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Posted: Sun Jul 08, 2012 5:36 pm
Somnis The Nara are not the only clan that can use the Kageton techniques. They can be taught to members outside of the clan. It's not a bloodline, it's a family practice. They developed the techniques. The Crew for the most part wouldn't allow someone to teach Clan techniques to anyone else. That's why I say that. Somnis Your character would have been hindered far more than displayed in your sample if the upper half of his body was covered in second-degree burns. First degree, maybe, you could still have moved with. Not second. Second-degree burns are known to cause more pain and physical discomfort than third, due to the fact that third-degree burns kill the nerve endings in the flesh. My character stayed in mostly the exact same place. he barely moved. This is nearer to the end of the fight. Somnis "Shadow chakra"? No. Kageton isn't elemental. It's an ability. You would still be using normal chakra. Quote: Kage Mane Shuriken no Jutsu - Shadow Imitation Shuriken Technique Kage Mane Shuriken no Jutsu Character Use: Nara Shikamaru Rank: B Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m Type: Supplementary Note: Secret Clan Technique Kage Mane Shuriken no Jutsu Kage Mane Shuriken no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique developed by the Nara Shikamaru. Using Asuma's knives, Shikamaru can imbue his shadow chakra to create "pins" to stick his opponent in place. These knives absorb the chakra nature of the user and give off the nature's effect. In this case, the knives take on the Nara clan's shadow binding properties. By implanting the shadow chakra enhanced blade into the shadow of his target, they will be frozen in place; just as if they were caught in one of the clan members extended shadow bindings. The person I was fighting was a Konaga, so limitless chakra? Yes. Somnis You tend to be ridiculously wordy in your samples. You use the words "his body" multiple times in one sentence. It isn't necessary. Yeah, I know. I try to make my posts more fluffy and I tend to repeat myself. I'm trying to work on it. Somnis Grammar and punctuation needs work. Yeah, I don't write that well. Somnis "... before he had a chance to respond to the shadow imitation being canceled..." Wrong. Kage Mane releases instantly the moment another jutsu is cast. Yeah, but the man wasn't straining against the technique. So in essence he didn't know it was canceled. Somnis Care to explain why the opponent suddenly begins bleeding from the mouth, as you never referenced anything to do with his mouth prior to making that statement? He used the Raging Spirit, and was stabbed in several vital organs by the shadow tendrils technique, he'd most likely be bleeding internally, so the best way to show this was the all known staple of bleeding from the mouth. Somnis So, you're telling me that the opponent took a knee, and, without making a single move to restrain him, your character ceased fighting to tend to his burns, and the opponent didn't retaliate? Smart move. Quote: Kage Mane Shuriken no Jutsu - Shadow Imitation Shuriken Technique Kage Mane Shuriken no Jutsu Character Use: Nara Shikamaru Rank: B Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m Type: Supplementary Note: Secret Clan Technique Kage Mane Shuriken no Jutsu Kage Mane Shuriken no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique developed by the Nara Shikamaru. Using Asuma's knives, Shikamaru can imbue his shadow chakra to create "pins" to stick his opponent in place. These knives absorb the chakra nature of the user and give off the nature's effect. In this case, the knives take on the Nara clan's shadow binding properties. By implanting the shadow chakra enhanced blade into the shadow of his target, they will be frozen in place; just as if they were caught in one of the clan members extended shadow bindings. Somnis Again, unlikely that the opponent would just let him go about his business and brush himself off and store away the ointment, rather than attacking as a last resort. I've already answered this one, see the above. Somnis "... Tch, You can't hurt me any more..." In that whole paragraph, you never even mention what jutsu you have performed, though you say that the man is "visibly straining." That is the Konaga Raphael is fighting, and he is straining against the Shadow Imitation Shuriken Technique if you didn't realize. I'm sorry for my bad wording. Somnis Shadow Armor? So now we're just making up techniques? Absolutely not. Quote: Shadow Release - Shadow Armor (Kageton - Kage Yoroi) - A skill where the user gathering up the power of their shadow and infusing it with chakra have their shadow slowly consume their body. When the shadow fully consumes their body, it becomes a powerful armor that is resistant to physical harm. Rank - B Somnis Literally your entire last paragraph is one run-on sentence. Fix your grammar. I only see one horribly run on-y sentence. It is functional, just horribly grammatically horrendous. Somnis He lost consciousness and then tried to speak? No. Yeah, I was editing it for a while in my vault, and I kinda missed that part. That one I can't explain, and I accept full responsibility for it. Yeah, I really would like to go to the RP school, but it isn't functional right now. If I had a teacher I would be overjoyed to get better, but for now all I can do is simply attempt it on my own, and I thank you for your criticism, without it I would be prone to making the same mistakes several times over. If you deigned what I said to be offensive in any way, I'll accept an ougun for it. I was not meaning to be offensive, merely explaining things. I'm sorry if I offended you.
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Posted: Sun Jul 08, 2012 6:22 pm
Somnis The Nara are not the only clan that can use the Kageton techniques. They can be taught to members outside of the clan. It's not a bloodline, it's a family practice. They developed the techniques. TvIaMsOqTuHeYz The Crew for the most part wouldn't allow someone to teach Clan techniques to anyone else. That's why I say that. While playing a character of the Nara clan, I asked the crew at the time if it were plausible for a character not of the clan to be taught the techniques. The verdict was yes, though they stressed how difficult it would be for anyone to convince a clan member to teach the secret techniques. Somnis Your character would have been hindered far more than displayed in your sample if the upper half of his body was covered in second-degree burns. First degree, maybe, you could still have moved with. Not second. Second-degree burns are known to cause more pain and physical discomfort than third, due to the fact that third-degree burns kill the nerve endings in the flesh. TvIaMsOqTuHeYz My character stayed in mostly the exact same place. he barely moved. This is nearer to the end of the fight. You state clearly in your submission that your character "sprinted forward." Sprinting is not standing in the same place. Somnis You tend to be ridiculously wordy in your samples. You use the words "his body" multiple times in one sentence. It isn't necessary. TvIaMsOqTuHeYz Yeah, I know. I try to make my posts more fluffy and I tend to repeat myself. I'm trying to work on it. That was merely something I noticed. Me pointing it out wasn't me trying to be a jerk. I've had the same problem in the past, and I know that, if it is left unnoticed, it doesn't stop. Somnis Grammar and punctuation needs work. TvIaMsOqTuHeYz Yeah, I don't write that well. It just makes things a little harder to read. I wasn't saying that you don't write well. Overall, your sample was good. I just am nitpicking. Somnis Care to explain why the opponent suddenly begins bleeding from the mouth, as you never referenced anything to do with his mouth prior to making that statement? TvIaMsOqTuHeYz He used the Raging Spirit, and was stabbed in several vital organs by the shadow tendrils technique, he'd most likely be bleeding internally, so the best way to show this was the all known staple of bleeding from the mouth. Logical, I suppose. Though I would have made him bleed from the eyes, for added theatrics. Somnis "... Tch, You can't hurt me any more..." In that whole paragraph, you never even mention what jutsu you have performed, though you say that the man is "visibly straining." TvIaMsOqTuHeYz That is the Konaga Raphael is fighting, and he is straining against the Shadow Imitation Shuriken Technique if you didn't realize. I'm sorry for my bad wording. Not bad wording. Again, it was just reads awkwardly. Somnis He lost consciousness and then tried to speak? No. TvIaMsOqTuHeYz Yeah, I was editing it for a while in my vault, and I kinda missed that part. That one I can't explain, and I accept full responsibility for it. Just something I noticed. TvIaMsOqTuHeYz Yeah, I really would like to go to the RP school, but it isn't functional right now. If I had a teacher I would be overjoyed to get better, but for now all I can do is simply attempt it on my own, and I thank you for your criticism, without it I would be prone to making the same mistakes several times over. If you deigned what I said to be offensive in any way, I'll accept an ougun for it. I was not meaning to be offensive, merely explaining things. I'm sorry if I offended you. The RP school has been open for months. I will be your teacher, hence why I referred you. I don't give out Ouguns unless you break rules. You haven't broken any.
