Rpc Name: Akali Village: Kumogakure no Sato Rank: Genin Bloodline or Clan applied for:Pin Point What you know about the clan/bl: What I know is what I've read in the description and the techniques stated there. They are capable of controling any weapon as long as it has their seal. They can also put elemental seals on the weapons. At a certain level if is also possible for them to make weapons with their jutsu normal and elemental weapons). But balancing that control over weapons, there is the fact that their control is only for the weapons with their seals. And while they are very skilled with weapons, anything unrelated to weapons is not as efficient as it would be. Another weakness, that is not only theirs but any weapon user's, is the fact that weapons are vulnerable to the elements, with the vulnerability depending on the material they are made of and against what element they are being used. Rp Sample:
Within the walls of Kumogakure, a shinobi of a rather uncommon lineage was being trained by one of the few teachers of her same lineage. The name of this shinobi was Akali and she had no surname for as long as she remembered. She was simply found one day as a baby in Kumogakure and raised until it was noticed that she had an innate ability to wield weapons. It caught the attention of the one who now taught her about their power. At that time it was discovered that she was a heiress of the Pinpoint Accuracy bloodline, just like the person in charge of training the shinobi of Kumo in armed combat. Because of that Akali was taken as a pupil of the armed combat teacher and eventually told about the story of her bloodline and her affinity with weapons.
"Akali, remember what you were told when we first started with your training. Completely focus on your weapon in order to mark it with your very own seal, just then you will be able to control it." a male's hoarse voice tone was heard within the training room. He talked to his pupil Akali. "I know that already, stop distracting me." she talked back to him and once again completely focused on the weapon. She had attempted it before, as she had been training with him for a few days already, but her mind wandered and her focus was dispersed several times. Only once she managed to complete the seal on the weapon given to her. But this day it was different, she was more determined and spent the time she should have used to sleep to train her focus. During this day's training she was finally able to improve and mark the sword in her hand with the seal, with her seal.
That seal she created allowed her to have a complete control over the marked weapon. If without it she was skilled already, with it she would be able to reach a whole different level. "Yay, I did it sensei." she said, with a happy voice tone, but that happiness of hers lasted for a couple of moments only, since her thoughts were very different from her sensei's. "Now can you help me with other jutsu? I'm good enough with weapons already, but I want to improve in the other areas too." she told him, but the response she got would not be so good. "Fool, I won't waste my time trying to train you with what you are not good at. If it has nothing to do with weapons, you would take a long time to improve. Plus, there are other teachers who could help you with that kind of general thing." the tone was harsh, specially about the part where she was not good with anything that did not require weapons, at least when compared to average people.
"You still have a long way to go." he said and decided to show her something that could ge her excited with learning more about her lineage's techniques. He extended his arm to his side after performing some handseals and within the next moments he created multiple weapons, one by one, around his hand. The weapons had his seal on them, not being required for him to mark them with it. With his other arm, he repeated the same act, but with different seals as he was going to show her a different technique. Though different, it had the same idea of creating weapons. Around his other hand, elemental weapons were created, the exact same weapons but made from the pure elements that he had affinity with, lightning, earth and wind. He threw them all the weapons he had created past Akali, aiming at the wall behind her and they traveled at remarkable speed. Of course, that very wall was not reinforced it was a simple and traditional dojo wall and the weapons went through it, "Ah..." she was speechless. Akali was fully aware that her ability to use weapons that was superior to ordinary people was because of her bloodline, but she was completely oblivious to the fact that she could become capable of doing the same things her sensei was showing her. Controlling weapons that had the seal of her bloodline, creating weapons from thin air, infusing elements to weapons and even creating weapons out of the pure elements. Even though there were some drawbacks, for her the advantages were more than enough to even it and make it have advantages only.
Akali planned on ignoring what the weapons thrown by her sensei hit, but he made a sign for her to go look at what they hit. And so the kunoichi left the room, heading to the one right beside it. It was without doubt a surprising scene. In the short moment the weapons pierced through the weak wall of the dojo, the sensei's high accuracy allowed him to direct the weapons to make them hit the targets that were lined in the next room. He did not need more than the hole in the wall created by the weapons to guide them with his accurate control. "Awe...some..." she uttered as she was amused. Before she thought that the kinds of jutsu he was not teaching her because she was not good with them could be useful, but learning what her sensei could do seemed way better than ordinary jutsu.
- Accurate and fast throwing (sensei's example) - Control any weapon with the seal on it (sensei's example) - Good with jutsu related to weapons (sensei's example) - Assassination expert (hit a target through a wall / sensei's example) - No need for handsign for weapon control (sensei's example) - Need to look at the weapon to form the seal (Akali's example) - Faster leaning weapon jutsu & less proficient with jutsu not related to weapons (sensei's comparison of Akali's skills) - Can only control weapons with the seal (sensei's explanation) - Takes a few seconds to make the seal, cannot move and requires full focus to create it (Akali's example) - Elemental weakness of the weapons (common sense is it not?) - Takes longer to learn jutsu not related to weapons (sensei says it to Akali)
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Attach Seal: (Genin rank) Range: 5 Meters Description: For 5 seconds, the user must focus completely on the weapon to be controlled. During that time, they will be completely unaware of their surroundings. When done, the seal will appear on the weapon. The size will depend on the weapon. Whilst the seal is on, the weapon can be controlled by the user. The seal can be removed in multiple ways.
