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Gregar828
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 01, 2012 7:47 am


The "title" section is actually reserved for titles gained through shinobi feats over the course of RPing. For instance, if your RPC became an Oinin, you could put that down, or if a kage gave you a special title (ex. Yellow Flash, White Fang). I suppose you could keep the "Lady" title there, being former nobility, but just be aware if what titles are.

Excellent job, by the way. Perfect profiles on the first try are rare.

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 22, 2012 2:05 pm


Kaeru ShindōUser Image

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Character Name: Kaeru Shindō
Nicknames: Kae, Daseki, The Bat
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Brown
Height: 5'7
Body Type: Lithe
Distinguishing Features: Scar crossing vertically over right eye. Eyes appear to have a faded color due to blindness.

Background
There is nothing particularly special about Kaeru other than his bloodline. He was born into the Otosan clan, and inherited the one distinguishing trait that comes along with it: blindness. Since the day Kaeru first opened his eyes he could not see how normal people could. Instead, he used the sound around him. He grew up as a normal child destined to be a ninja, entering the academy at the normal age and graduating with relative ease. It was not until after the academy that Kaeru's life had become interesting. He soon found out that he was not meant to be apart of a berserk-like team, and he worked much better alone. Because of his super bat-like hearing abilities Kaeru tailored his skills to becoming an assassin. His old academy teacher dubbed him 'Daseki-kun' because of his ability and the name really stuck with him. Kaeru doesn't exactly parade around with a bat shaped cowl nor have all of his equipment shaped into bats, but he does pull a lot from the night creatures.


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Village: Kumogakure
Organization: Justice League
Rank: Genin
Titles: -
Headband Style/Color: Belt/Black
Headband Location: Across chest

Chakra Color: Grey
Chakra Level: High
Chakra Points: 35
Chakra Elements: Wind
Extra Chakra Elements: Raiton
Chakra Control:
• -1 Point off Genin Techs
• -2 Points off Chuunin Techs
• -3 Points off Jounin Techs
• -5 Points off KageTechs
Learning Information:
-2 to Raiton Techs (does not stack with other reductions)
-2 for training

Chakra Control:
This Shinobi is a master of Chakra Control, allowing them to more easily learn to mold their chakra to perform jutsus, as well as allowing them to use their chakra more effeciently when using jutsus. At higher ranks they even learn to mold chakra without the use of hand-seals.
(-2 posts for training, reduced chakra costs (see Chakra System), can perform jutsus that are two or more ranks below you without hand-seals.)

Bloodline, Clan, or Demon: Otosan [x]
Bloodline, Clan, or Demon Stage: 1


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Shinobi Profession: Assassin
Profession Base Benefit: Shadow's Shroud
Weakness: Weak-Bodied

Rank Benefits

Genin
Poisoner

Chuunin
(Place chosen chuunin rank benefit here.)

Jounin
(Place chosen Jounin rank benefit here.)


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Talent
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{Paste approved talent here, with link to approval.}

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Ninjutsu

Universal
    E Rank
  • Henge no Jutsu (Transformation)


  • D Rank



  • First Element: Wind
    E Rank


  • D Rank



  • Second Element: Lightning
    E Rank


  • D Rank




Genjutsu

Universal
E Rank
  • Bunshin no Jutsu


  • D Rank



  • First Element: Wind
    E Rank


  • D Rank



  • Taijutsu

    E Rank


  • D Rank



  • Bloodline/Clan/Demon Jutsu

    Otosan
    Ninjutsu
    E Rank


  • D Rank



  • Genjutsu
    E Rank


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    Summoning Type: (What type of animals do you summon? Dog, snake, toad, etc.)

    Summons Known:
    E Rank


  • D Rank



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    Stages Known: (List all stages your RPC has learned, and link to learning them.

    Maneuvers:
    E Rank


  • D Rank



  • Abilities: (Passive abilities gained by training in the style. Copy/Paste the description. Link to learning the ability.)

