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- | Submitted on 08/09/2010 |
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- Title: They
- Artist: bloodygirl17
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Description:
This poem has a certain moral that I want everyone to get. And if they don't get it the first time I want them to read it over, feel free to guess what the moral is.
I would like you guys to guess actually. :3 - Date: 08/09/2010
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Comments (3 Comments)
- bloodygirl17 - 10/30/2010
- It's not supposed to have detail. If you payed attention, you would get that.
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- 2pound - 10/06/2010
- this could use a little bit more emphasis on small details; she bleeds where? she runs where? they stare at? for the implications, though, i shall gie you a point, and you stayed on subject and didn't screw up the grammar too bad. a solid 2.
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- MandiLila - 08/10/2010
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Hmm... well I'd say the moral is not to ignore what you see. if there's someone obviously having trouble - help them! Don't just turn away or pretend you don't notice.
Nice job, by the way. smile - Report As Spam
