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- Title: Snivellus Greasy
- Artist: Injustice-Shall-Fall
- Description: Probably overdone as all ********, but I don't really care. Severus Snape, in his younger years, practicing making potions for his O.W.L. Aside from the obvious 'overdone', what could I do to improve the avatar? Different cauldron, hairstyle? Eye color wrong? Let me know, I'm open to (reasonable) criticism.
- Date: 07/17/2011
- Tags: snivellus greasy harry potter deathly
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Comments (7 Comments)
- gothduck - 07/22/2011
- OMG SNAPEEE i love snape! 100/100 for just being snape! 5/5
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- ggem3 - 07/21/2011
- I agree, buy some black eyes and perhaps a wizard background and it will be perfect! But other than that it's Awesome! Good Job 5/5 smile
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- Umbraphilia - 07/19/2011
- I would try a different cloak, and perhaps darker eyes...but this is a great starter for Sev in his younger years. Good luck!
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- patanon - 07/18/2011
- What everyone else said: the eyes. They must be darker.
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- SuperSailorStarlightKiss - 07/18/2011
- Yes, the eye color is wrong. His eyes are dark dark dark, almost black. The hair is fine, and I would suggest a some-what expensive item for the pants- spring groom for the gray pants- they'll be the perfect style. I don't really know about shoes though.
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- Derpy Dino - 07/18/2011
- He needs angry eyes! The second expression in Angelic Manner is perfect :B Lol you should go look x3
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- Injustice-Shall-Fall - 07/18/2011
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http://images.wikia.com/harrypotter/images/9/98/Snape_5thyear.jpg
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