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PostPosted: Thu Aug 30, 2012 10:22 pm


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(I am re-posting this because it has not been approved yet. It was originally posted on Thu Jul 12, 2012 4:04 pm.)

Username: iKaze Arashi
RPC Name: Sora Ushio // Aku no Sora

RPC Rank: Genin
Bloodline/Clan/Demon: Ushio

Profession: Teaching Master
Ninja Types: Chakra Control | Combo User


Talent Description: Pure Ushio - It is said when a Ushio has dedicated their lives to the bloodline, they can truly flourish and dwell further into the infinite Well Of Knowledge at earlier stages in their life, being a Genin with Chuunin knowledge of the Well, Chuunin with Jounin knowledge of the Well, etc. This has never been more true or real for Sora Ushio as he has done just that, gone further into the Well and having full usage of the clan's techniques as a rank above him at that level of strength.

Talent Sacrifice: Sora Ushio // Aku no Sora has chosen not to use jutsu/techniques outside water-element ninjutsu and genjutsu and his clan's techniques. This leaves out, foreign Taijutsu Styles, Universal Jutsu and Universal Genjutsu (besides the basic things, Water Walk, Tree Climb, etc.) including learning other jutsu for any other elements he would get at later ranks.

In exchange, he can use the clan techniques and access them as if he was Chuunin. This also put him at the Chuunin stage of the Ushio clan while being at Genin rank, and his growth would be like that as well. Although,this talent doesn't effect the fact that you still indeed have to learn under the Ushio head. So anything that would be somehow learned without it being under his tutelage, will still be considered at 3/4ths the power it would be at should you have learned it under the clan head.

How it happened: Sora has never had particular interest in learning jutsu outside of the Ushio clan's own techniques and teachings excluding Suiton jutsu. As a Ushio male, he has been told to train in many different aspects of jutsu to defeat the other children who want to train under the head. But Sora ignored these warnings and displayed quite a unique ability -- he fought as if he was operating as a Ushio Chuunin. He quickly became a threat to the rest of the Genin. His thoughts and actions were too quick for others to follow or even keep up with, as they were operating as Ushio Genin. He was labeled as a "Pure Ushio" by a few others because of his quick advancement while being a Genin in the Chuunin stage of the Ushio clan's Well Of Knowledge. This talent has stuck with Sora, and will stick with him, as long as he continues to only rely on his bloodline's traits.
PostPosted: Mon Oct 22, 2012 3:13 pm


Username: Super Kami Tenchi
RPC Name: Hashi Ryouken

RPC Rank: Genin
Bloodline/Clan/Demon: N/A

Profession: Weapon Master
Ninja Types: Tactical / Speed

Talent Description: Wolfblood: Hasaki Ryouken is an oddity. Through his own skill and pride, he uses the styles he created on his own, and only those. Custom styles he created, those techniques are one rank stronger and cost one rank less to use if complex. Taijutsus can be performed with weapons as well. By spending an equal amount of chakra, he can defend himself against ninjutsu. using the Chakra Blade technique. (C-ranked chakra against C-ranked ninjutsu).

For aesthetic, when someone who can sense chakra and look at Hasaki, they only see a silver color coming from Hasaki's eyes.

Talent Sacrifice: Hasaki was born with a weak body in the aspect that he cannot properly control chakra. He cannot use any form of jutsu that requires chakra to use. This means that the only chakra he can expel is through complex techniques. This means no ninjutsu that aren't passive and no genjutsu. This does not apply to the Chakra Blade. In addition, because of his pride, he cannot use styles he did not create.

(( Basically, any technique he uses from a custom tai or buki style is one rank stronger and costs one less rank to use if complex. He can mix weapons into his tai styles, and he can expel equal chakra to defend against ninjutsu. He however cannot use any form of chakra outside of complex techniques and the Chakra Blade, which means no-non passive ninjutsu or genjutsu. He also cannot use any style he did not create. ))

How it happened: Masaki has a unique body. It cannot properly utilize ninjutsu or genjutsu. He has, however, found how to use chakra to enhance his close quarters combat. He has also become self-reliant, and has become prideful in his own work, as he refuses to rely on anyone to better himself.