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Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2012 7:22 am
Rpc Name: Koga Inuzuka Village: Konohagakure Rank: Genin Bloodline or Clan applied for: Inuzuka Clan What you know about the clan/bl: The Inuzuka Clan is most famous for their combination jutsu with their canine partners. Their partners, or ninken, are given to the Clan Member as a child and thus become inseparable partners as well as friends. The Inuzuka Clan members also generally have enhanced abilities along with very distinct canine appearances. Rp Sample:
At the gates of Konoha stood Koga Inuzuka, Kyoko Saisei, and Goenji Uchiha, along with their sensei Heisuke Todou. " We finally get a mission after waiting so long!" exclaimed Koga throwing his hands up in the air. " Just make sure you don't get in the way Koga." stated Goenji. Goenji and Koga's relationship was that of an older and younger brother. Mostly because they were a year apart in age difference. Kyoko, the medic of the team was more or less like the younger sister. And of course there was Koga's ninken Inuyasha. Inuyasha seemed to be the family pet out of them all, but more or less they were all a great pair. As an Inuzuka he was perfect for a mission as this that required locating their opponent's location. " Behave you guys. We just got the mission, lets not loose it already." stated Kyoko with a light smile. It was then that their sensei arrived. " Alright, let's get going." stated Todo-sensei. Nodding in agreement they each walked out of the village gates headed towards the mercenary camp that had been stealing ninja tools on various trade routes. Their mission was simple really. Retrieve all of the tools and seal them into the scroll locked within Inuyasha's sash.
When they were about to cross the boarder into the Rice Country their sensei stopped them before speaking. " Ok listen closely. If we all go in the same entrance at the same time there is a high possibility that we'll get stopped or captured. To prevent that, I'm going to find another entrance, your mission will be to locate their entrance and wait for my signal to attack alright?" questioned Todo-sensei. Nodding in agreement they began to dash through the trees with Inuyasha leading the way judging from the scent he had picked up. However there opponents were also very skilled ninja who could use chakra suppression techniques. Kyoko the sensory ninja of the group was having a hard time looking for them, and surprisingly enough Inuyasha had lost their scent. However, that did not mean that Koga could not find them. His clan had trained his nose since he was little to surpass that of a ninja hound (Like Kiba Inuzuka). Due to this, Koga would often get a whiff of their scents before they disappeared and started up again. Unfortunately, becuase of his great nose, foul stenches left him paralyzed.
Stopping in a forest entrance Kyoko spoke. " I...I can't pick up any chakra sources...Its like...they disappeared...." stated Kyoko a bit confused. Landing on the ground after Kyoko came Koga and Goenji. " Well..they've gotta be around here somewhere....They can't have just disappeared...." said Koga sniffing around for their scents. " Yea..thank you captain obvious-.." stated Goenji before jumping high up into a tree. Unbeknown to the others that he had actually heard what sounded like enemies incoming. Turning around to find Goenji Kyoko spoke very shocked. " G-Goenji..." questioned Kyoko before a flock of the mercenary ninjas jumped out of the trees surrounding them. " Kyoko..Run!" exclaimed Koga as he turned to his teammate who was already trapped in ropes. Breaking free of their grip Koga managed to push three of the men to the side. Holding the now unconscious Kyoko he looked around for Goenji before calling Inuyasha to his side. As they tried to out run the males, a gas was released that quickly covered the entire forest. It smelled of rotten eggs and spoiled foods. Gripping his nose in pain, Koga fell to the ground rolling around trying to get the smell out of his nose. Much like Koga, Inuyasha had done the same. It was not long until he was overwhelmed by the smell and his vision began to blur. Before passing out he managed to see something that looked like Goenji retreating. "G-Goenji..." stated Koga before passing out next to Kyoko.
Waking up, Koga looked around the small cage only to see Kyoko wide awake. " Thank goodness, your awake...." said Kyoko in somewhat of a whisper. " Where...where are we..?" questioned Koga as he sat up. Taking quick note to his hands, they seemed to be chained up. " Their base.." stated Kyoko silently. Looking around Koga saw no possible way of escape. It was then that he realized his partner was gone! But Kyoko had beat him to the question with the answer as well. " Inuyasha is fine....I can sense his chakra...but we've got bigger problems.." stated Kyoko signaling at the many ninja that were approached. Luckily enough their teammate, Goenji Uchiha had busted down from the ceiling taking down the ninja that approached the cage. " Goenji!" exclaimed Kyoko in disbelief, only to be followed by Koga's yelling. " Where were you!" exclaimed Koga as Goenji melted the bars with a great fireball jutsu. " Awaiting Todo-sensei's signal like we were supposed to. He's already begun fighting." stated Goenji as he managed to melt Koga's chains.
In moments Kyoko was also free, but more ninja were approaching their cage as well. " Koga." stated Goenji looking to his teammate with a small grin. " On it!" stated Koga as he stood up. Running forwards Koga spoke before spinning in a fast motion. " Passing Fang!" exclaimed Koga as he became what looked like a mini tornado. " Fire style: Fireball Jutsu." exclaimed Goenji. The fireball jutsu from Goenji caught the back end of Koga's Passing Fang, creating a flamed passing fang. Ripping through the bunch of ninja he crashed directly through a solid wall revealing Todo-sensei fighting some of the ninja. Running behind Koga came Goenji and Kyoko. " Todo-sensei!" exclaimed Kyoko throwing a few kunai towards various ninja pinning them to the wall. However Koga did not care for this at the moment, he had a friend to save. Looking upwards, Koga had found Inuyasha's scent. " I'm coming buddy!" exclaimed Koga as he ran forwards. Busting through a small door he had found Inuyasha grabbed by collar in the hands of another ninja. " Passing Fang!!" exclaimed Koga as he shot directly into the man's chest. As the ninja cried out in pain, Koga tossed his body out of the room. Breaking Inuyasha's shackles free, he and his dog companion ran out of the room.
