- by babychick551 |
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- | Submitted on 10/15/2008 |
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- Title: Escape
- Artist: babychick551
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Description:
This is a "short story" and plz comment! i luv writing i think so i thought i'd submit a story along w/ a poem.
Note: This is a drug story. However, I do not take drugs and i dont think i evr will. well i take drugs when im sick but not to get high. Also, there are several literary devices in the story. - Date: 10/15/2008
- Tags: escape
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Comments (5 Comments)
- jackiefrost12 - 11/25/2012
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oh my gosh my friend did the same thing ever thing you wrote she did it but i like it i wish it was 100/100 cause i am giving you the five star you earn it and i do know how hard it is to quit cause my friend she try so hard to quit but she is ok now but i love it hope you write ander
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- Syko206 - 02/08/2009
- this is a really great story.im shocked yet amazed at the ending. bravo!!!!! 10/10
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- life refrain - 10/16/2008
- it's very nice with alot of description for a short story,it even shows positive things in life so ill give it a 10
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- Yaveen - 10/16/2008
- A beta reader is always good for any story to catch small grammar or spelling mistakes. Just a thought. ^^ Good moral behind the story, perhaps brought up throughout the text more than needed, but still good.
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- Yasuna Harumi - 10/16/2008
- Very touching, though a little outlandish. smile But the morals are good!
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