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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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 Posted: Sat Jan 07, 2012 1:54 pm
This is where you post your application to join a bloodline!
Don't just copy the code and move along. There is very important information here, so read it and keep it in your head as you post your application!
[b]Rpc Name:[/b]
[b]Village:[/b]
[b]Rank:[/b]
[b]Bloodline or Clan applied for:[/b]
[b]What you know about the clan/bl:[/b] (If you say everything it will be denied on the spot)
[b]Rp Sample[/b]:
Rules:
1. Make sure to show that you know both the strengths and weaknesses of the clan or bloodline in the rp sample.
2. Let us know that you know the limitations of your bloodline or clan. There is no rank limit in your rp sample, so show us your best!
3. The minimum length of the rp sample has been moved up to 4 separate paragraphs of 10 sentences each. Remember, this is the Minimum. More than that would be awesome, but if it's all fluff, it's not helping your chances.
4. Please make sure your rp sample is about your bloodline or clan, not just an rp sample of going to the store or something. These will be denied.
5. You have 3 edits before you are completely denied for the bloodline. Make sure you listen carefully to whoever critiques your bloodline. If you are denied you are free to apply for a different bloodline or clan, but can not apply for the one denied.
6. List the jutsu that you used, as well as it's description.
p.s. No one likes it if you do the bare minimum. Wow us.
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Posted: Thu Jan 12, 2012 6:14 am
Rpc Name: Kameshi Helia Village: Sunagakure Rank: Genin Bloodline or Clan applied for: Konaga What you know about the bloodline: They have an unlimited supply of chakra in their bodies, but correspondingly their bodies are constantly breaking down from the stress of that much power inside such a fragile form. There is a high fatality rate in children and that fatality rate lowers slightly but throughout life it is always much higher then most people's. Also the constant stress on the nervous system does neurological damage and gives members of this clan a hair pin trigger which can send them into a mindless state that will result in their body alleviating itself of the pent up chakra in usually very destructive ways. Their bodies after a given time either break or become incredibly strong, they also have limited sensed from the nervous damage done by the extensive amount of chakra in their bodies. (Add in metabolize that is through the roof and voila you have a Konaga.) Rp Sample: Kameshi walked along the road she had no intention of drawing any attention nor accepting any should it be given, she was an odd sight but hardly one that garnered a deeper look. She was dressed from head to toe in black veils each thin enough to hardly be a barrier against the faintest of winds but layered as they were they gave her full protection from the sun, and weighed no more then light, which was also kept from her skin by they many layers. From outside those layer she could have been anyone, an ancient crone or a maiden barely out of childhood, the layer obscured any outline and the longest of the veils brushed the ground enough so that not even her petite slippered feet touched the ground. But if one was very careful as they took in her appearance they would notice minute facts that might help with identifying the person beneath the veils. The figure never jerked so their gait must be smooth with implied both grace and youth, she was petite but the veils hung evenly about her which suggested she stood straight as she walked and something held them ever so slightly away from her so they did not brush her skin. Beneath the veils was a woman of exotic beauty, pale skin that often hid from the terribly summer sun that shone hot even in the dead of winter here in the land of Wind, around Sunagakure. Hair the color of pinkish-amethysts with lighter bangs from sun bleaching through the thinner veils over her eyes, her eyes were a soft purple like lilacs in fresh bloom. Her body was curves delightfully that would tease any heart into lust so intense it might almost be called love at first sight. Her ears were faintly pointed and studded with gold piercings, for someone who dressed so modestly on the outside her inner outfit was far less presentable a combination of slashes of black silk just long enough to cover what was necessary and no more, hold bangles accents and drew the attention away from the scanty clothing as much as mere ornaments could. The outfit was all that remained from her days as a dancer, back when she was just learning there had been so much pain, not just moving but the brush of every cloth against her skin had been enough to make her wish to take a knife and peel off her skin. Time has softened that sensitivity and now she hardly even felt it but her preference for such clothing had no faded they were memories of a much happier childhood. The veils simply saved her the inevitable stares and the constant beat of the too hot sun. "Kameshi Helia?" A man said planting himself in front of her path. She retreated to avoid running into him, something else she carried with her from her earlier days an aversion to being touched. She looked up at the man and she was sure she didn't know him so she tried to move around but he placed himself back directly in