Weapon Formation: (Chuunin Rank) Range: 1 Meter Description: This jutsu does exactly what it says. It creates new weapons. This jutsu forms the weapon 1 meter away from the user. The time taken to form the weapon is as follows: Small weaponry(Kunai, Shruiken, Senbon): 1 post Medium weaponry(Swords, Hachets, Small chains): 2 posts Large weaponry(Chain and ball, Giant axes, Giant hammers): 3 posts The weapon will automatically have the normal seal when formed.
Elemental Weapon Formation: (Jounin Rank) Range: 1 Meter Description: This jutsu makes a weapon out of an element, such as water and the like. For earth, The weapon is heavy and hard to deter. However, it is slow. It can travel through Earth freely. For water, it can travel through water freely, and when it multpilies it stays the same shape. For fire, It can literally pass through a person because it is so hot it burns a way through. It travels through fire without damage For lightning, it pierces through things and electricutes as well. It can temporarily blind a person from it's brightness. For wind, it is nearly invisible and it moves at a faster speed than before.
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Rpc Name: Elise Aburame Village: undecided Rank: genin Bloodline or Clan applied for: Aburame What you know about the clan/bl: The user relies almost totally on his insects to do all of his fighting for him/her. THey aren't good with any other ninjutsu, but the swarm within them makes up for it by being able to adapt to the element they have the most trouble with. They leech out chakra with decreasing effectiveness over time but do well when swarming enemies with their insects. Rp Sample: Kumogakure isn't quite as safe as most people would have you think. Within the darkest of allyways and most overlooked corners lie very dangerous fellows that are always up to no good. For this reason alone, the most prestigious of men and woman enlist a special type of protection as they travel. A woman who knows these places like the back of her own hand and even better the way to navigate them. Elise Aburame walked with her insects crawling along her face in patterns that gave her information about the area she was guiding a politician to and from some shifty locations. She didn't care why he was going to and from these areas. She only got paid to watch his back... until someone paid her to do more. She kept a hand on her katana as they advanced. Insects flew to and from her sleeves and the top of her jackets. She knew they were being followed by someone who was armed to the teeth. Assassins stood out clear as day to her and her kikaichuu. She told the man to stand a few feet away near the wall and not turn around for a few seconds. She turned silently to the direction the hidden shinobi was in and her bugs silently began to crawl along the ground in a net-like fashion around her feet. Five swarms formed on the ground around her and as she walked they came together to form five spiders crawling behind her. The man came out of the darkness, aware he'd been noticed, and drew a blade. He was fast, coming at the girl who seemed to be unaware of his advance. At the last second two of the swarms jumped forth to meet him head on, going from the shapes of two spiders into a hungry, hazy group of destruction bugs that slowed him down enough to let Elise avoid his attack and get around behind him. She drew her blade, which had more than a few insects on it as well. She stabbed at his back wanting to end it fast much to her own disappointment. Though he was losing chakra fast and there wasn't much he could do, he avoided a quick death by rolling to the left and coming back with a counter attack. Elise put a heavy mass of insects in front the blade, stopping it in the swarm and then that swarm formed a clone of her with a hand on the blade, holding it in her hand. The swarm of kikaichuu that had attached to him detached and the real Elise created some distance between her and the man. As long as he was close to her and able to attack, she wouldn't be able to tire him out with her insects as effectively as she wanted to.
(Getting removed the comp... so it's a WIP.)
Posted: Fri Jan 04, 2013 2:55 pm
Rpc Name: Moxt Reiki [seeking approval of bloodline previous to application of profile]
Village: Kirigakure [Hopefully]
Rank: Genin? (you guys removed the academy students, right?)
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Haku's Hyoton Manipulation
What you know about the clan/bl: Lets see.. the user requires the combination of the Water and wind elements, to create and control the element of ice. This, of course, is only unlocked through a traumatizing event (Which, I guess would be like the life/death deal Uchihas have with the sharingan). They are rather weak to fire higher to their rank, as well as Demon fire, simply by the melting factor and lighting, due to the combination that it is required to make it.
Rp Sample:
Moxt was shocked. She was for certain, that her ice, wasn't at all breakable. Yet, there he was, breaking her ice.
With lighting. ICE IS NOT SUPPOSED TO BREAK BY LIGHTING.
Not only that, Moxt had been knock back a few feet, and skidded on the ground with a few tumbles, and had eventually landed flat on her face; eating the dirt below her.
" See? Toooold 'ya! Lighting is better than your iiiiiice! Lighting's better than you iiiiiiice! " the boy mocked, as he had just won the bet they had, jumping for joy.