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    Mission Information
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    Mission Statement

    Total Number of Missions Completed:

    Total Number of Mission Points Accumulated:

    Mission Record:

    E-rank - [{Place Total Rank mp in Brackets}]



  • D-rank - [-]



  • C-rank - [-]



  • B-rank - [-]



  • A-rank - [-]



  • S-rank - [-]



  • Alternative Missions - [-]



  • Teaching Credits - [-]




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    Inventory
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    Backpack Type/Color: Messenger Bag
    Tool Pouch Location: Utility Belt
    Kunai/Shuriken Holster Location: Utility Belt

    Gold: 500


    Equipment

    Kunai: 10
    Shuriken: 8


    Supplies

    Item:

    Custom Equipment

    {Paste customs here.}

    Housing/Furniture

    {House Type}: (Link to thread.)
    {Object in above house.}: #
     

  • A faint smile

    Dedicated Friend


    TDG Super Kami

    Dapper Werewolf

    6,200 Points
    • Brandisher 100
    • Signature Look 250
    • Bunny Spotter 50
    PostPosted: Mon Oct 22, 2012 3:27 pm


    Hasaki RyoukenUser Image

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    Character Name: Hasaki Ryouken
    Nicknames: Wolfblood
    Age: 15
    Gender: Male
    Hair Color: Gun-Metal Gray
    Eye Color: Lime
    Height: 5'4''
    Body Type: Lean
    Distinguishing Features: Scar-styled lined tattoos on either shoulder and on both cheeks.

    Background
    Hasaki Ryouken is an orphan; his parents either missing or dead. He became the target of bullying, partly because of his missing parentage and because he cannot properly perform ninjutsu or genjutsu. He did, however, find out how keen he was with weapons and melee techniques. So he fought against those that oppressed him and became recognized for his swordsmanship. He became a shut-out and barely spoke, allowing his weapons and body language do most of his talking. He became a quick and agile boy, and keened his reflexes. He forsook any attempts of trying to do what he was not able to do before and focused on what he was good at.


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    Village: Kirigakure
    Organization: N/A
    Rank: Genin
    Titles: -
    Headband Style/Color: Bandana / Black
    Headband Location: Head

    Chakra Color: Silver
    Chakra Level: Low
    Chakra Points: 25
    Chakra Elements: Raiton
    Extra Chakra Elements: N/A
    Chakra Control:
    Academy Level (E-ranked Techniques) - 2 points
    Genin Level (D-ranked Techniques) - 3 points
    Chuunin Level (C-ranked Techniques) - 5 points
    Special Jounin Level (B-ranked Techniques) - 7 points
    Jounin Level (A-ranked Techniques) - 9 points
    Sannin/Kage Level (S-ranked Techniques) - 20 points

    Learning Information:
    -3 learning Jutsu [Tactical]
    -1 post learning bonus when learning weapon style/techniques [Weapon Master]
    +1 post penalty for learning taijutsu styles/techniques [Weapon Master]
    +2 post penalty for learning nin/genjutsus. [Weapon Master]

    Tactical: These are the Shinobi most often to be picked as leaders of shinobi teams, able to come up with strategies and adapt to battlefield conditions quickly and efficiently. Being highly intelligent, learning jutsu comes quite easily to these shinobi, allowing them to acquire a vast array of jutsus for any situation.
    (-3 posts for learning jutsu, reaction speed is one rank higher)

    Speed: Like the name says these ninja are faster and more agile then normal ninja, allowing them to more easily avoid attacks, and to close distances equally fast.
    (Move, dodge, and attack speed is one rank higher, hard for anyone below Jounnin to even track these ninja)

    Bloodline, Clan, or Demon:
    Bloodline, Clan, or Demon Stage:

    Bloodline/Clan Transplant:
    Transplant Stage:


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    Shinobi Profession: Weapon Master
    Profession Base Benefit: Increased Number of Weapon Styles
    Weakness: Less Elements

    Rank Benefits

    Genin
    Mighty Rush:
    The weapon master forces chakra into their legs to move at great speeds, able to close the gap between the weapon master and their opponent in mere seconds to put themselves in the perfect position to attack.

    Chuunin
    (Place chosen chuunin rank benefit here.)

    Jounin
    (Place chosen Jounin rank benefit here.)


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    Wolfblood [Pending]

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    Ninjutsu

    Universal
      E Rank
    • Henge no Jutsu (Transformation)


    • D Rank



    • First Element: (Name of Element.)
      E Rank


    • D Rank



    Genjutsu

    Universal
    E Rank
  • Bunshin no Jutsu


  • D Rank



  • First Element: (Name of Element.)
    E Rank


  • D Rank



  • Taijutsu

    E Rank


  • D Rank



  • Bloodline/Clan/Demon Jutsu

    (Bloodline/Clan/Demon name.)
    Ninjutsu
    E Rank


  • D Rank



  • Genjutsu
    E Rank


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    Summoning Type: (What type of animals do you summon? Dog, snake, toad, etc.)

    Summons Known:
    E Rank


  • D Rank



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    Stages Known: (List all stages your RPC has learned, and link to learning them.

    Maneuvers:
    E Rank


  • D Rank



  • Abilities: (Passive abilities gained by training in the style. Copy/Paste the description. Link to learning the ability.)