Unfortunately when exiting the room his commrades were beginning to become overpowered. Looking to Inuyasha Koga spoke. " Let's do it Inuyasha." stated Koga with a smile. Barking in agreement Koga ran forwards before unleashing a string of handsigns. " Inuzuka-Style Human Beast Combination Transformation: Double-Headed Wolf!!" exclaimed Koga as a large puff of smoke went out. In seconds the ground began to tremble as a large two headed ferocious wolf. As Koga and Inuyasha's paw broke the ground beneath it the many ninja began to scream in terror and run. Which allowed the rest of squad to take them down easily. Canceling the jutsu, both Koga as well as Inuyasha leapt out of the smoke landing on the ground in front of their teammates. Unfortunately, once in front of their teammates, Koga fell to a knee. Using that technique usually drained most of his energy, and he'd need a minute to rest. When he had gathered enough strength to move around once more he rejoined his friends over the large amount of weapons. Their sensei had already gone to work with the scroll in his hands.
"Alright then, I've got the weapons sealed in the scroll, let's head back." stated Todo-sensei. Nodding in agreement they each made their way quite quickly back to Konoha. " Alright! Goenji, since you let us get captured...Your paying for Ramen!!" exclaimed Koga as both he and Inuyasha followed by Kyoko running towards Ichiraku Ramen. Smiling lightly he nodded in a agreement as he walked with Todo-sensei towards Ichiraku. They'd simply visit the Hokage's office later.
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Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2012 1:33 pm
Excellent name, Koga inuzuka is the name of one of my old RPCs. This sample demonstrated the inuzuka techniques well, save for a few errors. First, the fireball combined with a Gatsuuga (Passing fang), If a fireball or any other projectile-type ninjutsu were to collide with a gatsuuga, it would not combine the jutsu, they would collide. A flaming gatsuuga is not possible. Second, Your sample hinted that you were a low-mid level shinobi, yet you were able to use the Inuzuka clan's A rank technique. When writing samples, its important to keep your power level consistent. (Yes, I am aware of who is on my approval banner)
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Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2012 4:52 pm
Rpc Name:Undecided Village: Undecided, wherever I'm needed most I suppose Rank: Genin Bloodline or Clan applied for: Hyoton What you know about the clan/bl: It allows members of the bloodline to use ice release, a combination of water and wind. Users of Hyoton are capable of creating ice from nothing, unlike the snow village's special techniques which require the user to have a source of snow/ice already available to them Rp Sample:
Kane slammed hard into the wall, the impact forcefully expelling the air from his lungs. Falling to his hands and knees, Kane struggled to fill his empty lungs, sucking at the air greedily. "YOU DON'T TALK BACK TO ME BOY!", Kane's father raged, waving one fist in the air, and holding a jug of sake with his free hand. Kane looked up at the man, a bruise already showing on his fair skinned cheek, his pale-grey, almost white, eyes filled with a malice intense enough to stop his father in his tracks, if only for a moment.
"I WON'T STAND FOR THAT LOOK, BOY! YOU WILL SHOW ME RESPECT IN MY OWN HOUSE!", Kane's father screamed as he took a step forward and launched a vicious kick into Kane's side. Kane didn't even have time to defend himself, and as his father's foot slammed into his gut he was lifted into the air, only to have his father grab his hair and hold him aloft. Kane grimaced at the pain, but he refused to cry out as his father pulled him closer, the stench of sweat and alcohol heavy about the man. "So, boy, are we going to have to continue this lesson, or are you ready to show me some respect?", the man said, a cruel grin on his face, his breath reeking of alcohol. Glaring at his father with a look as cold as a blizzard, Kane spat in the man's face.
Kane's father blinked several times, clearly stunned by his son's defiance, but that stunned look was quickly replaced with a wrathful glare. With a strength fueled by rage and booze, Kane's father lifted Kane and flung him across the room to slam into a book shelf, burying Kane in a piled of splinters and books. Every part of Kane's body cried out in pain, but beyond the pain, Kane could feel an anger more terrible than the worst winter storm welling within him. Rising slowly out of the wreckage of the bookshelf, Kane's jaw was clenched, his fists shaking at his side. He could feel anger welling up from somewhere deep within, but it was not an anger that made his blood boil, it was a cold and terrible anger, and with that anger he could feel a great power surging through him.
As Kane stood there glaring with his father with a cold and terrible look in his eye. The temperature suddenly began to drop as Kane took a step forward out of the wreckage, his eyes locked with his father's holding the man's attention with those terrible pale-grey orbs. Suddenly a frost seemed to spread out from Kai, starting at his feet and spreading steadily away, leaving a thin lay of white frost on the floor that set the wooden planks to creaking. As the frost moved towards Kane's father, the jug of sake suddenly burst, a lump of frozen sake falling to the ground at his feet.
Kane continued moving forward toward his father, and with each step his anger grew, and with his anger came that cold and deadly power. He was just five steps from his father, and every breath could be seen in the air now. Four steps and he could feel a chill creeping into his body, an unnatural chill so cold it felt like he was burning, but he no longer cared what his body felt. Three steps and the chill was spreading to his arms, a chill so intense that frost was beginning to form over the top of his skin. Two steps and both his hands were covered in the frost, and oh how his skin was burning, but his cold anger wouldn't allow him to feel that burn, wouldn't allow him to feel anything until it had been sated.
That earlier look of shock returned to his father's face, and this time there was a hint of fear in that look. After a moment however, Kane's father quickly regained his composure, a prideful smirk replacing his look of shock. "What now, hmmm, you gonna kill me? Hmmm, you think you can ki-", his father's words were suddenly cut off as Kane grabbed his father by his shirt, the chill running through Kane's arms and into his father's body, the suddenness of the cold causing his father to lose his breath.
"I'll tell you what I'm going to do, I'm going to leave now, and go to Kirigakure. I'm going to find my brothers and I'm going to become a shinobi. And while I'm doing that, you're going to stay here and drink yourself stupid until you rot...", Kane said his voice cold and biting. With that Kane lowered his hands, the chill receding from his body as the whole room began to return to a normal temperature. Turning away Kane began to walk across the frost covered floor toward the door, each step making a strange crunching noise. The chill was gone, but his body was still burning from the remnants of the cold, but he wouldn't allow himself to shiver, wouldn't allow himself to show any sign of weakness.