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PostPosted: Fri Oct 26, 2012 10:08 pm


**Thought I give this new talent thing a try. Hope its not too bad...more concerned if I balanced it out alright or not...><

Username: White Water Lilly
RPC Name: Miyaki, Shizuna

RPC Rank: Genin
Bloodline/Clan/Demon: Ink Artistry

Profession: Sealing Master
Ninja Types: Support / Combo

Talent Description:
Artistic Soul: Shizuna breaths and lives art and with it, comes a passion and dedication like no other. Skilled mostly in the ways of strokes and paint, Shizuna is able to draw symbols, characters, pictures, etc. much faster than the average person [Speed becomes one rank higher when drawing seals/pictures/characters with liquid - ink, blood, etc.]. Having a natural talent for art, Shizuna is able to learn Ink Artistry techniques (canon/customs) and sealing techs [1] post less. This stacks with any other learning bonuses Shizuna may have. More focused when it comes to art, Shizuna gains the innate ability to channel her chakra better when it involves art. [2] chakra point deduction when it comes to performing Ink Artistry techniques (canon/customs) and sealing techs.

Talent Sacrifice: In return for her focus and dedication to art, Shizuna is only capable of learning [1] taijutsu/weapon style which she will never be unable to master. Each skill will require an additional [2] post to learn and this learning modifier stacks with any other tai-/weapon tech debuff Shizuna already has. Should a technique of her chosen tai-/weapon style require a chakra cost, Shizuna's talent will be reversed so instead of a [2] chakra point deduction, it will cost her [2] additional chakra points to perform.

How it happened: A world of art, that's all Shizuna has every known since birth and thus art has pretty much integrated into her very soul. Though she was forced to relentlessly learn and embrace various forms of art by members of her family, Shizuna still ended up developing a love for it and with this growing love, became more attune with the workings of art. By only having been kept indoors to study art, Shizuna was not and is still not an active child; making it difficult for her to perform even mediocore physical activities.
 
PostPosted: Sat Oct 27, 2012 7:36 am


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Username: Super Kami Tenchi
RPC Name: Hashi Ryouken

RPC Rank: Genin
Bloodline/Clan/Demon: N/A

Profession: Weapon Master
Ninja Types: Tactical / Speed

Talent Description: Wolfblood: Hasaki Ryouken is an oddity. Through his own skill and pride, he uses the styles he created on his own, and only those. Custom styles he created, those techniques are one rank stronger and cost one rank less to use if complex. Taijutsus can be performed with weapons as well. By spending an equal amount of chakra, he can defend himself against ninjutsu. using the Chakra Blade technique. (C-ranked chakra against C-ranked ninjutsu).

For aesthetic, when someone who can sense chakra and look at Hasaki, they only see a silver color coming from Hasaki's eyes.

Talent Sacrifice: Hasaki was born with a weak body in the aspect that he cannot properly control chakra. He cannot use any form of jutsu that requires chakra to use. This means that the only chakra he can expel is through complex techniques. This means no ninjutsu that aren't passive and no genjutsu. This does not apply to the Chakra Blade. In addition, because of his pride, he cannot use styles he did not create.

(( Basically, any technique he uses from a custom tai or buki style is one rank stronger and costs one less rank to use if complex. He can mix weapons into his tai styles, and he can expel equal chakra to defend against ninjutsu. He however cannot use any form of chakra outside of complex techniques and the Chakra Blade, which means no-non passive ninjutsu or genjutsu. He also cannot use any style he did not create. ))

How it happened: Masaki has a unique body. It cannot properly utilize ninjutsu or genjutsu. He has, however, found how to use chakra to enhance his close quarters combat. He has also become self-reliant, and has become prideful in his own work, as he refuses to rely on anyone to better himself.


What is the chakra blade? Is it an actual technique, or a custom restricted to this talent? If it's just for this talent, I'd have to deny it since it doesn't fit the talent. (Increased taijutsu skill + Basic immunity to ninjutsu doesn't work.)