" No! We're no finished yet! We have three rounds, remember?!" the girl huffed, even though her sparring partner had won the first two rounds. With this thought in her mind she recreated her strong expression, and gotten herself into the proper stance to try again.
" Tsk, Moxt, I'm a Chunin, remember? I'm going to win easy! " The boy laughed, as he started to run at Moxt at full speed.
"I'll prove you wrong!" Moxt piped up, as she knew Reido was still in use, simply because the training grounds was littered with 'the white stuff'. With this, she started to preform seals as she was quickly running over to the small pond by the grounds, while her opponent chased her, trying to keep within range.
Moxt finished her hand seals, and had also quickly scooped up water, and threw the water up into the air. "Retsu Kaze No Jutsu!" The girl said proudly, as the water once thrown, was starting to stir around her, and had caused a chilling breeze around her. Moxt, herself, knew the boy grew up in Sunagakure, so this was going to be rather chilling for him.
As Moxt was figuring out her next move, her opponent began to use handseals, despite the suddenly burst of cold, frosty wind, giving minor cuts along his face as well as his shaky hands and wrists, due to being the only exposed skin on his whole body. He kept a close eye on Moxt, who was on her way to do another set of handseals of herself.
Moxt, was now on the move, as she pulled water all over her side of the sparring field, letting it wet the ground. During her preparation, her opponent was sluggishly gotten to the ever-so absent minded child, and had pushed all the chakra into her.
"Dendou Kariyou no Jutsu!" He had hissed, as Moxt would feel as if she suddenly gained double her weight. It was long that she started to... chip?
"Hyouga Bunshin No Jutsu~" Moxt giggled in the distance, as she had already seemed to use Koori Waku No Jutsu previously, to disappear to the other side of the pond, as the Clone prepped this side for easier combat.
The clone itself, slowly moved, but had attacked the opponent, by its own fists. The boy noticed this, and had began to send a flurry of attacks at the frozen clone, chipping away at it, at an ever so fast pace.
Moxt, this time, was gathering ice and snow around her, and with the help of the water, and Reido, had glued all the pieces together. Once this was done, she preformed handseals, to insert chakra into the ice. "Koorikoku" Moxt murmured to herself, as she started to carve the ice into a huge shiriken, which was even larger than her in height.
With this made, she lifted it up slightly, and started to spin around faster and faster, and had eventually let go of it, sending it flying across the pond.
The Opponent had obliterated the Clone, with a finish of kicking the head clean off of it. As he had relaxed to catch his breath, he barely noticed that there was a large shiriken flying in his direction. With a simple sidestep, and following the flight pattern the shiriken had spun, he had easily avoided the attack, with a minor cut onto his back. On his behalf, this game of chase and dodge was getting annoying.
He ran around the pond, as Moxt was trying to search for chakra pills in her front pocket, since she used alot of chakra in the last few spars as well, and she barely had enough chakra for more jutsus she had. She thought she could actually win this.
The opponent was going for immature tactic, but he knew would not fail. With quick handsigns, he charged his main hand and ran at her. "Kanri Soushitsu no Jutsu !" He yelled, and had aimed for her stomach.
It took a moment for Moxt to realize what the boy was doing, and by the time she realized it was too late to dodge, even with her ice sliding technique, as she lost all feeling below.
She didn't want to look down, as she fell back and started to cry. A rather disgusting trick to use, but no matter; it was an effective one.
To make matters worse, The boy dragged her, and had sat on the dirtied girl's back, and used his electric overdose technique on himself, to increase his own weight.
"Ow ow ow owwwwwww!" Moxt whined, as she herself wasn't really considered a heavyweight, and was feeling that she was getting crushed by the weight.
"Say that Lighting is better than Ice!"
"No! Never! OOWWW"
"Say it, and I'll get off of you."
"L-lighting is better than Ice!! There! Get off!"
Checkmate.
"You owe me 50 ryo."
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Techniques used:
From Bloodline: Reido [Freezing Point] Description: The very foundation upon which all of Yukigakures Ninjutsu is based upon. By using chakra to manipulate water, a Snow-nin is able to freeze an available water source which can then be used for Ice or Snow based Ninjutsu. Snow ninja are able to use this ability to freeze moisture found within the enviroment in order to create ice in any situation as long as moisture is present. This jutsu is required for the rest of the techniques in this tree.
Retsu Kaze No Jutsu [Cold Breeze Technique] Description: By using a source of water and throwing it into the air [or just the moisture in the air itself if Chuunin/Jounin] the user is able to force the moisture to spin around and form a very cold and harsh breeze to swirl around the user, extending forth from the user for about twenty feet. This wind seems to bite the skin and if one is not used to a very cold climate, they could find themselves in trouble. The particles of ice within the air also tear at exposed skin, causing minor cuts.
Hyouga Bunshin No Jutsu [Glacier Bunshin Technique] Description: A clone formed entirely out of ice. This bunshin is formed of compacted and very dense ice. The result of the compact ice is a clone that is very hard to destroy and is fully capable of combat although it does lack any sort of chakra. Where most clones are only able to take one or two hits, the Hyouga bunshin is able to withstand multiple blows, with the ice chipping away as each attack lands. This bunshin is very weak against Katons. For every two reserves the user possesses, the max number of clones that can be created at any one time is increased by one.