As he reached for the door-handle, Kane heard the pounding and crunching sound of foot-steps behind him, and in a flash he turned on his heel to see his father rushing towards him. Kane felt no fear, he could only feel that same cold anger suddenly welling up once more, coming out in a sudden burst as he lashed out with that cold anger. A spear of ice suddenly formed in front of Kane, and shot out towards his father, piercing through the wretched man's chest. Kane suddenly fell to his knees, every muscle in his body crying out in protest at the strain that the ability had put on his body.
Kane lay there for a moment, his breathing heavy and labored from the strain. Looking up at his father, Kane saw a look of the purest shock and fear, the look of a coward realizing he was about to die. Kane rose shakily to his feet and took a step forward so that his face was just inches from his fathers. Kane then leaned in close to whisper into his father's ear, "You should know that you're going to die now... and in these final moments I want you to think on this. You are a pitiful man, a man that never could earn the respect of his peers, a man so despicable that he mistook the fear of the wife and child that he beat as some kind of twisted respect. But you should know that you never had my respect..."
With that Kane turned away, and as he did so, the ice spear melted, leaving a whole in his fathers chest. His father fell to his knees, sucking desperately for air that could not fill his pierced lung. Kane stood there for a moment, listening to the final few breaths of his father. Without another word, Kane opened the door and walked out, leaving behind his life of subservience to a pitiful man, leaving behind the beatings, leaving behind his weakness. It was time to go to Kirigakure, it was time to meet his brother. Mizukage Zane Hajime.
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Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2012 5:46 pm
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Posted: Tue Aug 28, 2012 3:48 pm
Rpc Name: Tsukihana Hakke Village: Kirigakure Rank: Genin Bloodline or Clan applied for: Mind's Eye of the Kagura What you know about the clan/bl: This clan is perfect for a medical ninja, as it is all about healing others and sensing stuff. The descriptions of everything are fairly vague as to the bonuses, but I know the user has a slight increase in healing, can learn medical techs faster, and can sense people in their area. Rp Sample:
Tsuki clenched her fist as her comrade Akito bit into her forearm. To many people, this may have seemed extremely awkward, but Akito was in need of medical attention, since Shion's scythe took a nice slice across his leg, rendering it useless for a bit. Tsuki and Akito had two choices here; fight or die. Since dying was against the rules, and they'd probably be punished even more than the time they had stolen Shion's sake, fighting was their choice. Tsuki had minor cuts and bruises on her, though was healing at a slow rate. Akito continued to draw chakra out of Tsuki's arm, who was currently keeping a watchful eye on Akito's wound. She only wanted it to fix itself on the inside, where she was not yet able to fix it. What she could do was bandage the wound, which would let Akito walk about on it. Tsuki nodded her head, and Akito finished sucking chakra from her arm. She immediately set about bandaging his wound, simultaneously keeping an eye out for Shion-sempai. Akito glanced around nervously, gripping a kunai for dear life. "Awfully nice of her to give us time to fix up eh Tsuki?" Tsuki smiled and nodded. Right then and there, she'd bet a million dollars that Shion was taking a drinking break. Tsuki continued to speak randomly to Akito, all the while performing a count-down with her hands.
She had been keeping an eye out for Shion's chakra, and had located it fairly quickly, not too far away behind some trees and past a clearing. When her fingers reached one, she pointed, and Akito took off limping in Shion's direction, while Tsuki suppressed her chakra, and headed towards the left flank. Akito was being the bait, and Tsuki would catch Shion, ending the test. Akito stumbled into the clearing as Tsuki settled down behind a tree just out of view from him. As she suspected, Shion immediately acted, and pounced out toward Akito. Tsuki pivoted and launched out two kunai, each attached to a wire while keeping her chakra suppressed. Akito rolled away from Shion as the two kunai passed her. Tsuki tugged on the wires, making the kunai round about and wrap around Shion. Akito performed quick handseals, and emitted a flurry of fireballs towards the captured Shion. The fireballs connected, and when the smoke cleared, there was nothing but kunai and wire on the floor. Tsuki ran forth to Akito, a smile on her face. The real Shion appeared out of nowhere, standing just before Tsuki and Akito. "Wow, you guys actually managed to defeat my clone, congratulations!" Akito was clapped on the back while Tsuki laughed out of sheer exhaustion, it had taken all day. Shion ordered them to stay the night in the clearing, and took off to her own shack. Akito limped his way to a tree, grumbling about the horrible congratulatory party Shion had given them. Tsuki walked over to him, a smile on her face as she removed her hand from her back, revealing Shion's sake gourd. Akito's face lit up as he reached out, uncapping it and taking a swig.
Tsuki had just been about to take a sip herself, when the very forest rumbled and shook with Shion's voice. "Tsuki! Akito! Gimme my sake!" Akito's face blanched as he fumbled with the sake, in an attempt to rid himself of the evidence. Tsuki had already took off running, suppressing her chakra in an attempt to hide from Shion.
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Posted: Tue Aug 28, 2012 6:05 pm
Shay approves!
No only because your sample was good, but because I know this character and know you've used this clan before.
... WAIT. You're reviving Tsuki? biggrin Is she going to train with Dr. Lothar? >D
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Posted: Tue Aug 28, 2012 7:01 pm
Somnis Shay approves!
No only because your sample was good, but because I know this character and know you've used this clan before.
... WAIT. You're reviving Tsuki? biggrin Is she going to train with Dr. Lothar? >D Yes, Tsuki is coming back! As for the training, that's up to Greg xD
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Posted: Thu Sep 20, 2012 8:46 am
Rpc Name: Yelena Aburame
Village: Kumogakure
Rank: Genin
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Aburame
What you know about the clan/bl: The Aburame clan house insects inside their bodies that feed off of their chakra. By allowing the insects to house themselves inside their body, the host has the ability to use the insects in battle, espionage, and tracking. Aburame bugs can drain chakra from an opponent equal to one rank lower than the jutsu used. The bugs die after three hours without feeding, therefore a bug can't stay in one place forever. The Aburame bugs are treated as an element.
Rp Sample:
"Yulia, how is it that I let you talk me into these sort of situations?" whined the red headed kunoichi. The one she was talking to, Yulia, only looked back at the girl with a devilish smile. She knew what that grin meant, trouble. "Because you love me that's why! Now hurry up Lena! You said that the Kage is meeting with the ninja from the Hidden Mist Village. I want to know what's going on!" Yulia retorted as the two girls were scaling the building. Lena, upon Yulia's request, always had little tiny spies hanging around the gates to inform the two whenever guests from other ninja villages came into the Kumogakure. They've always found the confine of Kumogakure dull and boring. The two of them want to travel the world together, see the many wonders that the world has to offer. So whenever a traveler goes through the village, they like to be some of the first to speak with them. Where they were from, what have they seen, and why did they come to Kumo were some of the first questions asked.