I can't allow the chakra aesthetic, since that makes you basically immune to Byakugan tracking and completely immune to Sharingan copying and tracking. If you want the eyeball aesthetic, you can just say in your character's distinguishing traits (Or however it's worded...) that you have an unusual concentration of chakra in the eyes creating that effect. Hiding your entire system however, is not allowable.

No chakra use for jutsu, but chakra use for "Complex techniques"? I assume you mean you can use chakra based taijutsu, but complex technique is basically the description of ninjutsu. Please clarify that to show that it's for taijutsu. And again, no on the chakra blade. if it has to be an exception to your own weakness to work, it doesn't work.

Are you certain you want to restrict yourself to only personal custom styles? There is a VERY high likelihood of your customs just sitting for a long time in that area, since it's a low traffic area that most of the crew don't seem to hold much interest in. Creating entire custom styles is also very expensive, so you'll likely want to create any techniques as individual techniques and compile them into a style later rather than now, since you wouldn't be able to purchase your own style. (I'll probably alter the currency system so that style pricing reflects the number of techniques in a style rather than a set style price later... Seems like a good idea.)

Also in this case, you should add that you can create custom taijutsu/weapon techniques at genin, since that is normally restricted to chuunin and up.  

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 27, 2012 7:44 am


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**Thought I give this new talent thing a try. Hope its not too bad...more concerned if I balanced it out alright or not...><

Username: White Water Lilly
RPC Name: Miyaki, Shizuna

RPC Rank: Genin
Bloodline/Clan/Demon: Ink Artistry

Profession: Sealing Master
Ninja Types: Support / Combo

Talent Description:
Artistic Soul: Shizuna breaths and lives art and with it, comes a passion and dedication like no other. Skilled mostly in the ways of strokes and paint, Shizuna is able to draw symbols, characters, pictures, etc. much faster than the average person [Speed becomes one rank higher when drawing seals/pictures/characters with liquid - ink, blood, etc.]. Having a natural talent for art, Shizuna is able to learn Ink Artistry techniques (canon/customs) and sealing techs [1] post less. This stacks with any other learning bonuses Shizuna may have. More focused when it comes to art, Shizuna gains the innate ability to channel her chakra better when it involves art. [2] chakra point deduction when it comes to performing Ink Artistry techniques (canon/customs) and sealing techs.

Talent Sacrifice: In return for her focus and dedication to art, Shizuna is only capable of learning [1] taijutsu/weapon style which she will never be unable to master. Each skill will require an additional [2] post to learn and this learning modifier stacks with any other tai-/weapon tech debuff Shizuna already has. Should a technique of her chosen tai-/weapon style require a chakra cost, Shizuna's talent will be reversed so instead of a [2] chakra point deduction, it will cost her [2] additional chakra points to perform.

How it happened: A world of art, that's all Shizuna has every known since birth and thus art has pretty much integrated into her very soul. Though she was forced to relentlessly learn and embrace various forms of art by members of her family, Shizuna still ended up developing a love for it and with this growing love, became more attune with the workings of art. By only having been kept indoors to study art, Shizuna was not and is still not an active child; making it difficult for her to perform even mediocore physical activities.


What is the purpose of a drawing speed increase? Or is that an increase to all speed while drawing? (The latter I would have to deny by the way, since it makes the opposite of sense.)

Sealing chakra costs cannot be reduced. The prices set within that system are locked. Less and a seal won't work.

"style which she will never be unable to master." Double negative. What is the maximum rank you can learn of your chosen style?

And with the chosen weakness, I also have to ask that you change your profession weakness to weak bodied, since taking less taijutsu styles as a weakness and then using it here as well is a bit of a cheat.

(Support/Combo is an amazing type set for sealing masters. For anything really, but especially sealing masters. XD
My own uses that set as well.)
 