Koori Waku No Jutsu [Ice Slide Technique] Description: A usefull technique for dodging or manuevering around upon the battlefield. As long as their is a small amount of water located near or around the users feet they are able to force chakra through their feet and instantly freeze the moisture and use it as a slide of sorts. This technique makes the water stretch out and create ice for the user to slide upon as long as their is sufficient amount of moisture. This jutsu can be used to avoid oncoming techniques and attacks, or just for moving quicker than one is normally able to run.
Koorikoku [Ice Carving] Description: Forcing chakra into ice the user is able to carve the ice into any item they can think of making. The only restriction of this jutsu is that they must have an equal amount of ice in order to carve out the item/weapon they wish to create.
Jutsu used in example; not of bloodline:
Dendou Kariyou no Jutsu (Electric Overdose Technique) Description: The user takes one post to channel a large amount of electricity into a limb, making the chakra visible. Upon contact with the opponent, the electricity is shot into him and the target’s weight almost doubles, making it harder for the victim to move.
Kanri Soushitsu no Jutsu (Control Loss Technique) Description: A rather sophomoric skill in itself forming electricity into the primary hand of the Cloud-Nin the shinobi delivers a full on palm strike to the body, the voltage of this particular technique is considered high enough that the target generally loses control of the bowels and bladder causing a rather distracting mess in their undergarments. Obviously the catch is however that one has to be hit by the palm strike to fall victim to this immature tactic.
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Rpc Name: Kira Katonami (Currently going through Acceptance Process) Village: Konoha Rank: Genin Bloodline or Clan applied for: Nara Clan What you know about the clan/bl: Nara clan members are, pretty much, the master of the Shadows. Kageton (Shadow release) is used for ALL of their jutsu and, should one be stuck in their shadow, they are nearly helpless to the Nara's will until they can either break out of it or be broken out. They also are very intelligent, being some of the smartest Shinobi of the Ninja World. They also love to tend to deer. Rp Sample:
Another boring day. There had been boring days, this was a boring day, and boring days were sure to come. Kira was walking around the streets of her village, as usual, when she came upon a group of three shinobi attempting to rob a Romen shop. HER Romen Shop! With a smirk, Kira would walk in, the setting sun casting long shadows as she leaned against a support pole with her hands in her pockets and one leg behind another as she stood. "Well, this certainly isn't something you see every day." Before she even had a chance to utter a single word more, two of the Shinobi turned, the other still looting the store. Sure, Kira was hurt that they didn't think she was good enough to have all of them fight her at once, not that it mattered really, but she would put them in her place soon enough.
As the first man stepped forwards, a kunai was imbedded into the wooden support beam Kira had been leaning against. That was to close, she needed to be careful. Instantly, her hands came together, and her shadows set to work. As both of them charged her, daggers raised, a black shadow would puncture through them from the side. Kage Nui no Jutsu [ Shadow Sewing Technique ] With them firmly stuck together, and dying slowly, she would turn to the third party, who was now turning to finally pay her attention. But, it was to late. As Kira's free tentacles raged up, she looked quite menacing. Two Kunai were thrown at another man. Though, one was dodged, and one barely skimmed the opponent's cheek this, of course, was all to plan for the one dodge Kunai landed in her opponent's shadow, and they were stuck. Kagemane Shuriken no Jutsu [ Shadow Imitation Shuriken Technique ] Finally, in one swift movement, one of the shadows elongates and wrapped around the throat of the third robber who was stuck. In no time at all, his neck was swollen, his face blue as he had been suffocated. Kage Kubi Shibari no Jutsu [ Shadow Neck Bind Technique ]
As Kira allowed the limp body to finally fall to the ground, she turned her attention back to the whimpering two that were still stuck together. Kira turned, cracking her neck as sloshing and screaming came from behind her as her tendrils of shadows pierce the men into a bloody pulp over and over again. Kage Nui no Jutsu [ Shadow Sewing Technique ]
Posted: Mon Jan 14, 2013 8:46 am
Rpc Name: Ashllyn Akarima Village: Konohagakure no Sato Rank: Jonin Bloodline or Clan applied for: Mind's Eye of Kagura What you know about the clan/bl: The clan isn't so much something blood related as a heightened ability to sense another's chakra. Once you are familiar with a particular person's chakra, it is easier to lock onto their chakra position at a longer distance than for someone whom you have had very little contact with. The ability allows you to sense chakra at a long distance and follow the person's movements over the terrain. The clan also allows you to 'cover' your own chakra trail so that others cannot sense you. One of the more prominant abilities this clan has at their disposal is the fact that those who bite into them can heal due to certain properties within them. Unfotunately, this is not perfect, and cannot heal someone who is dead or darn near that point. Rp Sample: "Alright, we're going to play a little game. Are you ready?" Ash yawned as he stepped into the classroom and plopped himself down in the chair to begin the day's lessons. The Kage decided it would be fun to see him try and deal with children for a day, so here he was. It wasn't like he hated children, but the fact he was near enough to their age that they ignored him most of the time was something he could do without. Propping his feet up on the desk, he looked over the few kids that were in the room and checked over their chakra signatures. He'd caught sight of a few of them running through the village before but none of them really struck out to him as special. So far they were just staring at him curiously. "No answer? I'll take that as a stunned 'yes' then." Sighing, Ash removed his feet from the top of the desk and stood up to move towards the door. He didn't hear any feet following him so he turned and motioned for the kids to join him. He'd see just how good these kids were at following a few orders while outside. The Academy was close enough to the tree line that he could use it for a little test he had planned. Ash took the line of following ducklings down the hall and out towards the training grounds the Academy held in its grasp.