Now in order to keep track of them, Lena gets a female kikaichuu to scurry over silently as they walk through the gates. The insect latches unto an article of loose clothing. There are many who were capes and robes that make it ideal for the insect to latch unto, otherwise the heel of their shoes is another great place. By doing this, Lena can track down the female scent using her male insects that are living inside her. She needed to do this quickly however, since the bug's lifespan is only a couple of hours. After using her insects to track the stranger down, they've concluded that the foreigner is now speaking with the Raikage. Sneaking inside the building, the two peek around the corner of the hallway that leads to the office.
"You know...for it being the Raikage's office, security is rather lax don't you think," Yulia whispered as the two now approached the door. Yulia attempted to looking inside the keyhole, trying to take a peek inside the office, while Lena pressed her ear against the door to see if she could hear anything. Realizing that the door was sound proofed, Yelena had one of her insects crawl through the keyhole and into the room. This way, the bug can relay everything that went on inside back to her. Yulia giggled upon seeing this, finding her friend to be one of the most useful ninjas around. Not only was Lena useful for espionage and tracking, but she can speak to insects and the kikaichu can be used as weapons by sucking out the chakra of the opponents they attach to.
"And what do you two think you're doing!?" a voice exploded behind them. Both Lena and Yulia cringed upon hearing the voice. They knew exactly whose voice it was. As they turned slowly with sour faces, they looked upon a young man towering above them. It was Yulia's older brother Ivan, a chuunin ranked ninja who was being trained under the Kage himself. Ivan bore a look of both annoyance and frustration. With a furrowed brow and arms crossed, he tapped his foot incessantly and waited for the girls to respond.
"It's really none of your business now is it? We were just leaving weren't we Lena?" Yulia responded, her tone full of arrogance and pride. Though the two siblings would die for each other, they hardly ever showed it with the way they treated one another. Lena didn't have any siblings so she never understood their relationship. Yulia stood up and began walking away, Lena following suit before Ivan reached to stop his sister. Ivan placed his hand on Yulia's shoulder as she walked away, big mistake. One thing that should be mentioned is that Ivan is a chuunin ranked genjutsu specialist, while Yulia is a genin ranked taijutsu specialist. So in terms of hand to hand combat, Yulia would beat Ivan rather easily. Another thing that should be mentioned, Yulia hates it when anyone approaches her from behind.
Without hesitation, almost out of instinct, Yulia grabs a hold of Ivan and tosses him effortlessly. Lena was still walking, not knowing what happened. Next thing she knows, Ivan is being slammed into her and was knocked unto the ground. As Lena opened her eyes groggily, trying to piece together what had happened, she looked down to see Ivan with his face resting between her breasts. Ivan was moving his face around, trying to get up, but Lena took this as something perverted. It also didn't help that Ivan was muffling something from within her shirt, making things even worse. Lena proceeded to scream at the top of her lungs, a high shriek that would alert everyone in the building that something terrible has just happened. "PEEEEERRVVVEEEEEERTTTTT!!!!"
Ivan managed to get off of Lena with a frightened look on his face, but the damage was already done. As he gazed upon the girl who's face appeared a mixture of anger and distraught. Her eyes gleamed wickedly as she felt a stirring from beneath the skin of her body. Suddenly, a black cloud erupted from behind her, rising over her as the cloud towered over Ivan. The Kikaichu flew out of the pores of her skin, forming an ominous black cloud. Without uttering another word, thousands of insects swarmed towards Ivan. Because she hadn't used a specific jutsu, and the insects weren't in some sort of special formation, Lena had used up D rank level chakra. Though it brought her chakra level down slightly, it was still worth it in order to teach Ivan a lesson to not be in places where he shouldn't be. Ironic that she herself was in a place where she shouldn't be...such is the fickleness of a woman.
Ivan shrieked as he took a step back, trying to back away from the swarm. He knew genjutsu wouldn't work on the insects, their nervous systems are too simple to be affected. The Kikaichu finally reached Ivan, his failed attempts at swatting at them proved futile. As Lena began to rise up, Yulia was heard laughing next to her as the Kikaichu slowly began to seep away Ivan's chakra. They would only be able to take a little bit of chakra at a time, but good luck getting rid of that many insects at once. "Come on girly we gotta get out of here!" exclaimed Yulia as she grabbed a hold of Lena's arm and began sprinting for the exit.
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Posted: Sat Sep 22, 2012 11:06 am
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Posted: Fri Sep 28, 2012 8:07 pm
Rpc Name: Miyu Yamono Village: Suna Rank: Genin Bloodline or Clan applied for: Mind's Eye of the Kagura What you know about the clan/bloodline: Medical Ninja are the only ones who can carry such a bloodline. This bloodline increases their learning ability to the medical jutsus. They also have increased Chakra control which is necessary to suppress their chakra to undetectable levels, and absorb chakra's to heal others. (Sorry if I said everything, I really just think every bit of this bloodline is amazing!) Rp Sample:
A deep breath in...and out...
This very idea was circling in the young Yamono's mind. It was a teaching she learned as a small child, "While running, breathe in through your nose...and out through your mouth..." It was suppose to allow free flow of your blood and lessen the risk of side stitches and splitting calves. This exercise was also to focus on the goal rather than one's exhausted body. Miyu was not trying to focus on breathing but in reality was supressing her chakra with every breath out. Within enemy lines, the last thing she wanted was to be detected.
Her bare feet gingerly stepped on the tree branches and within seconds of contact disappeared for the next branch in reach. Darting quickly between treetops, Miyu kept an eye out for any strong chakra's within her danger zone. This zone was any distance that the sound of her coming was heard, or any distance that creates an uncomfortable feeling within her body. The only chakra she could sense, however, was the weakened one of her fallen comrade. That chakra is getting weaker, was her only thought as she dropped from hidden view into the shadows of the night. Above her, the moon was overcast with clouds, a perfect night for anyone adjusted to the shadow's to prey on trespassers. Miyu took this route instead of the trees because speed would be heightened. She was already worried about the weakened chakra, she could hardly waste an extra second dancing in the leaves. It was her solem promise to save lives of others - she would not lose anymore...
A swirl of dark hair came around her face as she stopped dead in 500 feet. A clearing, if it could be justified as such, was where her comrade sat pitched against a tree. Breathing was shallow but Miyu would not lose hope. Kneeling beside her teammate, Miyu whispered, "Stay calm...tell me, can you hear me?" Simple questions were used to distract the patient as she began her treatment. Reassembling and repositioning rib cages were not particularly pleasent. It required a slow, steady stream of healing chakra that could not be too weak or too strong. While her heightened learning skills helped her master the technique, it was still a practice that one could not do so lightly. "...ye..s" the answer came from her fallen companion. "Good. You need to stay awake. Tell me now, do you know where you are?"