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    Mission Statement

    Total Number of Missions Completed:

    Total Number of Mission Points Accumulated:

    Mission Record:

    E-rank - [{Place Total Rank mp in Brackets}]



  • D-rank - [-]



  • C-rank - [-]



  • B-rank - [-]



  • A-rank - [-]



  • S-rank - [-]



  • Alternative Missions - [-]



  • Teaching Credits - [-]




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    Backpack Type/Color: Satchel
    Tool Pouch Location: Waist Pouch
    Kunai/Shuriken Holster Location: Waist Pouch

    Gold: 500


    Equipment

    Kunai: 15
    Shuriken: N/A


    Supplies

    Item:

    Custom Equipment

    {Paste customs here.}

    Housing/Furniture

    {House Type}: (Link to thread.)
    {Object in above house.}: #
  • PostPosted: Tue Oct 23, 2012 7:15 pm


    Both of you: Please be aware that your Professions are both undergoing major changes in benefits and weaknesses. If, when the new versions come out (Which should be soon, as assassin is all but done and weapon master is next on the list), they are not to your liking, you may have the option to change your profession, provided you have not used your current profession's abilities too extensively (as in, it wouldn't make sense RPwise if someone who was able to walk among shadows couldn't do that anymore, and was now firing off lightning blasts without a second thought.)

    @Jade: Pending approval of the Otosan bloodline, please change your chakra level to low.

    From what I read of the clan, you do not start with two elements. If I simply missed a line, could you point it out to me? Otherwise, please remove your extra element.

    @Tenchi: You forgot to list your primary element in your jutsu column. Otherwise, great job.

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    Gregar828
    Vice Captain


    A faint smile

    Dedicated Friend

    PostPosted: Tue Oct 23, 2012 7:19 pm


    Gregar828


    [Hola Greg!]

    For the elements there is a section that says other elements are optional. I didn't intend to start with both, just listing it for future reference. I can just strike it through. As for the pending approval I'll just wait so I don't have to recalculate and change too much.
    PostPosted: Fri Oct 26, 2012 10:55 pm


    Miyake ShizunaUser Image

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    Character Name: Miyake, Shizuna
    Nicknames: Shizu || Fake Mute
    Age: 17
    Gender: Female
    Hair Color: Dusty Rose
    Eye Color: Light Cherry Red
    Height: 5'4"
    Body Type: Petite || Agile || Flexible
    Distinguishing Features: Two tattoos: hibiscus flower on her right shoulder blade & an ivy vine wrapped around her left hand

    Personality - Not part of original format but I like to have this here as a rpc guild; will remove if required

    Shizuna is a shy, quiet girl who appears to others as mute. She rarely speaks, even to her parents, the only ones to ever hear her voice is her artwork and even then its so soft you could barely hear it. Shizuna is very passionate about her work thus she is easily angered if someone was to mistreat any form of art. Kind and sweet, Shizuna relays to people her feelings and thoughts through random pictures and words she makes in the sketchbook she always has hanging by her side.

    Background - [Link to Full History to Come]

    Expectations...its a dangerous thing and often than not, will leave an permit scar on those who are forced to live up to them. Born into the Ink Artistry Clan, Shizuna was introduced to the world of living art at an early age. As a child bred from two Ink Artistry parents, Shizuna should have carried a more stronger percentage of her parent's ability over living ink than most Ink Artistry decedents. Mix that with her own potential abilities to work with living ink, Shizuna was viewed as the perfect Ink Artistry child capable of bringing glory and status to their sub-par clan. At birth, she had a tattoo similar to a hibiscus flower on her right shoulder, proof of her inheritance of her parents' ink, and having believed that the sooner Shizuna learned the ways of the clan the better, Shizuna was immediately started on the path of an artist.

    Push to the brink, Shizuna was forces daily to observe and practice numerous forms of artistic expression. Painting being the main focus, Shizuna spent every waking hour either staring at other painting or being directed to paint herself without breaks except for naps (when she was 1-3 years old), going to the bathroom, and meals. When she was five, Shizuna was given her first test to determine her worth.

    The night as Shizuna conducted her test in the basement dojo of her family home, her ink would sprung to life unwilling to obey the will of its creator. This surprised the elders as well as Shizuna's parents seeing how Shizuna was the perfect specimen. What they didn't know was that Shizuna's own unstable mind was the reason behind this madness. Having been trained so strictly for so long and constantly reminded that failure was not an option; Shizuna had went into the dojo where she was to conduct her test with a less than steady mind. It was a simple task really, paint a picture with ink and have it come to life. If Shizuna really wanted to, she could've done it in her sleep but her fears of failing was what cause her loose control over her abilities and send the drawing on an rampage.