PostPosted: Sat Oct 27, 2012 9:20 am


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**Thought I give this new talent thing a try. Hope its not too bad...more concerned if I balanced it out alright or not...><

Username: White Water Lilly
RPC Name: Miyaki, Shizuna

RPC Rank: Genin
Bloodline/Clan/Demon: Ink Artistry

Profession: Sealing Master
Ninja Types: Support / Combo

Talent Description:
Artistic Soul: Shizuna breaths and lives art and with it, comes a passion and dedication like no other. Skilled mostly in the ways of strokes and paint, Shizuna is able to draw symbols, characters, pictures, etc. much faster than the average person [Speed becomes one rank higher when drawing seals/pictures/characters with liquid - ink, blood, etc.]. Having a natural talent for art, Shizuna is able to learn Ink Artistry techniques (canon/customs) and sealing techs [1] post less. This stacks with any other learning bonuses Shizuna may have. More focused when it comes to art, Shizuna gains the innate ability to channel her chakra better when it involves art. [2] chakra point deduction when it comes to performing Ink Artistry techniques (canon/customs) and sealing techs.

Talent Sacrifice: In return for her focus and dedication to art, Shizuna is only capable of learning [1] taijutsu/weapon style which she will never be unable to master. Each skill will require an additional [2] post to learn and this learning modifier stacks with any other tai-/weapon tech debuff Shizuna already has. Should a technique of her chosen tai-/weapon style require a chakra cost, Shizuna's talent will be reversed so instead of a [2] chakra point deduction, it will cost her [2] additional chakra points to perform.

How it happened: A world of art, that's all Shizuna has every known since birth and thus art has pretty much integrated into her very soul. Though she was forced to relentlessly learn and embrace various forms of art by members of her family, Shizuna still ended up developing a love for it and with this growing love, became more attune with the workings of art. By only having been kept indoors to study art, Shizuna was not and is still not an active child; making it difficult for her to perform even mediocore physical activities.


What is the purpose of a drawing speed increase? Or is that an increase to all speed while drawing? (The latter I would have to deny by the way, since it makes the opposite of sense.)

Sealing chakra costs cannot be reduced. The prices set within that system are locked. Less and a seal won't work.

"style which she will never be unable to master." Double negative. What is the maximum rank you can learn of your chosen style?

And with the chosen weakness, I also have to ask that you change your profession weakness to weak bodied, since taking less taijutsu styles as a weakness and then using it here as well is a bit of a cheat.

(Support/Combo is an amazing type set for sealing masters. For anything really, but especially sealing masters. XD
My own uses that set as well.)

Hey Hinote! Thanks for getting back to me so quickly.

1. Drawing Speed Increase - I was more thinking of it terms of battle should she need to whip up a drawing or seal on the spot. Though she's combo and can perform two actions/jutsus in a post they could still be easily countered by someone of faster speed than her. I just thought it would make more sense if she's able to draw fast and then right away apply chakra to it to perform her technique (which I believe would make up one post in battle terms)

2. Sealing Costs - Alright. Can I still have a cost deduction for her clan techniques then? or do you think I should just write this part off completely and stick with the stacking learning deduction?

3. Style Mastery - My bad with the wording. Thinking of it like she's only able to learn up to what most can learn up to for their secondary style like one rank below her so A rank? But I can make it B rank if it seems more fair.

4. Weakness - Ah...I was hoping to just stick to taijutsu deductions if I could but that's fine. I'll change it on her profile to "weak bodied"; make sense though for her character, just tried to avoid it... XP


((I thought so too. Makes them more efficient sealers in my mind. ^^
I've noticed. The thought going through my mind when I choose this was...'Hope Hinote doesn't think I'm copying him...' XP))

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 27, 2012 10:36 am


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**Thought I give this new talent thing a try. Hope its not too bad...more concerned if I balanced it out alright or not...><

Username: White Water Lilly
RPC Name: Miyaki, Shizuna

RPC Rank: Genin
Bloodline/Clan/Demon: Ink Artistry

Profession: Sealing Master
Ninja Types: Support / Combo

Talent Description:
Artistic Soul: Shizuna breaths and lives art and with it, comes a passion and dedication like no other. Skilled mostly in the ways of strokes and paint, Shizuna is able to draw symbols, characters, pictures, etc. much faster than the average person [Speed becomes one rank higher when drawing seals/pictures/characters with liquid - ink, blood, etc.]. Having a natural talent for art, Shizuna is able to learn Ink Artistry techniques (canon/customs) and sealing techs [1] post less. This stacks with any other learning bonuses Shizuna may have. More focused when it comes to art, Shizuna gains the innate ability to channel her chakra better when it involves art. [2] chakra point deduction when it comes to performing Ink Artistry techniques (canon/customs) and sealing techs.

