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 Posted: Mon Aug 26, 2013 4:16 pm
MAJOR REVISION
Character Name: Arian Laith/ Sailor Athene
Reason for Revision: I've been meaning to revise his profile for a while since he's managed to grow over the 3 year's I've had him and now that he's heading to DCU it seemed like a good time to knuckle down and actually do it. I also wanted to tweak the wording of his eternal attack a little
Link to Old Profile: [there]
Link to Revised Profile: [here]
((not sure if you can post in the acquired character and character revision threads at the same time, if not then please strike this one through and I'll repost when the other quest's been approved))Accepted!
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Posted: Mon Aug 26, 2013 5:24 pm
MAJOR REVISION
Character Name: Bischofite
Reason for Revision: Enough events have affected him, along with the addition of so much chaos in his system, so he's changed quite a lot since his initial conception. Two hobbies were changed, one virtue added, one flaw added, and a tweak to his weapon.
Link to Old Profile: Here
Link to Revised Profile: HereAccepted!
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Posted: Mon Sep 02, 2013 8:57 pm
MINOR REVISIONCharacter Name: Gabriel Blake // Captain NatronReason for Revision: I believe a weapon that is more suited to both close and distance combat fits Natron's more aggressive fighting style better; I also see it as a reasonable possible evolution of the weapon he has now! (Essentially, instead of his mace growing spikes, he gets a sickle on the other end of the chain - and a smaller weight.) Quote: General Weapon: A deadly spiked mace on a chain. to Quote: General Weapon: A kusarigama - a sickle on a chain, with a balancing weight on the opposite end.
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Posted: Wed Sep 04, 2013 10:00 am
MINOR REVISION Character Name: Nyasa Freeman // MicaReason for Revision: Trading in Amber Rainbow Crystal for personal item. to Quote: Portable first aid kit, contains no healing magic but replenishes supplies when it is summoned.
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Posted: Wed Sep 04, 2013 9:42 pm
MAJOR REVISION Character Name: Bell McMahon // Sailor Bellatrix Reason for Revision: Her personality needed a major overhaul so that it actually reflected the way that I've been playing her. emotion_awesome Also, as I've come to gain a better understanding of her Sphere, I felt her attacks desperately needed to better reflect her sphere. In essence, they still do the same thing, and are still performed the same way, just with a small difference to better reflect FORTITUDE. Link to Old Profile: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=20498709Link to Revised Profile: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=24017935Accepted!
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Posted: Thu Sep 05, 2013 5:02 pm
MINOR REVISION Character Name: Christabelle CallowayReason for Revision: Reworking one flaw due to character development and removing a hobby she hasn't done in like, forever. XD Old Flaw Prickly - Like a cactus, Christa is not friendly to anyone at first. They must earn her trust and admiration through time and dedication, but this often turns off most people and it can take quite a bit of effort to pierce her exterior. After her parent's rather sudden divorce, Christa realized that even the people she loved and trusted could deeply betray and hurt her. As a way to cope and make sure she never felt that deeply scarred again, she put up a very prickly exterior as a way to "screen" potential threats. She is terse, grumpy and sometimes downright rude to people to ease her fear of rejection. If they do not like her, she cannot feel rejected because she caused them to feel that way, not the other way around. She is often seen in the back of the class, keeping to herself and keeping conversations with others short and to the point. As a senshi, this means she is not one to seek out allies - they must first prove they are worth her time an effort to be considered a friend. She may stand by other senshi due to necessity, but she will not like it. to New Flaw Entirely Too Serious - Christabelle is someone you don't see smile genuinely very often, nor does she do spontaneous things just because it's fun. She has a tendency to take things very seriously whether it's schoolwork, a job, internships, chores, senshi business or even going out with friends. Her demeanor comes off as cold and perhaps even harsh even when she tries not to. Her attempts to lighten up are usually awkward and met with jovial laughter. Trying to have fun without any expectations nets Christa embarrassment, more often than not. For example, after being made fun of for being the Stone Maiden of the Jovian Court by Babylon, Kallichore attempted to dance to prove him wrong. Everything ended up in a dogpile of limbs and Kallichore made the knight swear never to tell a soul. Removed Hobby Fiber Arts - While in Home Economics class, Christa found that she's not necessarily good at sewing or crochet, but adores fabric dying and hand embroidery. BLAH BLAH STUFFS SHE DON'T DO NO MORE