    Expecting the worst, her parents and the elders escaped the room leaving Shizuna to fend for herself. What happened next turned out to be even more of a mystery as a loud explosion erupted from the room and then silence. When her parents re-entered the room, they were surprised to find Shizuna still breathing and unconscious with her right hand covering what looked to be a ivy vine tattoo.

    After that night, Shizuna never spoke unless necessary and she closed herself off to her art. To the surprise of everyone who've ever heard of that night's incident, Shizuna never had anymore problems with controlling her powers and she even showed much promise when it came to the clan techniques. Dedicating herself to her art and shinobi career, Shizuna finally graduated from the academy after much difficulties - more so due to her lack of vocal communications than anything. During this time, Shizuna has also established a sort of reputation amongst her classmate as a 'Fake Mute' as Shizuna actually could speak if forced into a corner; very quietly but still speaking none the less. Never without her sketchbook and ink, Shizuna spends the day in various parts of town sketching and will only communicate with others if they initiate it first; even so a proper conversation can only be held if the person can stand to receive responses in the form of art that is.


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    Village: Kumogakure
    Organization: -
    Rank: Jounin
    Titles: The Silent Artist
    Headband Style/Color: Standard || Bubble Gum Pink
    Headband Location: Around neck

    Chakra Color: Rose
    Chakra Level: Medium [modifier: +3/10] Low (until bloodline app's approved)
    Chakra Points: 109 85
    Chakra Elements: Suiton || Katon || Hiton
    Extra Chakra Elements: -

    Chakra Control:


    Learning Information:
    [Profession] - Learning Nin-/Gen-jutsu [1] post faster
    [Profession] - Learning Tai-/Weapon techs [1] post longer
    [Shinobi Type: Support] - All jutsu can be learned [2] post faster

    Support: -2 posts to learn jutsu; can perform jutsus that are below their rank without hand-seals & jutsus of equal rank can be performed with far fewer hand-seals, allowing the support shinobi to get off a quick jutsu in close quarters; jutsus of higher rank require the normal number of hand-seals

    Combo: Can use 2 jutsu per post; at Jounin can use 3 jutsu per post

    Bloodline, Clan, or Demon: Ink Artistry = [Application] [Pending]
    Bloodline, Clan, or Demon Stage: N/A

    Bloodline/Clan Transplant: -
    Transplant Stage: -


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    Shinobi Profession: Sealing Master

    Profession Base Benefit:
    Professional Sealer: Those of the Sealing Master profession are the only ninja capable of fully mastering the art of seals, able to learn and use any type of seal available, and even design their own.
    (Able to learn all seals in the list, and learn custom seals.)

    Sealed Knowledge: While normally one must be taught how to utilize seals, the Sealing Master is able to learn seals of their level directly from a scroll, so long as they can obtain it. They are also the only class capable of teaching the art of seals to others.
    (Able to self teach seals of equal or lower rank if a scroll is available, with a +1 post learning penalty. Must PM the Kage or a crew member to obtain the scroll.)

    Weakness:
    Fewer Taijutsu/Weapon Styles: The Sealing Master can learn only 2 taijutsu/weapon styles, and can only learn up to 1 rank below them of their secondary style, their primary style can be mastered

    Rank Benefits

    Genin
    Tattoo Artist: Soon after beginning training in seals, one begins to notice that they are easily spotted. Thus, a solution was required. Some sealing masters learn how to draw the seal patterns in such a way that they are unrecognizable as anything but a picture of the user’s choice. Used on human flesh, it would appear to be a simple tattoo, thus the name. This is done in such a way that it does not harm the seal functions, simply making it look differently.
    (Able to make seals that are impossible to identify as such. Inversely, easily able to identify disguised seals.)

    Chuunin
    Blood Sealing: After much training in the art of sealing, the sealing master discovers that by simply mixing a bit of blood with his ink just right, he is able to make a stronger variation of any seal.
    (Blood seals are usable only by the individual who’s blood was used to make them. Can be applied to any seal.)

    Jounin
    Space Time Manipulator: After much dedication and study of the art of sealing, some masters begin to find deeper meaning in their techniques. Delving into that unknown, they find the secret to space and time.
    (Able to use Space Time jutsu.)