front of her and repeated her name, "Are you Kameshi Helia?" He asked again, more impatiently this time. She jerked away as he reached out to her again, and while he missed her arm he managed to grab a fist full of her veils and pull them away. His eyes widened as they unashamedly took in her beautifully toned dancer's body, and he nodded as if this confirmed something he had been told, "So you are her..." He said his gaze become speculative, "I wonder if he wouldn't mind if I..." he paused and then looked her back over. "Kameshi Helia, the dancer known as Yami Hakujou, we have come to take you to Daimiyo Ikouzu." He reached out again as if to touch her and she swiped at him, her long nails razor sharp and hard as steel from the coating she put on them to keep them that way. "Touch me and I will kill you." Kameshi hissed her eyes burning, a year she had been out of the business of and still she was sought wherever she went with no such peace, she had taken on her mother's title having come of age just as her mother was getting too old for dance. The transition had been seamless, one dancer for another, and behind the veils they had often hidden the soft lines around her mother's eyes that showed her age. Kameshi has been fully grown by then but always dressed in the veils that hid her from sight and it was simply a matter of trading her mother her veils and dancing as she had learned from a young age. But her mother had wanted more for her, and when she laid dying she had handed Kameshi directions that brought her to the gates of the village she would one day call home. The Kazekage had allowed her to stay and even old as she was she had joined the Academy and learned quickly; her body was already conditioned to peak performance, and took readily to training. But there were still those who didn't understand the Yami Hakujou was dead, and Kameshi was living her own life now. [1]The man reached again she spun throwing out her kick and adding the force of the techniques she had been taught as a child, the force was enough to send the man flying back since he wasn't well braced. [/1]Three more men Kameshi has noted before came hurrying over as their comrade flew back from what they had thought would be an easy catch and retrieval. They circled around her slowly and she glanced down at the veils on the ground, well made silk and for all they were light and airy the weave was tight. She moved cautiously over to them and hooked her foot under neath so when one man signaled his readiness but the other was still unready she kicked the silks in the air. [2]In the moment the silks had been torn from the air and thrown on the men's faces and she was behind one the knots already in the silk. [/2] Silk had been the strangulation chord of choice for nobles long ago while commoners sufficed with rope, and thankfully the silk she preferred for it's lightness and coolness was also strong enough for such barbarities as well. The man fell the chord knotted too tight for him to breathe and too well for him to undo it before he would die. The others were trapped under their silks and trying to sense her before they moved recklessly to remove the veils and that was as she had hoped. That left one, with broken ribs and possible internal bleeding dying off to the side, another soon to be dead and only two more. But the strain on her body was growing and she was not sure how much longer she could continue to fight before her body gave out. Seeing his two fallen companions the larger of the two remaining started gathering chakra to his hands she sighed defeated for a moment, there was no way they were back down, and even if it meant destroying their target they intended to get revenge for their friends if the other standing guard before the one gathering chakra was any indication. [3]She stepped back and calmed herself, as they watched her carefully and it was only when the giant fireball was already on it's way to her she executed a move from one of her dances catching the fire ball the jutsu on her hands already active and with a graceful flip throwing the ball back to the ones who had sent it to her. [/3] The men died in screams as the fire consumed them dead with their own fire but she held no regrets in the world of the shinobi it was kill or be killed and she had no desire to die today. She gathered back up her few veils that were still usable and managed to cover her upper body and down to her knees leaving shapely calved and delicate feet revealed as she made her way to the nearest refuge to heal and recover from this ordeal before heading home. Quote: [1]• (E) - Chakra Augmentation: The most basic form of Konaga augmentation, this technique employs the use of Bloodline Chakra in the user's limbs, specifically to increase the power behind an attack by 3-7 fold (3 at Genin, 4 at Chuunin, 5 at Jounin and Special Jounin, and 7 at Sannin/Kage). The force behind these attacks is explosive, exploding outward on contact as the violent chakra is released in a raw, uncontrolled outburst of power.
[2]• (A) - Chakra Shift: The Chakra Shift (often abbreviated to 'Shift') is a technique of high speed movement developed by the Konaga clan which surpasses almost all body flicker and fast movement techniques in sheer speed, the the user pays a high price. Utilizing their bloodline ability, a Konaga clan member is able to activate the chakra that saturates their muscles cells instantaneously, pushing them into a hyperactive state.