The Medical Shinobi waited until the kids were all lined up before him and ready to listen before he began. The last thing he wanted to do was stand and talk when the little midgets were too far into their own conversation to listen. "So, today we'll be playing a game of Hide and Seek. Easy, hm? Well, no. Today you'll be doing it with your eyes completedly closed. Those who hide can do it however they please, but remember that once you find a place to hide, you cannot move an inch. Those who will be searching must use every sense available to them except for sight. If you're ready, then you can continue. Oh, and keep in mind that nobody will say a single thing throught the game. Even when those who are hiding are already found, I shall not tell you. You must figure out for yourself when everyone has been tagged. To figure out who is going to be 'it' you all will close your eyes and whoever I touch is 'it'. I will then let those who are going to hide have time to do so. Are you ready? Let's start."
The children closed their eyes then, and Ash nodded at the obedience he was being shown. It was a game, so the children were probably just excited to not be stuck in a classroom. Didn't matter to him, none of them were going to be on the hiding team anyway. Going down the line, he touched each of the children's shoulders to let them know they were it before moving towards the line of trees to make them think someone was heading to hide. Launching up into one of the trees, he settled himself in and closed his eyes. Soon they'd get it that the game had started and would struggle to move in the direction the feet had headed before. Even with his eyes closed, it was as though little dots of colored light danced below him past closed lids. It took them a little bit, but soon they began to waddle themselves closer to him, bumping into trees and bushes and mumbling to themselves. At least now he could take a nap and not worry about them. Nuzzling up to the rough bark of the tree, Ashllyn yawned once more and let sleep take him away.
When he came to again, he sensed the little balls of light were huddled together below him. Perhaps they had figured it out and were watching him? Opening an eye to look down, he was shocked to see the group were all cuddled together around the tree and napping just the same as he was. The Hokage wouldn't be happy to learn he had just used his class time to get children to sleep. Touching down on the ground with only a light tap, he looked over the kids and noticed a lot of them had bumps and bruises. With the use of a simple technique, Ashllyn's chakra completely removed any and all germs from his skin and allowed him to gently touch at the children's wounds to see how bad they were. One of the things he had learned to do early on was sense how severe the wounds were just by touch. With his ability to control his chakra in pinpoint precision helped him preserve his chakra to the utmost possible point as well. When he'd figured none of the children's wounds were bad, he used his more basic healing technique to completely heal the kids one by one. None of them even stirred in their slumber so he decided to leave them be. As long as none of the other teachers found out he'd allowed them to get hurt and sleep away their class it was all fine, right? Oh well, too late to worry about that.
TECHNIQUES USED (Since the Clan has no jutsu, I am using things relative to his preferred style and integrating how he uses the Clan's basic ability in a daily aspect.) Kiyomaru (Cleanse) Shindan (Diagnosis) Chiyute No Jutsu: Karui (Healing Hands Technique: Minor)
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@Beatriz: While it wasn't all done with your RPC, it certainly showed that you understand each aspect of this bloodline fully, as both an advanced user and a beginner. Approved.
@Syn: Yours says work in progress, so it will be disregarded until otherwise stated.
@Keishi: Disregarding the grammatical errors for now, Making a clone and a shuriken can be done with a lot of bloodlines, we need to see that you know how to use this one. In addition, you seemed to declare the use of techniques long after they had actually been used, such as with the clone and the Ice Slide, which is an illegal maneuver in RP. Unfortunately, I must deny this.
@Wolfbain: You seem to have an overpowered view of the Nara clan. The tendrils of shadow, while powerful, cannot instantaneously attack three people at once, with no words to declare the jutsu used (Yes, you must say the jutsu you're using out loud. You don't have to yell it, but you can't fire them off with a thought. For now, denied.
@TheAppleStar: Using a non battle simulation for clan usage is atypical, but works in this aspect. I approve this.
Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2013 4:29 pm
@Gregar: Ooooooh right, right. I tried to do it that way for more interesting means, but that backfired lol. On the other hand, I tried to stay within her rank's techniques, which doesn't really cover alot of the style. Well, I'll try for a different scenario, then.
Rpc Name: Moxt Reiki [seeking approval of bloodline previous to application of profile]
Village: Kirigakure [Hopefully]
Rank: Genin? (you guys removed the academy students, right?)