Talent Sacrifice: In return for her focus and dedication to art, Shizuna is only capable of learning [1] taijutsu/weapon style which she will never be unable to master. Each skill will require an additional [2] post to learn and this learning modifier stacks with any other tai-/weapon tech debuff Shizuna already has. Should a technique of her chosen tai-/weapon style require a chakra cost, Shizuna's talent will be reversed so instead of a [2] chakra point deduction, it will cost her [2] additional chakra points to perform.

How it happened: A world of art, that's all Shizuna has every known since birth and thus art has pretty much integrated into her very soul. Though she was forced to relentlessly learn and embrace various forms of art by members of her family, Shizuna still ended up developing a love for it and with this growing love, became more attune with the workings of art. By only having been kept indoors to study art, Shizuna was not and is still not an active child; making it difficult for her to perform even mediocore physical activities.


What is the purpose of a drawing speed increase? Or is that an increase to all speed while drawing? (The latter I would have to deny by the way, since it makes the opposite of sense.)

Sealing chakra costs cannot be reduced. The prices set within that system are locked. Less and a seal won't work.

"style which she will never be unable to master." Double negative. What is the maximum rank you can learn of your chosen style?

And with the chosen weakness, I also have to ask that you change your profession weakness to weak bodied, since taking less taijutsu styles as a weakness and then using it here as well is a bit of a cheat.

(Support/Combo is an amazing type set for sealing masters. For anything really, but especially sealing masters. XD
My own uses that set as well.)

Hey Hinote! Thanks for getting back to me so quickly.

1. Drawing Speed Increase - I was more thinking of it terms of battle should she need to whip up a drawing or seal on the spot. Though she's combo and can perform two actions/jutsus in a post they could still be easily countered by someone of faster speed than her. I just thought it would make more sense if she's able to draw fast and then right away apply chakra to it to perform her technique (which I believe would make up one post in battle terms)

2. Sealing Costs - Alright. Can I still have a cost deduction for her clan techniques then? or do you think I should just write this part off completely and stick with the stacking learning deduction?

3. Style Mastery - My bad with the wording. Thinking of it like she's only able to learn up to what most can learn up to for their secondary style like one rank below her so A rank? But I can make it B rank if it seems more fair.

4. Weakness - Ah...I was hoping to just stick to taijutsu deductions if I could but that's fine. I'll change it on her profile to "weak bodied"; make sense though for her character, just tried to avoid it... XP


((I thought so too. Makes them more efficient sealers in my mind. ^^
I've noticed. The thought going through my mind when I choose this was...'Hope Hinote doesn't think I'm copying him...' XP))


1. Makes sense. I was just checking that it wasn't a way of faking combo type through speed or something.

2. You can keep the bloodline benefit. Just the sealing doesn't work.

3. A rank seems fine. Just make it a bit clearer. Even just copying the bit from less taijutsu will work.

(I can't copyright a type set, much as I'd like to. =p)
PostPosted: Sat Oct 27, 2012 10:48 am


**Round two! ^^
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Username: White Water Lilly
RPC Name: Miyake, Shizuna

RPC Rank: Jounin
Bloodline/Clan/Demon: Ink Artistry - Pending

Profession: Sealing Master
Ninja Types: Support / Combo

Talent Description:
Artistic Soul: Shizuna breaths and lives art and with it, comes a passion and dedication like no other. Skilled mostly in the ways of strokes and paint, Shizuna is able to draw symbols, characters, pictures, etc. much faster than the average person [Speed becomes one rank higher when drawing seals/pictures/characters with liquid - ink, blood, etc.; this does not actually increase the speed of her entire being, just her brushstrokes]. Having a natural talent for art, Shizuna is able to learn Ink Artistry techniques (canon/customs) and sealing techs [1] post less. This stacks with any other learning bonuses Shizuna may have. More focused when it comes to art, Shizuna gains the innate ability to channel her chakra better when it involves art. [2] chakra point deduction when it comes to performing Ink Artistry techniques (canon/customs).