This gives the clan member an incredibly fast burst of speed over a 150 ft radius from their current position. this technique is in fact so fast, that not only does the user seemingly disappear only to reappear in a selected location in less then the blink of an eye, but the user actually sees the world as if it's moving in slow motion, allowing them to dodge an attack with this technique, or giving them time to plan an attack and implement it the second they arrive at their selected location.
Using this technique however takes a devastating toll on a clan member's body. One activation of the chakra shift counts as an augmentation for all 4 limbs and if used more then twice in the same battle runs the risk of internal injury, causing the user to spit up blood and increasing the risk of losing control and pushing themselves into a 'Raging Spirit' fit.
[3]• (S) - Chakra Deflection: When a Konaga member reaches the highest levels of power , their understanding of chakra reaches a new level as they begin to understand it's true nature. When analyzing the nature of most techniques, chakra is at it's core... and if it can be generated and controlled to create an effect, it can be collected, and neutralized... or redirected. At the cost of using hand seal techniques for a post, a Konaga clan member is able to hold their hand out, stretching their own chakra out towards incoming energy, overwhelming and consuming it. The technique at this point, can either be neutralized, or redirected back outwards. This technique requires an amount of chakra equal to 1 rank above the technique it is absorbing, and can only absorb energy effects.
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Jan 12, 2012 8:21 am
As amazing as this sample would make for a backstory, it doesn't really touch on the bloodline itself enough to really show how much you know about it.
Passing on that for the moment though, let's talk about the battle.
A Konaga feels pain, constantly. They get used to it, but it never dulls, and they never stop feeling it. It can only ever get worse. This includes during battle. Cobra, the creator of the bloodline, was known for explicitly mentioning the pain at least once in every post, no matter what he was doing. Even in battle he often had his character go through crippling pain, usually associated with what comes next, the techniques.
The first technique you used was a simple augmentation. For the Konaga, even that much sends pain shooting through the limb used. Not enough to cripple them, but enough to give them pause.
Next you used Chakra Shift, one activation of which counts for an augmentation on all body parts.
And the third was Deflection, which explicitly mentions that it causes extreme pain when it's used. It also states that it disables the hand used momentarily, and uses up two augmentations.
So, your RPC should be suffering from the chakra burns on her entire body, slightly worse on the kicking leg and deflecting arm, as well as that hand being useless.
More so than the lead in or the fighting, the importance of understanding this clan lies in the aftermath, which you didn't even touch on.
Sorry, but this is denied. Next time cut down on the lead in a bit, and focus more on the clan attributes themselves. That's what we need to see.
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Posted: Thu Jan 12, 2012 1:58 pm
My intention in the extended beginning was to show how it had shaped her life up until this point, how it effected her dress, her habits and her life etc etc. Would it be acceptable to go back in and edit, or must I remake an entirely new sample?
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Posted: Thu Jan 12, 2012 2:41 pm
Reservoir of Memory My intention in the extended beginning was to show how it had shaped her life up until this point, how it effected her dress, her habits and her life etc etc. Would it be acceptable to go back in and edit, or must I remake an entirely new sample? I believe I speak for all of us when I say that I love to see all that character development, that's what makes rp-ing so much fun, and I highly recommend you keep that up in the RP itself, but when giving an rp sample the only thing we really need to know is that you understand the bloodline well enough not to abuse it. The fact that you picked one of the strongest bloodlines in the game is going to make the application process all the harder. You may simply edit your application, but if you could re-post it, that would be great.
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Posted: Thu Jan 12, 2012 8:18 pm
Lance Fulgurant Reservoir of Memory My intention in the extended beginning was to show how it had shaped her life up until this point, how it effected her dress, her habits and her life etc etc. Would it be acceptable to go back in and edit, or must I remake an entirely new sample? I believe I speak for all of us when I say that I love to see all that character development, that's what makes rp-ing so much fun, and I highly recommend you keep that up in the RP itself, but when giving an rp sample the only thing we really need to know is that you understand the bloodline well enough not to abuse it. The fact that you picked one of the strongest bloodlines in the game is going to make the application process all the harder. You may simply edit your application, but if you could re-post it, that would be great. I would be more then happy to, thank you.