"Miss...Mi..yu," the answer came, slowly and in a harsh whisper.
"Breathe in...and out..." she repeated aloud to the patient, and with the words she demonstrated. With each breath she maintained her chakra at the right levels. With each breath in she absorbed a bit of the man's chakra and with each breath out, pushed the recycled energy within her own to heal quicker. She needed to stabilize him, before they could move. He would not be strong enough to make the journey without being able to breathe effectively - which was hard for anyone with as many broken ribs as the man had. She suspected a skill martial combatist had triggered many combos while this shinobi was distracted. She could only spectulate of course. She had hoped that however this had happened, the opponent was as injured as the man she was working on.
The man's eyes fluttered, and Miyu noticed he may have been drifting away.. "Stay awake!" she almost shouted, but it came out as a loud whisper. His eyes stood straight open now. "Breathe in," she commanded, "and out". As the man did as she instructed, the channels began to open again and his blood flowing easier. The technique did not just stop at sprinting or chakra control, but focusing on the long term goal which was to get out alive. Miyu was constantly aware of her surroundings and made sure that they were in complete silence - no other levels of chakra's were detected, but she could only imagine for how long that may last. The man gave her a brief smile, "I think...it's...working," he said, returning his breathing to a shallow normal. Her techinque would only take a moment longer to stablize him, and a moment after that to make him perfect. With the silence around...it may be possible... Miyu thought. She continued a steady stream of the two chakra's combined into healing.
She returned the smile, and laughed, "You're lucky it was me and not some baka that found you," she said, finishing up her form. "You are stable and in the condition to move. I'll finish later...but now is not the time to have a tea break. It is only a matter of time before they return for you." The man nodded and pushed off the tree with his shoulder, to his hands and then up to his feet. "Thank you..." Miyu looked towards the forest, "Now is not the time to thank me, now is the time to run...several intense chakra's are forming just outside this forest. If we linger any longer, they might try to..."
"I can feel them..." the man said, cutting her off. Putting his arm on her shoulder, "let's go, I can keep my own chakra depressed now with the energy you've given me. I shall not put you in danger..." Miyu smiled, "I sometimes forget you are the same bloodline...I suppose I could remember if you'd ever stop getting yourself half killed..." "You were always the more senisble one." He laughed gently and his eyes twinkled. She glared at him for making light of a situtation such as this. With that he only laughed the more and gave her a quick jab on the shoulder before running away as though he had never been injured at all. Tch, she thought in her mind as took off into the forest after him.
Chakra Control Increased Medical knowledge and power Diminishing Chakra Chakra Detection Absorbing another's Chakra for Increased Healing Power
(I edited a little bit after I read though it. Just needed a little work xD It's been awhile.)
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Posted: Sat Sep 29, 2012 1:25 pm
Natsumiyui Rpc Name: Miyu Yamono Village: Suna Rank: Genin Bloodline or Clan applied for: Mind's Eye of the Kagura What you know about the clan/bloodline: Medical Ninja are the only ones who can carry such a bloodline. This bloodline increases their learning ability to the medical jutsus. They also have increased Chakra control which is necessary to suppress their chakra to undetectable levels, and absorb chakra's to heal others. (Sorry if I said everything, I really just think every bit of this bloodline is amazing!) Rp Sample: A deep breath in...and out...This very idea was circling in the young Yamono's mind. It was a teaching she learned as a small child, "While running, breathe in through your nose...and out through your mouth..." It was suppose to allow free flow of your blood and lessen the risk of side stitches and splitting calves. This exercise was also to focus on the goal rather than one's exhausted body. Miyu was not trying to focus on breathing but in reality was supressing her chakra with every breath out. Within enemy lines, the last thing she wanted was to be detected. Her bare feet gingerly stepped on the tree branches and within seconds of contact disappeared for the next branch in reach. Darting quickly between treetops, Miyu kept an eye out for any strong chakra's within her danger zone. This zone was any distance that the sound of her coming was heard, or any distance that creates an uncomfortable feeling within her body. The only chakra she could sense, however, was the weakened one of her fallen comrade. That chakra is getting weaker, was her only thought as she dropped from hidden view into the shadows of the night. Above her, the moon was overcast with clouds, a perfect night for anyone adjusted to the shadow's to prey on trespassers. Miyu took this route instead of the trees because speed would be heightened. She was already worried about the weakened chakra, she could hardly waste an extra second dancing in the leaves. It was her solem promise to save lives of others - she would not lose anymore... A swirl of dark hair came around her face as she stopped dead in 500 feet. A clearing, if it could be justified as such, was where her comrade sat pitched against a tree. Breathing was shallow but Miyu would not lose hope. Kneeling beside her teammate, Miyu whispered, "Stay calm...tell me, can you hear me?" Simple questions were used to distract the patient as she began her treatment. Reassembling and repositioning rib cages were not particularly pleasent. It required a slow, steady stream of healing chakra that could not be too weak or too strong. While her heightened learning skills helped her master the technique, it was still a practice that one could not do so lightly. "...ye..s" the answer came from her fallen companion. "Good. You need to stay awake. Tell me now, do you know where you are?" "Miss...Mi..yu," the answer came, slowly and in a harsh whisper. "Breathe in...and out..." she repeated aloud to the patient, and with the words she demonstrated. With each breath she maintained her chakra at the right levels. With each breath in she absorbed a bit of the man's chakra and with each breath out, pushed the recycled energy within her own to heal quicker. She needed to stabilize him, before they could move. He would not be strong enough to make the journey without being able to breathe effectively - which was hard for anyone with as many broken ribs as the man had. She suspected a skill martial combatist had triggered many combos while this shinobi was distracted. She could only spectulate of course. She had hoped that however this had happened, the opponent was as injured as the man she was working on. The man's eyes fluttered, and Miyu noticed he may have been drifting away.. "Stay awake!" she almost shouted, but it came out as a loud whisper. His eyes stood straight open now. "Breathe in," she commanded, "and out". As the man did as she instructed, the channels began to open again and his blood flowing easier. The technique did not just stop at sprinting or chakra control, but focusing on the long term goal which was to get out alive. Miyu was constantly aware of her surroundings and made sure that they were in complete silence - no other levels of chakra's were detected, but she could only imagine for how long that may last. The man gave her a brief smile, "I think...it's...working," he said, returning his breathing to a shallow normal. Her techinque would only take a moment longer to stablize him, and a moment after that to make him perfect. With the silence around...it may be possible... Miyu thought. She continued a steady stream of the two chakra's combined into healing. She returned the smile, and laughed, "You're lucky it was me and not some baka that found you," she said, finishing up her form. "You are stable and in the condition to move. I'll finish later...but now is not the time to have a tea break. It is only a matter of time before they return for you." The man nodded and pushed off the tree with his shoulder, to his hands and then up to his feet. "Thank you..." Miyu looked towards the forest, "Now is not the time to thank me, now is the time to run...several intense chakra's are forming just outside this forest. If we linger any longer, they might try to...""I can feel them..." the man said, cutting her off. Putting his arm on her shoulder, "let's go, I can keep my own chakra depressed now with the energy you've given me. I shall not put you in danger..." Miyu smiled, "I sometimes forget you are the same bloodline...I suppose I could remember if you'd ever stop getting yourself half killed..." "You were always the more senisble one." He laughed gently and his eyes twinkled. She glared at him for making light of a situtation such as this. With that he only laughed the more and gave her a quick jab on the shoulder before running away as though he had never been injured at all. Tch, she thought in her mind as took off into the forest after him. Chakra Control Increased Medical knowledge and power Diminishing Chakra Chakra Detection Absorbing another's Chakra for Increased Healing Power (I edited a little bit after I read though it. Just needed a little work xD It's been awhile.)