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    Ninjutsu

    Universal

      E Rank
    • Henge no Jutsu (Transformation)


    • D Rank
    • Kinobori no Jutsu (Tree Walking Technique)/Kabenobori no Jutsu (Wall Walking Technique)
    • Kyou Masukingu No Jutsu (Sound Masking Technique)


    • C Rank
    • Suimen Hokou no Gyou (The Art of Water Walking)


    Fuinjutsu: Sealing

      E Rank
    • Storage Seal Basic


    • D Rank
    • Hiku (To pull)
    • Reinforcement Seal (Kyouka)


    • C Rank
    • Storage Seal
    • Explosive Seal
    • Gravity Seal
    • Security Seal
    • Radio Seal
    • Otomasen (Soundless)
    • Battery Seal
    • Three Seals Barrier
    • Transmitter Seal
    • Receiver Seal
    • Blood Recognition Seal
    • Jutsu Seal
    • Jutsu Storage Seal


    • B Rank
    • Magnet Seal
    • Dimensional Receiver Seal
    • Recorder Seal


    • A Rank
    • Storage Seal Advanced
    • Chakra Suppression Seal
    • Chakra Exchange Seal


    Suiton: Water

      E Rank
    • Mizu Soujuu (Water Manipulation)
    • Mizu Kagami no Jutsu (Water Mirror Technique)


    • D Rank
    • Mizutamari no Jutsu (Water Puddle Technique)


    • C Rank
    • Mizutamari Yusuo no Jutsu (Water Puddle Transportation)
    • Deido Tama (Mud Ball)
    • Suikusari no Jutsu (Water Chains Technique)


    Fuuton: Wind

      E Rank



    • D Rank



    • C Rank



    Hiton: Medical

      E Rank
    • Shindan (Diagnosis)
    • Kiyomaru (Cleanse)
    • Ichimei Hoyou no Jutsu (Life Preservation Technique)


    • D Rank
    • Chiyute No Jutsu: Karui (Healing Hands Technique: Minor)


    • C Rank



    Genjutsu

    Universal

      E Rank
    • Bunshin no Jutsu



    • D Rank
    • Bakuretsu Kunai (Exploding Kunai)
    • Magen: Kokuni Arazu No Jutsu (Demonic Illusion: False Surroundings Technique)
    • Kori Shinchuu no Jutsu (Sly Fellow Mind Skill)


    • C Rank
    • Genjutsu Kai (Release)


    Suiton: Water

      E Rank


    • D Rank



    Taijutsu

      E Rank


    • D Rank



    Bloodline Jutsu

    Ink Artistry

      Ninjutsu

      E Rank
    • Sumi Bunshin no Jutsu (Ink Clone Technique)

      D Rank


    • C Rank
    • Sumi Gasumi no Jutsu (Ink Haze Technique)
    • Choujuu Giga (Super Beast Imitation Drawing)


      Genjutsu

      E Rank


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    Summoning Type: -

    Summons Known:
      E Rank


    • D Rank



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    Stages Known: -

    Maneuvers:
    E Rank


  • D Rank



  • Abilities: -

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    Mission Statement

    Total Number of Missions Completed: 0

    Total Number of Mission Points Accumulated: 0

    Mission Record:

    E-rank - [-]



  • D-rank - [-]



  • C-rank - [-]



  • B-rank - [-]



  • A-rank - [-]



  • S-rank - [-]



  • Alternative Missions - [-]



  • Teaching Credits - [-]




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    Backpack Type/Color: Satchel
    Tool Pouch Location: Right back hip
    Kunai/Shuriken Holster Location: Left thigh

    Gold: 10,500g


    Equipment

    Kunai: 5
    Shuriken: 10


    Supplies

    Item: -

    Custom Equipment

    N/A

    Housing/Furniture

    {House Type}: -
    {Object in above house.}: -
     

  • White Water Lilly


    Gregar828
    Vice Captain

    PostPosted: Fri Oct 26, 2012 11:31 pm


    Your chakra elements list Katon as the primary element, but within your jutsu list, it isn't even mentioned. Furthermore, the list contains a section for Fuuton, which is an element you did not list. Please fix this.
    PostPosted: Fri Oct 26, 2012 11:34 pm


    Gregar828
    Your chakra elements list Katon as the primary element, but within your jutsu list, it isn't even mentioned. Furthermore, the list contains a section for Fuuton, which is an element you did not list. Please fix this.

    lol, hey there Greg!

    Was actually just editing some things (thought about removing it too). Didn't expect you to get to it so soon. Sorry about this. I'll remove it and than repost it once I have it fixed.

    White Water Lilly


    Gregar828
    Vice Captain

    PostPosted: Fri Oct 26, 2012 11:35 pm


    White Water Lilly
    Gregar828
    Your chakra elements list Katon as the primary element, but within your jutsu list, it isn't even mentioned. Furthermore, the list contains a section for Fuuton, which is an element you did not list. Please fix this.

    lol, hey there Greg!