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Posted: Mon Sep 16, 2013 2:33 pm
MINOR REVISION Character Name: Mei Xing / Sailor Sidouer Reason for Revision: I'm looking to drop 'Sidouer' from her attacks. I feel it's unnecessary, wordy, and strategic disadvantage to be blurting your scout name every time you decide to use your attack. Quote: Old names: Sailor : Sidouer Static Shock Super: Sidouer Chaining Static Shock Eternal: Sidouer Static Dispersion Ensnare to Quote: Sailor : Static Shock Super: Chaining Static Shock Eternal: Static Dispersion Ensnare
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Posted: Sun Sep 22, 2013 4:26 pm
MINOR REVISION Character Name: Lieutenant Halite Reason for Revision: Changing her second and third stage of her weapon entirely because I hate it as-is tbh >>"... And being that Halite is not a close-combat type of character in the least bit, it doesn't really work to have her using a close-range weapon XD In other words, I didn't think that through very well! Quote: Wooden handled make-up brush > Wooden Boomerang > Giant Bladed Boomerang to Accepted!
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Posted: Thu Dec 12, 2013 11:37 pm
MAJOR REVISION Character Name: Erika Adalsteinn Reason for Revision: Not really a revision so much as a rewording; rewrote her profile in my own words while keepiing all of her traits and attacks the same. Link to Old Profile: romeo wilco's diary for ErikaLink to Revised Profile: XAccepted!
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Posted: Fri Dec 13, 2013 4:34 pm
MINOR REVISION Character Name: Chernobylite Reason for Revision: Captain stage weapon isn't really a good transition to the General stage weapon. Quote: Feather-dangling cat toy > Cat-o-five tails > Chain Whip to Quote: Feather-dangling cat toy > Manriki > Chain Whip
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Posted: Wed Dec 18, 2013 6:30 pm
MAJOR REVISIONCharacter Name: Clarisse Stark // Eternal Sailor Persephone, Corrupted Senshi of Pomegranantes Reason for Revision: Corruption and the resultant change in powers and loss of civilian memories. Link to Old Profile: Here~ (While I've altered titles, the profile information is her precorruption profile) Link to Revised Profile: Here~Accepted!
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Posted: Fri Jan 03, 2014 8:58 am
MAJOR REVISION Character Name: Ophelia / Sailor Mjolnir. Reason for Revision: Have not RPed her in a while, feel like I babbled too much in her application. I made it shorter, more concise and made the profile less restricting on RP, since I listed ALOT of things she hated / disliked and it was hard to keep track of them all. I made her funner to RP from my stand point and since she is new and not yet very established I thought this was the best place to start. In essence she is the same character, just polished off more. Link to Old Profile: OneLink to Revised Profile: TwoAccepted!
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Posted: Mon Jan 13, 2014 8:20 am
MAJOR REVISIONCharacter Name: Falco Marks Xanthus GoldmanReason for Revision: He purified and forgot his entire civilian life, or damn close. This pretty much nuked a big chunk of his flaws and required some other adjustments as well. Link to Old Profile: Link ((Crossouts have been done but nothing has been removed)) Link to Revised Profile: Link Mostly the flaws have had to change. Accepted!
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Posted: Wed Jan 22, 2014 1:18 pm
MAJOR REVISION Character Name: Finn Derouen Reason for Revision: Previous profile fails to account for going on three years of character development, and is full of hobbies he no longer participates in and behaviors he has matured out of. The new profile reflects his current development. Link to Old Profile: HereLink to Revised Profile: HereAccepted!
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Posted: Wed Feb 19, 2014 2:24 pm
MAJOR REVISION Character Name: Chris Gallo Reason for Revision: It was very out of date. Link to Old Profile: JournalLink to Revised Profile: RevisionAccepted!
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