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Posted: Mon Jan 16, 2012 2:05 pm
Rpc Name:Manny
Village:Suna
Rank:A/S
Bloodline or Clan applied for:Uchiha
What you know about the clan/bl: The Uchiha Clan opens up two things to my Rpc...
One: The Uchiha Clan jutsu, which are mostly fire based but have some genjutsu, and the Mangekyo(Not that they will be used by me any time soon.)
Two: Being the Doujutsu the Sharingan, at stage one this will allow me to see movements with more definition than most nine my rank, along with helping me see through minor genjutsu
The second stage will allow me to copy jutsu, and other movements (I have gone over the guide lines provided in the clan and will go over them from time to time to make sure I am not over doing the copy jutsu ability.) Stage two also comes with a higher range of vision, and the ability to see Chakra colors.
At Stage Three I can see damn near EVERYTHING that happens,small details become very clear and can resist genjutsu up to my own rank and below (Up to A rank).
I also under stand the rank up system for the bloodline (As shortly demonstrated below.), and will not count simple training posts to my Sharingan progression.
Rp Sample:
{In this application Manny will be a A/S and the teacher person will be of a undecided higher rank, with that said I hope I can show higher level, and lower level abilities of this clan.}
Walking into the Dojo Manny took off his sleeping hat, put it on a rake and then walked into the center wearing grey, loose pajamas. Closing his already half close, soft blue eyes he took a deep breath. When he re opened his eyes they were red, and on his left eye was one tomo, feeling the chakra drain from his Sharingan. Suddenly from the shadows of the dojo shuriken flew toward him, seeing each one, he dictated there paths and moved accordingly. First he spun to the left, then ducked down, and rolled back to the right, the projectiles moving only a few inches from his flesh. Finishing out his roll into a crouch his teacher appeared, already using his stage three Sharingan and looking down at him,
With a yawn Manny spoke to his teacher saying "Thought I was training alone today..." His tired bored voice was sure to irritate his teacher who responded in a harsh voice "Yes, because you would train so hard on you own." With a shrug Manny started to say something as his teacher dash forward and through a straight right jab Manny saw it and stepped back dodging it, but his teach turned quickly, reaching his leg around arching it and slamming it into the back of Manny's head. As his forehead slammed into the floor board he thought "Damn, I saw it, but couldn't move... he is going to start bitching now." and as if on Q the teacher started ranting and complaining about how slow Manny was. Reaching into his robe Manny grabbed a Shuriken and with a lazy throw tossed a couple at his unguarded teacher. When the projectiles connected with the back of the man it burst into a puff of smoke and the real teacher stepped out and said "Attacking you sensai when his back is tuned! How DA-" I knew it was a shadow clone..." With a fluster and angry face cast a fear genjutsu to grab a hold of Manny.
Busting through the door was his mother, with Lizard his little pet in her hands "Manny! Manny! Lizard is sick!" and as a reaction Manny jumped up and ran toward her, but as he did he noticed small things, little waved in the back round, and details about his pet that were off. "d**k" he said aloud before Kaiing out of the genjutsu "How much longer are we gonna train?" but when he turned around his teacher was gone and with a sigh he started looking around the room into the shadows, looking harder, and harder he could not find anything until suddenly his teacher burst forth again and started with a flurry of blurry blows. Dodging, and trying to block Manny didn't have time to throw his own punch's he barley kept up with the attack, but when his teacher spun and kicked him he flew back and slammed into a wall. Bouncing off and landing on his face he fought his was back to his feet only to see a fire ball be flung at him, so quickly he rolled, then another, fire ball, and then a third which he barley escaped with a scorch mark on his pajama leg. Landing with a third he looked up at his teacher with anger, and as he did so, and the heat of this fight built in him his left eye swirled and his second tomo appeared and he watched his teacher seeing him create a set of seals, seeing him inhale, and then breath forth flames and saw the details in the fire as it was created. So he moved, fast once his teachers vision was blocked by the flames, and slid up close to his right copied his teachers hand seals, Manny inhaled, and then breathed forth flames, which turned into a fire ball which engulfed his teacher.