    Was actually just editing some things (thought about removing it too). Didn't expect you to get to it so soon. Sorry about this. I'll remove it and than repost it once I have it fixed.


    Don't remove it, just repost it. I like having both profiles up, so I can be 110% sure I caught everything.

    As for getting to it so soon.........well, I'm Gregar. You expected anything less?
    PostPosted: Fri Oct 26, 2012 11:52 pm


    Gregar828
    White Water Lilly
    Gregar828
    Your chakra elements list Katon as the primary element, but within your jutsu list, it isn't even mentioned. Furthermore, the list contains a section for Fuuton, which is an element you did not list. Please fix this.

    lol, hey there Greg!

    Was actually just editing some things (thought about removing it too). Didn't expect you to get to it so soon. Sorry about this. I'll remove it and than repost it once I have it fixed.


    Don't remove it, just repost it. I like having both profiles up, so I can be 110% sure I caught everything.

    As for getting to it so soon.........well, I'm Gregar. You expected anything less?

    kk and lol, of course, how could I forget? XD

    Will have it edited and re-posted...soon...

    White Water Lilly


    White Water Lilly

    PostPosted: Sat Oct 27, 2012 12:04 am


    Miyake ShizunaUser Image

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    Character Name: Miyake, Shizuna
    Nicknames: Shizu || Fake Mute
    Age: 17
    Gender: Female
    Hair Color: Dusty Rose
    Eye Color: Light Cherry Red
    Height: 5'4"
    Body Type: Petite || Agile || Flexible
    Distinguishing Features: Two tattoos: hibiscus flower on her right shoulder blade & an ivy vine wrapped around her left hand

    Personality - Not part of original format but I like to have this here as a rpc guide; will remove if required

    Shizuna is a shy, quiet girl who appears to others as mute. She rarely speaks, even to her parents, the only ones to ever hear her voice is her artwork and even then its so soft you could barely hear it. Shizuna is very passionate about her work thus she is easily angered if someone was to mistreat any form of art. Kind and sweet, Shizuna relays to people her feelings and thoughts through random pictures and words she makes in the sketchbook she always has hanging by her side.

    Background - [Link to Full History to Come]

    Expectations...its a dangerous thing and often than not, will leave an permit scar on those who are forced to live up to them. Born into the Ink Artistry Clan, Shizuna was introduced to the world of living art at an early age. As a child bred from two Ink Artistry parents, Shizuna should have carried a more stronger percentage of her parent's ability over living ink than most Ink Artistry decedents. Mix that with her own potential abilities to work with living ink, Shizuna was viewed as the perfect Ink Artistry child capable of bringing glory and status to their sub-par clan. At birth, she had a tattoo similar to a hibiscus flower on her right shoulder, proof of her inheritance of her parents' ink, and having believed that the sooner Shizuna learned the ways of the clan the better, Shizuna was immediately started on the path of an artist.

    Push to the brink, Shizuna was forces daily to observe and practice numerous forms of artistic expression. Painting being the main focus, Shizuna spent every waking hour either staring at other painting or being directed to paint herself without breaks except for naps (when she was 1-3 years old), going to the bathroom, and meals. When she was five, Shizuna was given her first test to determine her worth.

    The night as Shizuna conducted her test in the basement dojo of her family home, her ink would sprung to life unwilling to obey the will of its creator. This surprised the elders as well as Shizuna's parents seeing how Shizuna was the perfect specimen. What they didn't know was that Shizuna's own unstable mind was the reason behind this madness. Having been trained so strictly for so long and constantly reminded that failure was not an option; Shizuna had went into the dojo where she was to conduct her test with a less than steady mind. It was a simple task really, paint a picture with ink and have it come to life. If Shizuna really wanted to, she could've done it in her sleep but her fears of failing was what cause her loose control over her abilities and send the drawing on an rampage.

    Expecting the worst, her parents and the elders escaped the room leaving Shizuna to fend for herself. What happened next turned out to be even more of a mystery as a loud explosion erupted from the room and then silence. When her parents re-entered the room, they were surprised to find Shizuna still breathing and unconscious with her right hand covering what looked to be a ivy vine tattoo.

    After that night, Shizuna never spoke unless necessary and she closed herself off to her art. To the surprise of everyone who've ever heard of that night's incident, Shizuna never had anymore problems with controlling her powers and she even showed much promise when it came to the clan techniques. Dedicating herself to her art and shinobi career, Shizuna finally graduated from the academy after much difficulties - more so due to her lack of vocal communications than anything. During this time, Shizuna has also established a sort of reputation amongst her classmate as a 'Fake Mute' as Shizuna actually could speak if forced into a corner; very quietly but still speaking none the less. Never without her sketchbook and ink, Shizuna spends the day in various parts of town sketching and will only communicate with others if they initiate it first; even so a proper conversation can only be held if the person can stand to receive responses in the form of art that is.


