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  • Title: Trembling Hands
  • Artist: White Rabbit Mara
  • Description: i vent through words. this was late last year when i wrote it. sure this kinda sounds like suicide, but dont let that turn you off. i found it better to take a pen and let the ink pour then take a knife and let the blood pour or a bottle and let the pills pour. no this wasint suicide, just letting go. giving in. but on the brink somting always will bring me back. the pen, the air, the earth, the love. it always calls me back. thanks thank you so much! for with out my pen i would not be here.
  • Date: 01/17/2010
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Phnaw - 05/19/2010
  • This is a fantastic piece! I love the pace and imagery!
    "A broken girl with a torn up heart

    Trembling hands hold on.


    Strong arms pull her struggling arms

    Slowly, air returns to her lungs

    Hope rises in her gut

    Her reason is found. "

    Beautiful!!!
  • Sunset Eyre - 02/13/2010
  • That was beautiful. I can, at times relate to this (Even if my writing is pitiful and I am just an aspiring Hopeless-romantic author) Very well done!
  • FaLlInG oUt Of ToDaY - 02/09/2010
  • I can honestly feel the emotions coming from these words... its a strong emotion. At least yew can show people through writing... for me it is hard because nothing i write makes any sense.
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