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- | Submitted on 08/26/2009 |
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- Title: Untitled(DESCRIPTION ONLY)
- Artist: vampireprincessjj
- Description: THis is a description of a character I may use in a story... please critique.
- Date: 08/26/2009
- Tags: characters vampires
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Comments (2 Comments)
- csifool - 09/05/2009
- i like it,but you should give more description to her overall expretion.wat she comes off as.But thats my opion,i like it nontheless.
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- Mutandanstan - 08/26/2009
- Why not set it in the present? like 'her skin [is] flawless'^^sounds cooler to me
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