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    Village: Kumogakure
    Organization: -
    Rank: Jounin
    Titles: The Silent Artist
    Headband Style/Color: Standard || Bubble Gum Pink
    Headband Location: Around neck

    Chakra Color: Rose
    Chakra Level: Medium [modifier: +3/10] Low (until bloodline app's approved)
    Chakra Points: 109 85
    Chakra Elements: Suiton || Fuuton || Hiton
    Extra Chakra Elements: -

    Chakra Control: -


    Learning Information:
    [Profession] - Learning Nin-/Gen-jutsu [1] post faster
    [Profession] - Self teach seals of equal or lower rank w/ scroll takes [1] post longer
    [Shinobi Type: Support] - All jutsu can be learned [2] post faster

    Support: -2 posts to learn jutsu; can perform jutsus that are below their rank without hand-seals & jutsus of equal rank can be performed with far fewer hand-seals, allowing the support shinobi to get off a quick jutsu in close quarters; jutsus of higher rank require the normal number of hand-seals

    Combo: Can use 2 jutsu per post; at Jounin can use 3 jutsu per post

    Bloodline, Clan, or Demon: Ink Artistry = [Application] [Pending]
    Bloodline, Clan, or Demon Stage: N/A

    Bloodline/Clan Transplant: -
    Transplant Stage: -


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    Shinobi Profession: Sealing Master

    Profession Base Benefit:
    Professional Sealer: Those of the Sealing Master profession are the only ninja capable of fully mastering the art of seals, able to learn and use any type of seal available, and even design their own.
    (Able to learn all seals in the list, and learn custom seals.)

    Sealed Knowledge: While normally one must be taught how to utilize seals, the Sealing Master is able to learn seals of their level directly from a scroll, so long as they can obtain it. They are also the only class capable of teaching the art of seals to others.
    (Able to self teach seals of equal or lower rank if a scroll is available, with a +1 post learning penalty. Must PM the Kage or a crew member to obtain the scroll.)

    Weakness:
    Weak Bodied: Due to the sealing master’s high academic focus, their physical training has suffered, leaving them more susceptible to harm.
    (When hit with a damaging jutsu of equal or greater rank to the Sealing Master, the Sealing Master treats the jutsu as if it were one rank higher in terms of damage done)


    Rank Benefits

    Genin
    Tattoo Artist: Soon after beginning training in seals, one begins to notice that they are easily spotted. Thus, a solution was required. Some sealing masters learn how to draw the seal patterns in such a way that they are unrecognizable as anything but a picture of the user’s choice. Used on human flesh, it would appear to be a simple tattoo, thus the name. This is done in such a way that it does not harm the seal functions, simply making it look differently.
    (Able to make seals that are impossible to identify as such. Inversely, easily able to identify disguised seals.)

    Chuunin
    Blood Sealing: After much training in the art of sealing, the sealing master discovers that by simply mixing a bit of blood with his ink just right, he is able to make a stronger variation of any seal.
    (Blood seals are usable only by the individual who’s blood was used to make them. Can be applied to any seal.)

    Jounin
    Space Time Manipulator: After much dedication and study of the art of sealing, some masters begin to find deeper meaning in their techniques. Delving into that unknown, they find the secret to space and time.
    (Able to use Space Time jutsu.)


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    Soul Artistry - [Pending]

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    Ninjutsu

    Universal

      E Rank
    • Henge no Jutsu (Transformation)


    • D Rank
    • Kinobori no Jutsu (Tree Walking Technique)/Kabenobori no Jutsu (Wall Walking Technique)
    • Kyou Masukingu No Jutsu (Sound Masking Technique)


    • C Rank
    • Suimen Hokou no Gyou (The Art of Water Walking)


    Fuinjutsu: Sealing

      E Rank
    • Storage Seal Basic


    • D Rank
    • Hiku (To pull)
    • Reinforcement Seal (Kyouka)


    • C Rank
    • Explosive Seal
    • Security Seal
    • Radio Seal


    • B Rank



    • A Rank



    Suiton: Water

      E Rank
    • Mizu Soujuu (Water Manipulation)
    • Mizu Kagami no Jutsu (Water Mirror Technique)
    • Mizu no Waruasobi (Trick of Water)
    • Uo Tsuba (Fish Spit)