Wow, on reading the bloodline to see how your sample matched up... We really need to rework that bloodline. XD
However, the only problem I see here is your absorbing the chakra to heal someone, since that's not how that portion works. It's not well described, but the rule states that you cannot heal yourself by absorbing your own chakra. That in turn is a reference to Karin's ability to heal someone by allowing them to absorb her chakra.
Ignoring that though, the rest is an excellent sample for the material provided to work with. We will be reworking that bloodline sometime in the future, but for now, I have to say...

Since the rules are vague on your bonuses, assume that "Learns Medical jutsu's Easier." means -1 Post learning medical jutsu. And "Has excellent Chakra control" grants the chakra control type in addition to your normal two. (This won't stack if you take the type.) These facts will most likely be included in the rewrite. The rest aren't so important and can be looked at when they come up, if that happens before the new version is made.
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Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2012 11:14 am
Rpc Name: N/A Village: Mist Rank: Genin Bloodline or Clan applied for: Otosan What you know about the clan/bl: I had a hand in helping Syn Inferni create it, and I've seen it used a number of times, and have even used it myself before. It utilizes sound and vibrations to give the blind RPC 'sight'. The RPC would use pitches and frequencies to harm their opponent, ranging from messing with their sight to halting a summoning in its tracks. I know that explosions can disrupt the sight of the RPC, though it can be avoided with a certain tech. Rp Sample:
The guard on duty rubbed his hands together in an attempt to generate heat. Of course it would be just his luck to draw the night shift on what seemed to be the coldest night that month. The first snow had yet to come, but the harsh winds sure made it seem like Winter. There were no other sounds aside from his breath and the cry of the night wind. The guard stood by the fire outside of the Western Gate, eyes peering into the darkness. He suddenly stopped rubbing his hands and squinted his eyes. The guard raised his hands and rubbed his eyes, suddenly very dizzy. He stumbled away from the fire and bent over to wretch up his dinner. The guard never even saw the shadowy figure pass right through the gates. [1]
Jade had rejoiced at the turn the weather had taken whereas her squadmates had complained. The high whining pitch of the wind would not only provide her with a constant stream of sight, but would help hide the changes in pitches when she needed to use an attack. The gate guard had not heard the low tone caused by her chakra entering the air, nor noticed the frequency change until he needed to throw up. She kept to the shadows and sprinted through the gate, successfully infiltrating the keep. Now came the fun part. While the rest of her comrades created their diversion at the East Gate there would be very little resistance for Jade to deal with.
She had the layout memorized down to the number of windows on each floor. This mission had been in planning for months and she had taken the time to listen in on every single briefing. The goal was simple, enter the office of the Kage and steal a very important artifact. Jade had scaled the wall and was sitting in the rafters, waiting for the signal. She closed her eyes and concentrated on the sounds around her. Two rooms over there were three guards playing ping-pong, the constant tapping of the paddles and ball allowing her to 'see' what was going on. Just above her a man and lady were getting down and dirty; doing dishes. She was still too far from the central room to 'see' inside of it, but Jade remembered where it was.
The loud explosion reverberated throughout the building, the edges of Jade's vision blurred in response. She raised her fingers to her temples and rubbed lightly, waiting for a few minutes till she regained full sight. With a slight thud Jade dropped from the ceiling, taking off down the hallway and turning to the right. There were so many doorways and halls that this would have taken someone forever to find if they had not possessed the same abilities as Jade. Now, each time she entered a new hallway everything was visible to her.
Off to her left three guards were sprinting down a hall directly towards her. "Crap..." Jade muttered to herself, thinking fast. They were coming down the very hallway she needed to get through. She looked upward and saw the rafters, but knew the creaking sounds would alert them to her presence. Jade nodded to herself and climbed upward, sitting still in one of the rafters until the guards were a bit closer. Her hands came together in a simple set of seals and her chakra began to affect the area. Jade manipulated the frequencies, lowering her own sounds and making the guards sound louder. [2] As they passed under her she jumped from rafter to rafter without making a sound. Once they left the hallway the technique ended, and Jade dropped to the floor. A few more hallways and turns and she was at the location she needed to be. A quick glance and she could see the room was empty.
This entire mission was relying on the fact that this was the day of the month that the Mizukage went out to the local restaurant to eat dinner. Jade slipped into the room via a simple unlocking technique and closed the door quietly behind her. Without having to look around like a normal person Jade was able to spot the item quickly. She walked over to the cabinet in the Mizukage's office and opened it, grabbing a small Hello-Kitty coffee mug. A smile spread across her face, but was quickly replaced with a look of shock when a hard knock followed by a shout came from the door. She jumped and fumbled the mug, catching it just before it hit the floor. "Mizukage-sama! There was an explosion at the East Entrance! We are here to secure you!" The guards said from the other side. Jade panicked and threw her hands together, clearing her throat before speaking. When she spoke, her voice had changed to match that of the Mizukage's. [3] "Don't come in! I'm...shaving!" Jade shouted, and then immediately smacked herself on the forehead. There was momentary silence from the other side of the door, but Jade could see the two guards looking at each other in confusion. "Okay...we'll stay right outside!" Jade silently thrust her hand into the air in celebration and the moon-walked towards the window. She put one foot onto the sill and turned once to bow before jumping out and running off into the night.