When the justsu was done, and the flames were gone Manny's eyes turned blue and he saw nothing, no teacher, then the chakra drain hit him and he fell to his knee's and passed out. Walking up behind him was the teacher patting away flames from his right shoulder, Manny's plan almost worked but he moved a bit to soon, the fire ball was not large enough to cover Manny completely, but the sensai never expected him to copy the jutsu. So he deactivated his doujutsu walked toward the door as the small flames in the room started to dwindle away. He took his students hat off the rake and through it toward his students sleeping body, and then left letting the boy sleep.
Phoenix fire ball and great fireball jutsu.
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Posted: Tue Jan 17, 2012 1:58 pm
The sample was greatly done, encompassing most of the attributes of the sharingan. But, the sample is only half of the application. The section in which you have to place the information of the clan is just as important. I know you're an experienced RPer and know that you know very well how the Uchiha Clan works Havik, but to avoid bias, please add more information.
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Posted: Wed Jan 18, 2012 10:46 pm
iAkura-kun The sample was greatly done, encompassing most of the attributes of the sharingan. But, the sample is only half of the application. The section in which you have to place the information of the clan is just as important. I know you're an experienced RPer and know that you know very well how the Uchiha Clan works Havik, but to avoid bias, please add more information.
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Posted: Thu Jan 19, 2012 1:16 pm
-o-Havik-o- iAkura-kun The sample was greatly done, encompassing most of the attributes of the sharingan. But, the sample is only half of the application. The section in which you have to place the information of the clan is just as important. I know you're an experienced RPer and know that you know very well how the Uchiha Clan works Havik, but to avoid bias, please add more information.
Much better; approved and sorry for making you edit.
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Posted: Thu Jan 19, 2012 1:49 pm
iAkura-kun -o-Havik-o- iAkura-kun The sample was greatly done, encompassing most of the attributes of the sharingan. But, the sample is only half of the application. The section in which you have to place the information of the clan is just as important. I know you're an experienced RPer and know that you know very well how the Uchiha Clan works Havik, but to avoid bias, please add more information. Much better; approved and sorry for making you edit.
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Posted: Thu Jan 19, 2012 2:17 pm
-o-Havik-o- iAkura-kun -o-Havik-o- iAkura-kun The sample was greatly done, encompassing most of the attributes of the sharingan. But, the sample is only half of the application. The section in which you have to place the information of the clan is just as important. I know you're an experienced RPer and know that you know very well how the Uchiha Clan works Havik, but to avoid bias, please add more information. Much better; approved and sorry for making you edit.
Concidering how he doesn't log on as much, HInote can also check them.
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Posted: Thu Jan 19, 2012 2:49 pm
iAkura-kun -o-Havik-o- iAkura-kun -o-Havik-o- iAkura-kun The sample was greatly done, encompassing most of the attributes of the sharingan. But, the sample is only half of the application. The section in which you have to place the information of the clan is just as important. I know you're an experienced RPer and know that you know very well how the Uchiha Clan works Havik, but to avoid bias, please add more information. Much better; approved and sorry for making you edit.
Concidering how he doesn't log on as much, HInote can also check them.
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Posted: Sun Jan 22, 2012 3:07 pm
Rpc Name: Haruka Uchiha [if approved naturally]
Village: Konoha or Suna, whichever needs more. I like to keep things canon, so if I get Uchiha, my first choice will be Konoha
Rank: Academy Student
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Sharingan
What you know about the clan/bl:
The Sharingan is native to the Uchiha Clan, a group of renowned Katon specialists, from Konohagakure. The eye however does no appear in every clan member, and may only be unlocked through a stressful situation. Wielders of the Sharingan have a naturally heightened perception when their eyes are activated. At higher levels, the wielder can imitate and learn jutsu just by tracking the caster's movements and chakra patterns. In addition, Sharingan wielders can see through genjutsu, allowing them to break easier. Under certain conditions, the Sharingan will evolve into the Mangekyou Sharingan, which gives the wielder far greater powers and allows access to the Sharingan's jutsu. This new eye is not without fault though. The more it is used, the further the wielder's sight degrades. This sight reduction can be reversed through obtaining an Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan by fusing their eyes with the Mangekyou of another Sharingan. In this state, the sharingan is at its peak. The most subtle movements are noticeable as if they were pronounced gestures, genjutsu is practically useless, and unimaginable power is but an arms reach away.