Talent Sacrifice: In return for her focus and dedication to art, Shizuna is only capable of learning [1] taijutsu/weapon style which she will only ever be able to master up to A rank. Each skill will require an additional [2] post to learn and this learning modifier stacks with any other tai-/weapon tech debuff Shizuna already has. Should a technique of her chosen tai-/weapon style require a chakra cost, Shizuna's talent will be reversed so instead of a [2] chakra point deduction, it will cost her [2] additional chakra points to perform.

How it happened: A world of art, that's all Shizuna has every known since birth and thus art has pretty much integrated into her very soul. Though she was forced to relentlessly learn and embrace various forms of art by members of her family, Shizuna still ended up developing a love for it and with this growing love, became more attune with the workings of art. By only having been kept indoors to study art, Shizuna was not and is still not an active child; making it difficult for her to perform even mediocre physical activities.
 

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 27, 2012 11:54 am


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For the aesthetic: They still see the chakra flow, but the 'aura' that people give off, there would be none. I thought it would be more appropriate since he's not using ninjutsu or genjutsu.

The Chakra Blade: For some reason, I put that in here. It's a complex tech for the custom Buki style that I'm working on. Ignore that sweatdrop

For being able to use chakra for complex techs and not jutsu, it's because his body won't allow him to complete chakra circuits, but he has learned to channel chakra into weapons and limbs. But I do see how I can change things up a bit

For the customs, The point was to make everything about his Buki and Tai styles stronger, so I figured that was a good counter-balance. I also had no idea a currency system was implemented for customs.... sweatdrop It's been a while.

So for the alteration: Masaki can learn Tai and Buki techs two posts quicker and are rank stronger, but he cannot use Genjutsu, and Ninjutsu are one rank weaker and take one post more to learn. He can also use weapons in taijutsu styles.
PostPosted: Thu Nov 01, 2012 9:07 pm


Username: A faint smile
RPC Name: Kaeru Shindō

RPC Rank: Genin
Bloodline/Clan/Demon: Otosan

Profession: Assassin
Ninja Types: Chakra Control

Talent Description: Kaeru would be able to pick things off of people's body and they would not notice until they reached for whatever it was. This obviously wouldn't work for things like taking shirts off, but he'd be able to lift coin purses, scrolls, weaponry, etc.

Talent Sacrifice: I don't think this is as much a sacrifice so much as it is a limit. That skill can only be used when the target is not expecting it.

How it happened: Kaeru has always been a crafty person, and has tried to perfect his stealthy skills. Over the years he's gotten so good at it that its like second nature.

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 01, 2012 9:33 pm


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Username: A faint smile
RPC Name: Kaeru Shindō

RPC Rank: Genin
Bloodline/Clan/Demon: Otosan

Profession: Assassin
Ninja Types: Chakra Control

Talent Description: Kaeru would be able to pick things off of people's body and they would not notice until they reached for whatever it was. This obviously wouldn't work for things like taking shirts off, but he'd be able to lift coin purses, scrolls, weaponry, etc.

Talent Sacrifice: I don't think this is as much a sacrifice so much as it is a limit. That skill can only be used when the target is not expecting it.

How it happened: Kaeru has always been a crafty person, and has tried to perfect his stealthy skills. Over the years he's gotten so good at it that its like second nature.


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Much as I like the idea of an assassin pickpocket (I worked it into my own's background for goodness sake!), this talent gives you the ability to basically steal anything you want (That isn't of course blatantly obvious.) off of another RPC whenever you like, which would be very much wrong to allow. You can certainly attempt this in the RP, but I can't allow it as an inherent talent, thus preventing your target from being allowed to react.

