- Title: Park Games
- Artist: Echonance
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Description:
A boy and his grandfather.
I appreciate critique, so please tell me what I can do to make things better, for the next time.
If you would like some more of my work, feel free to pm me. Unless it is a huge piece, I will not require any fees.
Also, vote fairly.
Thanks for reading!
Pm about the ad. - Date: 12/31/2008
- Tags: park games grandfather
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Stripes the Zebra - 01/01/2009
- I enjoyed that. It was very well written. biggrin
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- FallenFairy170 - 01/01/2009
- wow thats a really good story, i enjoyed reading it ^.^
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- mathwl1020 - 12/31/2008
- that was pretty good, i have started writing stuff, but i havent put it in the arena (mainly cause i didn't know that you could, but anyway). i liked it
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- Dreas The Best - 12/31/2008
- Coolness! ahh! not as good as the war one... still cool cool COOL! haha, idk how else to describe it. xd
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- zerochan923600 - 12/31/2008
- Nice, very well written. better than i could ever do. it was a bit hard to figure out what you were talking about in the beginning, i wasn't sure if the clicking was the clock or the pieces. i like chess, though i'm no good at it. I was all like "aw" at the end too. Respect yer elders! and what's wrong with being proper to someone better than you?
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- sugar_dragon_angel - 12/31/2008
- Aawww thats so sweet <3 wonderful little story you have there :]
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