completely different art styles. well, several, really. all nice.

>.> i think it was a phase where i was trying to figure out which art style was right for me.

I'm there right now. ;___;

is it like the angsty teenager mood? xD that how i was like when i was going through the styles.

[Vivequinox]

bunnysan

Amour Belle et Deces

bunnysan

Amour Belle et Deces

bunnysan

xD oh god nooo! don't say that. i see everything that is wrronnnggg

two completely different art styles. well, several, really. all nice.

>.> i think it was a phase where i was trying to figure out which art style was right for me.

I'm there right now. ;___;

is it like the angsty teenager mood? xD that how i was like when i was going through the styles.

yeah, I simply can't find my style. Everything I draw tends to look different these days.

[bunnysan]

Amour Belle et Deces

bunnysan

Amour Belle et Deces

bunnysan

Amour Belle et Deces

bunnysan

xD oh god nooo! don't say that. i see everything that is wrronnnggg

two completely different art styles. well, several, really. all nice.

>.> i think it was a phase where i was trying to figure out which art style was right for me.

I'm there right now. ;___;

is it like the angsty teenager mood? xD that how i was like when i was going through the styles.

yeah, I simply can't find my style. Everything I draw tends to look different these days.

i know the feels v.v;; as long as it looks good i guess.

[Vivequinox]

bunnysan

i know the feels v.v;; as long as it looks good i guess.

eeeyup. it sucks man.

[Hysterhex]

bunnysan

and dis is mah chibi, whatchuu think? surprised

Pricewise, no idea. Chibi's make bank is all I know.

You asked for a critique earlier though. And really, since it is so stylized and chibi, my only critiques are:

1) Learn to draw hands

2) Breasts (I myself made a tutorial here! warning, artistic nudity)

Breasts are all about being squishy!! But they also rely on laws of physics (stFu rosario vampire.) And they also lie on the ribcage which isn't, you know, horribly hard to draw. Just takes some reference and some practice! Hopefully I was helpful, haha.

[Thicc Soldier 24]

bunnysan

i'm not a strong colorer, and shading is horrendous for me so i usually do a face effect but it can't hurt to try ^.^ Thanks for the advice!!

and i'm just a beginner with animation, i have to do it by hand frame by frame, but i can see where you're coming from. i shouldn't sell them until i've gotten better.

and yeah >.> i always like to put blush in those places to get that "cutesy effect" but if it looks weird >.< i'll switch it up

Your welcome ^_^
I think looking at a tutorial like this might help [X] with filling in movement without having to draw all the slides hand by hand. Edit: If you're using Photoshop

I wouldn't say the blush look weird, just heavily applied, I would suggest lightly toning it down, add highlights around the blush and applying the blush on the top of the shoulders, elbows, and knees as well like in this [X] credits to Peachmaide
and on the breast like this if this is the kind of effect your looking for

credits to qupi. heart