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Haku's Hyoton Manipulation
What you know about the clan/bl: Lets see.. the user requires the combination of the Water and wind elements, to create and control the element of ice. This, of course, is only unlocked through a traumatizing event (Which, I guess would be like the life/death deal Uchihas have with the sharingan). They are rather weak to fire higher to their rank, as well as Demon fire, simply by the melting factor and lighting, due to the combination that it is required to make it.
Rp Sample (Round two):
Moxt stood still, rather unexpressed and spiritless as she watched others on team, prepare for their night, in the cold, hazardous winter wasteland. There was blizzards coming in and out of the area, in short intervals.
She also heard from the ANBU captain, that this place was littered with landmines. Lovely. Just what one should expect from an old war zone.
As she examined the area, with light footing, she figured she wouldn't need to use Reido here, as there was already ice and snow here, due to the simple fact that everything was frozen anyways. Makes things alot easier for her than making her own for the techniques... But, just in case she preformed the jutsu anyhow, just for safety.
Moxt quickly preformed the hand seals to a rather simple technique, Reinigiri, so it was easier to walk around; instead of wearing the snowshoes the rest of her team were forced to wear for the time being.
"Hey guys, I'm going to search the area, due to that tail of unknown nin we had earlier." Moxt murmured in an irritated tone, though the had completely different plans in mind.
She wanted to get a hold of one of those bombs. If they were as dangerous as she heard they were, she was going to have some trouble at this. But, if they truly were that dangerous; it would also be a great asset for kirigakure to have, and for herself to document.
For now, Moxt continuously watched where she stepped, until, halfway onto the icy wastes, she seen a tremendous change of shade of the ice ahead of her.
'This must be one of the landmines...' Moxt mused, as she continued her brainwork to figure out how to approach to unearthing the bomb completely in tact.
Moxt sighed for the moment. She was good with medical maneuvers where to had to remove an object from a body, dangerous or not.. it couldn't really be applied to other situations, because, well, it was hiton skills. Now, maybe if she tried to carve an outer ring, maybe, just maybe, she could pull it out.
If not.. Well.. Boom. Bye-bye Moxy.
So, with this, she backed off from the landmine quite a bit; so she was a safe distance. Moxt figured that if she tried to put on her frozen armor, would be completely useless if the bomb went off... Fire is always fire after all. That ice would disperse as soon as the fire hit contact with it, so it would be better if she created some sort of wall instead. She contemplated what jutsu in her skills she should use, and only one had came to mind.
Makyou Hyoushou. The demonic ice crystal mirrors.
They don't melt as easily as the rest of her jutsu, so this would come to great use.. only if she stayed on the outside of it. Now, she had to do some prepping, first.
Moxt preformed a numerous amount of seals, and started to use koorikoku to carefully carve a large circle around the ice. For a jutsu meant to make weapons with, this was an interesting way to put to use.
Once this was done, Moxt went back to the sides of the circle, to carve two large wedges on the sides on the outer ring.
With the first of her handy work complete, she walked over to a large patch of ice, and preformed more hand seals for the use of Touketsu Ijin. With this, a rather large demon like creature rose up from the ice, and growled menacingly at Moxt, and was preparing to attack the next living thing in sight.
"Woah, WOAH boy! Take it easy, there is no enemies around." Moxt assured, as the creature grunted irritably, as she gently stepped along the ice, while guiding the elemental over to the circle of cut ice. "I need you to pick this up." She explained, as she preformed her last set of hand seals to create the 21 mirrors around the demon, and the circle that held the landmine.
As Moxt hid behind the mirrors, she would quickly switch from one mirror to another to keep an eye on the progress of the elemental.
"WOAH! slow down, you gotta be careful with this." Moxt hissed, as the demon carefully pulled the chunk of ice, which would crack farther below the mine due to the wedges taken out of the sides.
This, was taking quite a bit of time, Moxt figured, as she instructed the elemental to place it upside down, as gently as possible, or the chunk of ice holding the landmine would explode, along with the elemental. Moxt, herself, did not want that, simply due to the amount of chakra she had already spent on trying to remove the landmine it would not be worth to lose the mine now.
The elemental placed the ice upside down, and.....
Boom.
Moxt quickly backed off from the mirror and shielded herself, as the mirrors protected her from the explosion and the debris; until the smoke cleared. Why didn't she realize earlier that the pressure from the weight of the ice left from the cracking would be plenty of weight for an activation of the actual bomb.
Well, wasn't this a waste of time.
Moxt eventually deactivated the mirrors, so she could examine the debris. She took a few of the remaining samples of the bomb, for later testing. It wasn't as good as the full bomb itself, but it could leave some clues in creating one just as dangerous.
With this done, Moxt slouched and started to walk back to the camp where the rest of her team was.
The next time she would get here, she planned to get one of those bombs out of the ground, in tact.
