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Smell the hot chocolate,
Hear the Guests knock at the door,
snow outside glistens
- by iP i n k a r i |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/05/2008 |
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- Title: The feel of Christmas
- Artist: iP i n k a r i
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Description:
I thought this may kind of be poetry?
Haiku! favorite kind of POEM!
I kno it kinda sucks! - Date: 12/05/2008
- Tags: feel christmas pinkari26
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Comments (4 Comments)
- [[Siren]] - 05/26/2009
- It's an Haiku.. meant to be like that.
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- crazybitch6669 - 02/22/2009
- could be kinda longer somemore punctiation maybe good start though
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- Renee the Rabid Squirrel - 12/18/2008
- I think a punctuation edit would be good. The poem brings some nice imagery to mind.
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