[1] Disorientation
[2] Echoing Steps
[3] Mimicry
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Posted: Fri Oct 26, 2012 10:06 pm
Rpc Name: Miyaki, Shizuna Village: Kumogakure Rank: Genin Bloodline or Clan applied for: Ink Artistry
What you know about the clan/bl: This bloodline was created based on the battle style of Sai in the Naruto-verse. His ability over ink is the core foundation of this bloodline and though his moves generally revolve around adding chakra to pre-painted images, Sai is also able to draw something on the spot and use it. Basically but adding one's chakra to the ink (drawing, characters, etc.), animates it allowing for the ink to spring to life. The ink images that come to life can also grow larger, generally life size, to fit the user's need. The most common uses of his abilities are when Sai uses his ink to create a giant bird for transport or large lions for offensive attacks.
Rp Sample: **For sample purposes, Shizuna will be a jounin with support/combo type in this rp senario
Perched on the ledge of Kumogakure's grand gates, a young female clad in a simple, sleeve-less, rose colour top and magenta shorts sat with her feet dangling and sketchbook on her lap. This particular individual was currently painting the sunset with only a single paintbrush and black ink as her tools. While she did that, an explosion could be heard at the gates as several smoke bombs were smashed and activated. Due to her current position at the top of the gates, the smoke had yet to affect her allowing her a clear view of the ground below. There, running out of the village were two shinobi, both male and adorning jounin vests. Letting out a sigh, Shizuna shook her head in disbelief as another set of idiots attempted to steal from Kumo. 'Just because out ranks had a bit of a falling out, the whole shinobi nation thinks they can just do whatever they want...well it should be another five minutes or so before the guards recover. Downhill travel is faster than uphill...up to me I guess,' Closing her sketchbook, Shizuna shoved her brush into the ring bindings and slipped her right hand hand through the strap all in one swift motion so that her sketchbook now rested by her side like a messenger bag.
Left hand flicking open the vial pouch that rested on her left hip, Shizuna would continue to observe the two as they headed down the mountain pass known to all. 'Fools...going the direct route...' Pulling out two full vials of ink, Shizuna would hold onto them as she directed her chakra through the small gaps between vial and cork and into the ink laying dormant within. The ink from inside would bubble out and mind imagining the bottom of the mountain pass, called about her ink to help propel and cover her fast, almost instant travel down to the bottom of the mountain pass. Breaking free of their glass confinement by means of pushing out the cork, the ink would spray out into the open air before combining together to form a thin haze like wall around her body. Pushing off the wall just as the haze settled in, chakra infused ink would enveloped her body entirely as Shizuna flicked out of sight. [1]
Flashing back into existence in the same haze of ink, the ink would fade away like mist to reveal Shizuna standing there calm and battle ready. The faded ink would gather in a pool of black liquid at Shizuna's feet which she would use for another technique shortly. Eyes squinting slightly, Shizuna spotted her targets and from the way they seem to be picking up speed, it was apparent they spotted her as well. Left hand dropping the now empty vials to the ground, Shizuna would allow for them to smash into the ground and crack into numerous shards of broken glass as that would be faster than slipping them back into her pouch. A necessary loss in Shizuna's mind. Left hand reaching further back pass her ink pouch, Shizuna would withdraw a scroll from inside her scroll pouch and unroll it with a snap of her wrist. On the scroll were twelve animal drawings made from ink. These animals represented the twelve animal zodiac in their correct order - starting with the rat and ending with the pig.
Though her ink creations were easily destructible, they were still useful in detaining her opponent's attentions and at the moment, that was all she needed. 'So lets go with the classic tiger and loyal dog for two offensive forces...' Calling upon her chakra once more, Shizuna channeled it from her body through to her left hand, onto her scroll, and than towards the drawings of the tiger and dog. Wordlessly activating her technique, Shizuna would infuse the two paintings with her chakra and turn the scroll to face her approaching opponents. The paintings would than begin to peel off from the scroll like dry glue from fingers before picking up speed and shooting out into the open. As the paintings flew mid-air, they would begin to grow in size and take on a three dimensional shape. Smashing into the ground as life-size animals, they would be beige in colour with all parts of their body outlined in thick black ink. [2]
Her creations would momentarily surprise her foes but only for a moment before they continued their charge. Swords drawn, the two were ready to hack away at her creations believing them to be as strong as the real things which they were not. One strike against them and they return to ink. 'Just like any other regular clones...' With a simply flick of her right hand, her beasts charged towards her opponents with the intent to pin them down. Never one to underestimate her opponents, Shizuna would bring her right hand back to rest by her side while sending chakra out her feet and into the surrounding ink laying in a pool at her feet. Infusing her chakra with the black liquid that is ink, Shizuna would use her chakra to mold it into two replica's of herself. 'Sumi Bunshin no Jutsu,' Shizuna would say in her mind as the ink below her bubbled before springing upward and molding into two exact copy of Shizuna in her casual outfit [3]. Passing a kunai to each clone, Shizuna would send them forward to aid her ink beast while she takes a moment to catch her breath. Four consecutive jutsus two of which were C-rank, even as a jounin, to perform such a long string of attacks was bound to take its toll. Dropping her scroll on the ground, Shizuna took a moment to calculate just how much time it would take for her creations to be completely wiped out by her opponents.
Knowing she didn't have much longer, Shizuna would reach towards another vial pouch hanging on her left hip. Unlike the one on her right, this one contained vials of water instead of ink. Swiping out two of them, Shizuna held both in her left hand in the space between her index and middle and middle and ring fingers. Charging forward, Shizuna would begin to send her chakra into the tube and infuse it with the water. Gaze set on her opponents, both had managed to destroy her beasts and were now left trying to nail down her lithe clones. Skidding to a full stop, Shizuna would then whip both at the ground in front of her as preparation for her next move. With her chakra already infused with the water, it wasn't extremely hard for her to continue using that chakra to mold the water into solid forms. As the two ninja finally managed to destroy her clones, it would already be too late as Shizuna had more than enough time to use her chakra to construct chains from the pool of water while they were pre-occupied. Launching out her chains the moment the two shinobi were within striking distance, her chains would fly at speeds of around 80km/hr and capture her opponenet's ankles and wrists by surprise [4]. Grinding their teeth, both males would attempt to free themselves from their bindings by force. Staring blankly at the two, Shizuna decided enough was enough and to put an end to their struggle would finish one of them and leave the other for interrogation. Nimbly making her way around one of the two males, Shizuna would pull out a kunai and slice the males neck without a second though. Turning her attention to the screaming male, Shizuna would silence him would a whack in the head using the butt of her kunai. 'That's what fools get for messing with Kumo...'
Techniques Used:
[1] - Sumi Gasumi no Jutsu (Ink Haze Technique) || Rank: C xxxxx=> Shunshin (Body Flicker) || Rank: C [2] - Choujuu Giga (Super Beast Imitation Drawing) || Rank: C [3] - Sumi Bunshin no Jutsu (Ink Clone Technique) || Rank: E [4] - Suikusari no Jutsu (Water Chains Technique) || Rank: C
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