Rp Sample:
The sickening sound of cracking bone and twisting meat sounded out through the stadium as the body of a young girl was thrown into the far side wall. That body belonged to the young Haruka Uchiha, a stubborn, headstrong genin who had foolishly challenged Hazumu, one of the top genin from her graduating class, to a challenge. Using a combination of strength and speed, the Taijutsu specialist was making short work of the Uchiha girl, having just delivered a powerful kick to Haruka's mid section. Coughing up a small amount of blood, she was able to regain her footing. She eyed Hazumu from across the stadium, a confident, almost arrogant grin growing on her face. Slowly, Haruka shut her eyes and took in a deep breath. As she exhaled, she opened her eyes once again to reveal she had finally unlocked her Sharingan. Finally, she'd be able to turn the tides on her opponent, now being able to see her prepare to use her taijutsu.
With a slight movement, Haruka moved her hand into her kunai pouch, taking a kunai in hand, but also looping a line of nearly invisible wire through the end. With an exaggerated throw Haruka would throw the kunai, leaving a trail of wiring as Hazumu dodged it. Haruka would repeat this process many times over and over until an invisible web lay in wait for the taijutsu specialist. Each move and dodge Hazumu made was like slow motion to Haruka with every minor twitch visible as though it was on full display. Needless to say, her sharingan had picked quite the opportune time to kick in. Over the next few minutes, Haruka would dodge and weave around many swift flying kicks and punches as she tried to get her opponent into the center of her trap. It was a miracle she hadn't spotted the wire so far, or accidentally tripped it for that. With 2 more kicks, the trap was sprung. The kunai dislodged themselves from the walls and ground they were stuck in and the pressure from pulling on the wires caused the web to coil around Hazumu, leaving her helpless. The first thing she'd notice was a single wire leading to Haruka's hands - Ryuuka no Jutsu! - she'd shout, releasing a long, powerful blast of flames down the wire.
Judging from the heat of the flames and the raw power of the attack, Haruka assumed that her target was surely finished. As sudden pain in her chest and the sound of cracking ribs proved her wrong. She looked to her left and saw a sudden blur zip past. This couldn't be right, her eyes had picked up all of Hazumu's movements up to this point, and even more important, how'd she escape the trap? As Haruka tumbled to the ground, she looked over at where her attack had hit; there was a large rock and the ashes of the wires used. Hazumu had used the substitution jutsu to escape, and in addition, she had her own hidden abilities; Hazumu could open the first of the 8 gates, boosting her speed beyond that of Hikari's raw sharingan could track. 3 more powerful hits would land on Haruka's body, breaking both her arms and a leg, before the proctor would jump in and stop the fight. Within seconds, a team of medical ninja rushed in and recovered Haruka, taking her to the ward to recover, while her opponent moved on to the next round.
[sorry it's not the 4 paragraphs you asked for, but I did show weaknesses, a jutsu I could use at my level, and the strengths.]