And while it doesn't matter much since it's denied anyways, the sacrifice is definitely insufficient. It's an obvious flaw in the very nature of the act, so really doesn't even count as a limitation.  
PostPosted: Thu Nov 01, 2012 9:36 pm



Alright then, thanks. I figured the sacrifice was weak but I couldn't think of anything that really made sense. There was nothing that came to mind when I thought of what would have weakened as I became a pick pocket xP

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 02, 2012 11:16 am


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((Redid the talent to better fit Hasaki. The other one was.... more style-based and not character based.))

Username: Super Kami Tenchi
RPC Name: Hasaki Ryouken

RPC Rank: Genin
Bloodline/Clan/Demon: N/A

Profession: Weapon Master
Ninja Types: Tactical / Speed

Talent Description: Master-at-Arms: Hasaki Ryouken is an oddity. Through his own skill and pride, he has been able to mix taijutsu and bukijutsu. Taijutsu techniques he uses can be adapted to weapon play. His knowledge of melee combat also allows him to craft and use custom taijutsu and custom bukijutsu styles at Gennin rank, and he can learn stages of bukijutsu and taijutsu styles as though he was one rank higher and his tactical bonus gives two less post for learning techniques.

Talent Sacrifice: Outside of Complex Techniques in bukijutsu and taijutsu styles, Hasaki cannot mold chakra. This means no activation ninjutsu (Basically ALL ninjustu outside of water walking and tree climb) and no genjutsu can be used by him. This also cancels the beginner clone and transformation jutsus. He will never be able to use an implant, bloodline, or become a demon host. Accepting any of these will be rejected by his body, and will potentially kill him.If learning anything other than Bukijutsu, the tactical bonus from this talent is null and instead adds a post.

How it happened: Masaki has a unique body. It cannot properly utilize ninjutsu or genjutsu. He has, in counter, become an adept of combat. He has become keen in the use of weapons and physical warfare. He has pushed the limits time and time again to surpass others who believe themselves better taijutsuists or bukijutsuists.
PostPosted: Fri Nov 02, 2012 6:25 pm


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**Round two! ^^
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Username: White Water Lilly
RPC Name: Miyake, Shizuna

RPC Rank: Jounin
Bloodline/Clan/Demon: Ink Artistry - Pending

Profession: Sealing Master
Ninja Types: Support / Combo

Talent Description:
Artistic Soul: Shizuna breaths and lives art and with it, comes a passion and dedication like no other. Skilled mostly in the ways of strokes and paint, Shizuna is able to draw symbols, characters, pictures, etc. much faster than the average person [Speed becomes one rank higher when drawing seals/pictures/characters with liquid - ink, blood, etc.; this does not actually increase the speed of her entire being, just her brushstrokes]. Having a natural talent for art, Shizuna is able to learn Ink Artistry techniques (canon/customs) and sealing techs [1] post less. This stacks with any other learning bonuses Shizuna may have. More focused when it comes to art, Shizuna gains the innate ability to channel her chakra better when it involves art. [2] chakra point deduction when it comes to performing Ink Artistry techniques (canon/customs).

Talent Sacrifice: In return for her focus and dedication to art, Shizuna is only capable of learning [1] taijutsu/weapon style which she will only ever be able to master up to A rank. Each skill will require an additional [2] post to learn and this learning modifier stacks with any other tai-/weapon tech debuff Shizuna already has. Should a technique of her chosen tai-/weapon style require a chakra cost, Shizuna's talent will be reversed so instead of a [2] chakra point deduction, it will cost her [2] additional chakra points to perform.

How it happened: A world of art, that's all Shizuna has every known since birth and thus art has pretty much integrated into her very soul. Though she was forced to relentlessly learn and embrace various forms of art by members of her family, Shizuna still ended up developing a love for it and with this growing love, became more attune with the workings of art. By only having been kept indoors to study art, Shizuna was not and is still not an active child; making it difficult for her to perform even mediocre physical activities.


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Hinote Tosatsu
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 02, 2012 6:30 pm


Hinote Tosatsu

Thanks for your help! ^^
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