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- | Submitted on 08/31/2008 |
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- Title: Big Brother
- Artist: Insanly Adorible
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Description:
I was alone.
Mom was insane.
Dad was a drunk,
and then Brother came.
He taught me cool tricks,
He helped me with school.
He taught me guitar.
and made me feel cool.
I turned 18,
My joy just switched on.
I went home that day,
and brother was gone.
Was brother from Heaven?
Was brother my mind?
I made it through childhood,
so I'll be just fine. - Date: 08/31/2008
- Tags: brother guitar lonely caring alone
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Comments (7 Comments)
- DarkDaisuke9 - 09/09/2008
- Nice
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- Incendiary Champion - 09/08/2008
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being a big brother myself, i found this very touching.
5/5
beautiful poem - Report As Spam
- Kid_Flash - 09/08/2008
- My girlfriend actually won't let me use this item because she says it makes me look gay. I do think this guy looks cool though.
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- Rixusaku - 09/08/2008
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aw. the story was cute :3
and for a simple avy it looks nice. i give ya an 8! - Report As Spam
- CassianB - 09/08/2008
- Very well done. Love the poem.
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- Burleigh - 09/08/2008
- Description is great...... but you could work on the looks more...
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- mistywaterflower42 - 09/08/2008
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hehehe....COOL! biggrin !
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