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- Title: Shadow Storm part 5
- Artist: Seishin_Kage_25
- Description: Next part!!!
- Date: 07/14/2009
- Tags: shadow storm part
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Seishin_Kage_25 - 07/17/2009
- oops sorry...... I'll fix it, I must have been to much into the writing, I try really hard to not make mistakes......
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- Razzz25 - 07/17/2009
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Heared it?
Honestly?
Go read a grammar book why don't you? - Report As Spam
- soccerfangirl21 Deluxe - 07/16/2009
- This is the best piece of writing i ever read! No Lie. I cant stop reading it. Make More writings about this. 5! omg I love this story.
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- Seishin_Kage_25 - 07/15/2009
- This story is based on a real relation ship I had...... The song means a lot to me..... It plays a big part in the story and it is foreshadowing a big separation between the two......... Sorry if I give it away but It's just so you see why its is important......
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- Dreemz - 07/14/2009
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*facepalm* you've picked up a few negative trends from some Gaian roleplayers. I really don't like it when people say the name of the song that was playing. It's pointless, unless you're going to make some kind of reference to the actual song.
Decentt idea, but cliche. Decent writing.
4/5? I'm rating high - Report As Spam
- Phantomheart17 - 07/14/2009
- wow...you have to post more 5'd it.
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