Techniques used:
From Bloodline:
Reido [Freezing Point] Description: The very foundation upon which all of Yukigakures Ninjutsu is based upon. By using chakra to manipulate water, a Snow-nin is able to freeze an available water source which can then be used for Ice or Snow based Ninjutsu. Snow ninja are able to use this ability to freeze moisture found within the enviroment in order to create ice in any situation as long as moisture is present. This jutsu is required for the rest of the techniques in this tree.
(( Honestly I gotta ask, since I'm slightly confused on that part. What about times there's already snow and ice in the area? Would you still need to cast it, even though the hyoton user is already in a zone where there's tonne of snow and ice already? ))
Reinigiri [Zero Grip] Description: A jutsu that is the most well known jutsu in all of Yukigakure and Hidden Snow itself. By forcing chakra onto the their feet, the shinobi is able to walk atop of snow with ease and move around on Ice with no problem whatsoever. This jutsu is mandatory for most shinobi as it allows them to be a master of their element and environment.
Koorikoku [Ice Carving] Description: Forcing chakra into ice the user is able to carve the ice into any item they can think of making. The only restriction of this jutsu is that they must have an equal amount of ice in order to carve out the item/weapon they wish to create.
Makyou Hyoushou (Demonic Ice Crystal Mirrors) Description: The user can create a dome of twenty-one mirrors made out of ice to trap an opponent. Twelve remain at ground level, eight are placed above the first twelve and angled toward the ground, and the final mirror is above the rest and facing the ground. The user can then enter one of the mirrors and instantly transport to another mirror. If the mirror the user is in is broken, he can leap out of one of the fragments and continue his attack or move to another mirror. The mirrors are able to resist fire techniques almost completely. For every turn that the mirrors are used, The chakra cost is equal to one jounin level jutsu.
Touketsu Ijin [Frozen Devil] Description: A jutsu that requires a moderate amount of chakra and is a variation on a bunshin technique. By forcing chakra into ice, a large demon comparable to the size of a large Snake summon [The snakes which attacked Narutos team in the forest of death] emerges forth from the element of choice. This large demon is very intimidating looking and is a very hard foe to defeat, only succumbing to Jounin level techniques. When defeated the large devil will explode with the force of an exploding tag while sending shards of sharp ice in all directions as it leaves this mortal coil.
Hopefully this is a bit better than the last one.
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Posted: Mon Jan 21, 2013 11:55 am
Rpc Name: Kira Katonami (Currently going through Acceptance Process) Village: Konoha Rank: Genin Bloodline or Clan applied for: Nara Clan What you know about the clan/bl: Nara clan members are, pretty much, the master of the Shadows. Kageton (Shadow release) is used for ALL of their jutsu and, should one be stuck in their shadow, they are nearly helpless to the Nara's will until they can either break out of it or be broken out. They also are very intelligent, being some of the smartest Shinobi of the Ninja World. They also love to tend to deer. Rp Sample:
Another boring day. There had been boring days, this was a boring day, and boring days were sure to come. Kira was walking around the streets of her village, as usual, when she came upon a group of three shinobi attempting to rob a Romen shop. HER Romen Shop! With a smirk, Kira would walk in, the setting sun casting long shadows as she leaned against a support pole with her hands in her pockets and one leg behind another as she stood. "Well, this certainly isn't something you see every day." Before she even had a chance to utter a single word more, two of the Shinobi turned, the other still looting the store. Sure, Kira was hurt that they didn't think she was good enough to have all of them fight her at once, not that it mattered really, but she would put them in her place soon enough.
As the first man stepped forwards, a kunai was imbedded into the wooden support beam Kira had been leaning against. That was to close, she needed to be careful. Instantly, her hands came together, and her shadows set to work. As both of them charged her, daggers raised a whisper would escape her Kage Nui no Jutsu A black, shadow tendril would then puncture both of them through the side like a needle, leaving a quite substantial wound in their sides. Kage Nui no Jutsu [ Shadow Sewing Technique ] With them firmly stuck together, and dying slowly, she would rip the tentacle out of them, their screams of pain filling her ears. Kira then turned to the third party, who was now turning to finally pay her attention. But, it was to late. As Kira's tentacles raged up, she looked quite menacing. Two Kunai were charged with chakra and thrown at the man. Kagemane Shuriken no Jutsu! she would roar. One of the daggers was dodged, and one barely skimmed the opponent's cheek and he laughed. This, of course, was all to plan for the one dodge Kunai landed in her opponent's shadow, and they were stuck together. Then it was Kira's turn to smirk. Kagemane Shuriken no Jutsu [ Shadow Imitation Shuriken Technique ] Finally, in one swift movement, Kira walked up to the man, and the man up to her in turn. Smirking, as they were now right in front of eachother, Kira would look at him with a deadly gaze and utter only one name. "Kage Kubi Shibari no Jutsu" she would whisper menacingly. At that, one of the shadows elongates and wrapped around the throat of the third robber who was stuck, his eye widening in horror. In no time at all, his neck was swollen, his face blue as he had been suffocated. Kage Kubi Shibari no Jutsu [ Shadow Neck Bind Technique ]
As Kira allowed the limp body to finally fall to the ground, she turned her attention back to the whimpering two that had been mortally wounded by the puncturing of her shadow. Kira turned away from them and cracked her neck as she said a last jutsu in a casual voice. "Kage Nui no jutsu." The wounded men were helpless and soon, sloshing and screaming came from behind her as her tendrils of shadows pierce the men into a bloody pulp over and over again. Kage Nui no Jutsu [ Shadow Sewing Technique ]
Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2013 3:18 am
[I need to stop doing this...]