Jutsu used -
Ryuuka no Jutsu - Dragon Fire Jutsu
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Posted: Wed Feb 01, 2012 9:03 am
Snuffins Rpc Name: Haruka Uchiha [if approved naturally] Village: Konoha or Suna, whichever needs more. I like to keep things canon, so if I get Uchiha, my first choice will be Konoha Rank: Academy Student Bloodline or Clan applied for: Sharingan What you know about the clan/bl: The Sharingan is native to the Uchiha Clan, a group of renowned Katon specialists, from Konohagakure. The eye however does no appear in every clan member, and may only be unlocked through a stressful situation. Wielders of the Sharingan have a naturally heightened perception when their eyes are activated. At higher levels, the wielder can imitate and learn jutsu just by tracking the caster's movements and chakra patterns. In addition, Sharingan wielders can see through genjutsu, allowing them to break easier. Under certain conditions, the Sharingan will evolve into the Mangekyou Sharingan, which gives the wielder far greater powers and allows access to the Sharingan's jutsu. This new eye is not without fault though. The more it is used, the further the wielder's sight degrades. This sight reduction can be reversed through obtaining an Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan by fusing their eyes with the Mangekyou of another Sharingan. In this state, the sharingan is at its peak. The most subtle movements are noticeable as if they were pronounced gestures, genjutsu is practically useless, and unimaginable power is but an arms reach away. Rp Sample:The sickening sound of cracking bone and twisting meat sounded out through the stadium as the body of a young girl was thrown into the far side wall. That body belonged to the young Haruka Uchiha, a stubborn, headstrong genin who had foolishly challenged Hazumu, one of the top genin from her graduating class, to a challenge. Using a combination of strength and speed, the Taijutsu specialist was making short work of the Uchiha girl, having just delivered a powerful kick to Haruka's mid section. Coughing up a small amount of blood, she was able to regain her footing. She eyed Hazumu from across the stadium, a confident, almost arrogant grin growing on her face. Slowly, Haruka shut her eyes and took in a deep breath. As she exhaled, she opened her eyes once again to reveal she had finally unlocked her Sharingan. Finally, she'd be able to turn the tides on her opponent, now being able to see her prepare to use her taijutsu. With a slight movement, Haruka moved her hand into her kunai pouch, taking a kunai in hand, but also looping a line of nearly invisible wire through the end. With an exaggerated throw Haruka would throw the kunai, leaving a trail of wiring as Hazumu dodged it. Haruka would repeat this process many times over and over until an invisible web lay in wait for the taijutsu specialist. Each move and dodge Hazumu made was like slow motion to Haruka with every minor twitch visible as though it was on full display. Needless to say, her sharingan had picked quite the opportune time to kick in. Over the next few minutes, Haruka would dodge and weave around many swift flying kicks and punches as she tried to get her opponent into the center of her trap. It was a miracle she hadn't spotted the wire so far, or accidentally tripped it for that. With 2 more kicks, the trap was sprung. The kunai dislodged themselves from the walls and ground they were stuck in and the pressure from pulling on the wires caused the web to coil around Hazumu, leaving her helpless. The first thing she'd notice was a single wire leading to Haruka's hands - Ryuuka no Jutsu! - she'd shout, releasing a long, powerful blast of flames down the wire. Judging from the heat of the flames and the raw power of the attack, Haruka assumed that her target was surely finished. As sudden pain in her chest and the sound of cracking ribs proved her wrong. She looked to her left and saw a sudden blur zip past. This couldn't be right, her eyes had picked up all of Hazumu's movements up to this point, and even more important, how'd she escape the trap? As Haruka tumbled to the ground, she looked over at where her attack had hit; there was a large rock and the ashes of the wires used. Hazumu had used the substitution jutsu to escape, and in addition, she had her own hidden abilities; Hazumu could open the first of the 8 gates, boosting her speed beyond that of Hikari's raw sharingan could track. 3 more powerful hits would land on Haruka's body, breaking both her arms and a leg, before the proctor would jump in and stop the fight. Within seconds, a team of medical ninja rushed in and recovered Haruka, taking her to the ward to recover, while her opponent moved on to the next round. [sorry it's not the 4 paragraphs you asked for, but I did show weaknesses, a jutsu I could use at my level, and the strengths.] Jutsu used - Ryuuka no Jutsu - Dragon Fire Jutsu - Hey, uber sorry for the wait but here is what I've got. - First off, interesting post! It is rather refreshing to see a post in which the main character actually loses. ^-^ Now... first off... this is not to say you aren't being approved but, this is what I'd like to see more. - Awakening of the Sharingan: From my perspective, it would seem that Haruka has already had the Sharingan and was simply moving into the next tomoe. Of course this isn't true based on your post, but... when it comes to the actual awakening of the technique, I'd like to see a more stressful situation. This one was indeed harsh, but I wouldn't necessarily say it was at the level that one would awaken their Sharingan. - One tomoe: Um, I don't necessarily know what Haruka's stats are, but it seems the person she is fighting is rather fast; especially being a Taijutsu user. Now I know my re-vision ( Which is soon to come out :3 ) isn't out yet, but I don't really know just yet if she would have complete view of the other girl. More so.. half to less than half of perception. That would mostly got to the second tomoe when/should Haruka unlock it. ^-^ - Edit those things I described and I'll look it over again. / Also, I'd love to have you in my village ( Konoha ) but that is mostly for Greg. to decide when your profile goes through being accepted.
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