    • D Rank
    • Mizutamari no Jutsu (Water Puddle Technique)
    • Suiton: Mizu Shuriken no Jutsu (Water Release: Water Shuriken Technique)
    • Mizu Peretto (Water Pellet)
    • Isonagi no Jutsu (Beach Crab)
    • Mizu Tate no Jutsu (Water Shield Technique)


    • C Rank
    • Mizu Bunshin (Water Clone)
    • Mizutamari Yusuo no Jutsu (Water Puddle Transportation)
    • Deido Tama (Mud Ball)
    • Suikusari no Jutsu (Water Chains Technique)
    • Mizu no Yaiba (Water Sword)
    • Mizukaisou Bunshin no Jutsu
    • Mizu no Yoroi (Water Armor)
    • Suiton: Fuuma Mizu Shuriken (Water Release: Evil Windmill Water Shuriken)
    • Suimenka no Kisoku ( Breathing underwater Technique)
    • Kirigakure no Jutsu (Hidden Mist Technique)


    • B Rank
    • Kiri Shikaku no Jutsu (Mist Vision Technique)


    • A Rank
    • Suiton: Suihou no Jutsu (Water Release: Water Cannon Technique)
    • Suiton: Mizu Ryuu no Jutsu (Water Release: Water Dragon Technique)
    • Doiru Suiyari no Jutsu (Drilling Water Spears)
    • Suiton: Suise no Jutsu (Water Release: Water Torrent Technique)
    • Mizuhada Bunshin No Jutsu (Water Body Clone Technique)
    • Suijouki no Jutsu (Steam Technique)
    • Suirou no Jutsu (Water Prison Technique)
    • Suiton: Suikoudan no Jutsu (Water Release: Water Shark Blast Technique)
    • Gekiryuu Chikara (Raging River Force)
    • Suiton: Suijinheki (Water Release: Water Barrier)


    Fuuton: Wind

      E Rank
    • Hanpatsu Kaze no Jutsu (Retrieving Wind Technique)


    • D Rank
    • Okuridashi Kaze (Propelling Winds)


    • C Rank



    Hiton: Medical

      E Rank
    • Shindan (Diagnosis)
    • Kiyomaru (Cleanse)


    • D Rank



    • C Rank



    Genjutsu

    Universal

      E Rank
    • Bunshin no Jutsu



    • D Rank
    • Bakuretsu Kunai (Exploding Kunai)
    • Magen: Kokuni Arazu No Jutsu (Demonic Illusion: False Surroundings Technique)
    • Kori Shinchuu no Jutsu (Sly Fellow Mind Skill)


    • C Rank
    • Genjutsu Kai (Release)


    Suiton: Water

      E Rank


    • D Rank



    Fuuton: Wind

      E Rank



    • D Rank




    Taijutsu

      E Rank


    • D Rank



    Bloodline Jutsu

    Ink Artistry

      Ninjutsu

      E Rank
    • Sumi Bunshin no Jutsu (Ink Clone Technique)

      D Rank


    • C Rank
    • Sumi Gasumi no Jutsu (Ink Haze Technique)
    • Choujuu Giga (Super Beast Imitation Drawing)


      Genjutsu

      E Rank


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    Summoning Type: -

    Summons Known:
      E Rank


    • D Rank



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    Stages Known: -

    Maneuvers:
    E Rank


  • D Rank



  • Abilities: -

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    Mission Statement

    Total Number of Missions Completed: 0

    Total Number of Mission Points Accumulated: 0

    Mission Record:

    E-rank - [-]



  • D-rank - [-]



  • C-rank - [-]



  • B-rank - [-]



  • A-rank - [-]



  • S-rank - [-]



  • Alternative Missions - [-]



  • Teaching Credits - [-]




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    Backpack Type/Color: Satchel
    Tool Pouch Location: Left back hip
    Kunai/Shuriken Holster Location: Right thigh

    Gold: 10,500g


    Equipment

    Kunai: 5
    Shuriken: 10


    Supplies

    Item: -

    Custom Equipment

    N/A

    Housing/Furniture

    {House Type}: -
    {Object in above house.}: -
     
  • PostPosted: Sat Oct 27, 2012 7:53 pm


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    White Water Lilly

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    Gregar828

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    White Water Lilly
    Gregar828

    Thanks. Quick question. Do I need to repost once my BL gets approved or can I just change it?


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    Gregar828
    Vice Captain


    White Water Lilly

    PostPosted: Sat Oct 27, 2012 8:59 pm


    Gregar828
    White Water Lilly
    Gregar828

    Thanks. Quick question. Do I need to repost once my BL gets approved or can I just change it?


    You can just make the edits without reposting.

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