- Title: You never do.
- Artist: Lex2442
- Description: this is a simple/short poem i wrote. This is what i want to do all my life. write songs or poetry then become famous and sing or preform! singing and poetry is my life.
- Date: 01/22/2009
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Comments (4 Comments)
- kearney11 - 08/19/2009
- not good at all really.... last two line are extremely terrible! sort it out! 1/5
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- Gravetye - 02/17/2009
- So Overworked overreacted, no pun intended. The poem is rather silly, but it's not worthy of a "There is something seriously wrong with you," haha. So, anyway, don't put a comma at the end of every line. Overworked does the same thing, and it drives me nuts. And again, meter and rhyme--check the former and don't force the latter. Though, actually, your meter is a little bit more regular in this than in your other works.
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- Overworkedandunderpaid - 01/24/2009
- Not good. There is something seriously wrong with you. How can you ruin a peice of bad poetry like that with your last two lines! It just plummeted down past horrible into the realm of "oops-some-idiot-decided-to-attempt-speaking-english". 1/5
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- x0StrawberryLemonade0x - 01/23/2009
- Cute, reminds me of the poems I write. 5/5
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