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Posted: Thu Jan 31, 2013 8:40 pm
@Other crew members: This isn't my job, guys. One of you is free to look at these at any time.
@Keishi: Most of the jutsu usage was correctly done, but the mere fact that you have to ask when to use Reido is the largest indicator that you do not understand this bloodline. This fact, combined with the still present (though fewer) grammatical errors, and the lack of declaring jutsu as demanded within RP, leads me to have to deny this.
Now that I've seen the frozen devil in action, I think that will have to be removed. Jutsu other than summoning cannot create and command living creatures. However, since it existed while this application was written, it did not effect the judgment, and its use was treated as valid. You may even use it in a future app as long as the jutsu exists, but please be aware that that jutsu will probably be removed.
@Wolf: You used a lot of offensive jutsu, but you still seem to overestimate how fast you can use your techniques. Still, this is a sample, not an actual RP fight, and you did leave the opponents some time to react between each post. In addition, each technique was used correctly. I will approve this.
@Funk: Please do not post in this thread unless you have an application to submit.
Posted: Fri Feb 15, 2013 9:29 am
Rpc Name: Jethro Senju Village: mist Rank: genin Bloodline or Clan applied for: Mokuton What you know about the clan/bl: is the wood release jutus which is the constant combination of water and earth to create wood. the wood can be created anywhere. as well the user of the this bloodline can create from his/her own body the wood that they use. They are the Senju clan, hailing from Konoha. The only member of the senju who was able to use the wood release was actually hashirama the first Hokage. The clan itself was said to be masters of all forms of fighting and were given the name "the clan with a thousand skills" Thus the Senju clan.
The wood release abilities of Hashirama gave him the ability to control the tailed beasts. Rp Sample: ((It's not my best work, but i don't like samples, i like responding to actual fights. but oh well here ya go.)) Jethro walked out onto the top of the tree-house and looked over thru the forest. He noted that it seemed unusually quiet, the birds weren't chirping like normal, all he could hear was a small amount of rustling from the nearby river. No something was very much up. Jethro jumped onto a nearby tree and forming a quick few hand signs he created two wood clones from the tree. They both in different directions. He'd tracked the enemy into this forest, and even tho it was his realm of power. He still lost them. He headed in the direction the other two didn't go to. About ten minutes down the direction he was heading in, one of his clones found one of the three men he was after, and then confirmed that the men had split up to make it harder on him following them. However they didn't know what they were in for.
The wood clone of jethro came in quietly behind the man he was tracking. He preformed a seal and sharp branch's of wood sprouted from his back. as he was following him, he grabbed a branch and went to throw the branch at the man, however he stepped on a piece dead tree branch that started to break off and made a loud noise. "Wood Release: Cutting Technique." He said throwing the branch at him while having to recover from the fall, The branch missed because the ninja was alerted thru the noise from earlier and jumped below the trees. Jethro took advantage of this and jumped above him then preforming "Smothering Bind Technique" He extended tendrils of wood from his arms and grabbed hold of the man while tackling him to the ground. He constricted the man with the bind as he stood up, the man struggled but there was no getting out of this bind. He then finished the man off with a sharp piece of branch.
Meanwhile the real Jethro had nearly caught up to the main man of the group when his other clone dispersed, reporting that the third man had missed a branch and knocked himself unconscious, making it easy to take him out. Jethro hearing his clones success motivated him to move in quickly, however this cost him. Jethro didn't notice the tag on the branch until he was about to step on it. The ninja had messed up the timing and gave Jethro enough time to create a wood armor for his lower half and jump, but the impact pushed him forward, knocking into the man, they both fell to the ground.
It took a moment but both of them got up quick, the man threw a few kunai at Jethro, but acting quick jethro knowing it was better to defend first used Moku Shouheki no Jutsu [Wood Release: Wood Barrier Skill] and created a barrier the moment he'd gotten up and blocked the kunai, and following up with Take Yaiba Joushou no Jutsu [Wood Release: Bamboo Blade Rising Skill] Jethro infused his chakra into the ground and sent spikes up impaling the man. He then got up and walked over to make sure he was finished. Jethro was breathing heavily and suffering a bit of chakra loss from his actions, he would have to walk some of the way back to recover his chakra.
Please don't post incomplete applications. It takes time the crew could better spend elsewhere checking over them only to see they aren't finished, and clogs the thread so we can't see the complete ones as easily. If you can't save your application on your own computer, use the vault subforum. That's what it's there for.
i dont mean to be a pain, but was wondering if anyone has looked at my application.... i dont like to make my profile til have the elements i need to create a really good character...
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