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IN THE NAME OF THE MOON! WRITING COMPETITION?
Name: Koorie Shizuku
Nicknames: Kor (used by her older brother); Ice Queen
Age: 17
Birthday: September 23rd
Sign: Libra
Blood Type: O+
Fav. Food: Sushi, strawberries in chocolate, apples, pastries,
Hated Food: Broccoli, Cauliflower, and a severe allergy to coconut
School: Crystal Academy
Hobbies: Singing, learning new instruments, and writing music; also likes to train in jujitsu and archery
Gemstone: Peridot
Virtues:
Emotionless – Koorie is incredibly good at keeping her emotions tucked away. This helps her in being able to not only to think clearly, but to protect herself from becoming hurt. The way she lets out her true thoughts and emotions is through her music.
Athletic- Even though she doesn’t work well with others, Koorie is very into exercise; she trains almost everyday at a local dojo in jujitsu, and she has a punching bag suspended in her room for at-home training. She enjoys going running as well.
Flaws:
Lack of Trust- Koorie trusts no one but herself. Generally she avoids group projects in school, and when it’s mandatory to work in a group, she generally covers more than her share. She doesn’t like giving others a chance to show if they’re trustworthy; she simply automatically assumes the worst of everyone.
Mental Problems- While she dislikes people in general, Koorie has an unmistakable hate of men coming from her childhood past. In short, her brother when mentally insane when she was 8 and killed her parents, attempted to kill her, and then killed himself. The aftermath left her in the hospital for nearly 5 years. This incident also arouse several other mental problems that occasionally surface.
Injury- Physically, she suffers from moderate to searing pain in her heart area where she sustained injury from her brother’s attack. It’s a pain that the doctors claim is a mental problem, and it constantly turns on and off like a light switch.
Physical Description:
(half-shot of Koorie)
Hair: Length is to the middle of her back, it’s curled in waves, and the color is a blue-green-blue color.
Eyes: Bright red, tend to be on the narrow side
Face: Her expression is normally emotionless and calm. She hardly ever smiles
Body: Rather curvy, she’s well endowed in the chest area. She has a scar over her heart from a child-hood incident that resulted in surgery there
Fashion: She generally wears shorts and either a tee-shirt or a loose tanktop of some sort, when she’s not wearing her school uniform. She does her best to try to bind down her chest so it’s not as ‘in the way’
THE STORY ENTRY
Koorie walked home in the silence of night alone; she was used to it, as she made this trek every day from school. Her bag was casually slung over her shoulder, and her long, curled hair was pulled up into a pony tail to keep it out of her face. There was something strange in the air though, and it kept her on her guard; she’d heard the news reports about what could be terrorist attacks on common civilians, and she knew she was a prime target since she was walking alone.
As she passed a darkened alleyway, she could hear something bizarre at the far end; the sounds of shouts, curses, and other forms of confrontation. Remembering the reward the police had put out for information, she began slowly making her way through the alleyway, her camera on her phone ready. As she neared the end, she hid behind a dumpster, taking in quickly what she saw. It certainly was a strange site, seeing these sailor-clothed people seemingly glowing with energy, and there were three of them, and then there was the fourth person, who was clothed in quite a different manor.
She watched as the three suddenly shouted out attacks, and the area lit up brilliantly as the dazzling and strange attacks were sent flying at the singled out fourth person, who proceeded to retaliate back with his own attacks.
The flash from her camera seemed to go completely unnoticed as the fight continued on, and after Koorie was sure she had enough evidence of what had just happened, she slowly stood up and backed out of the alleyway in hopes of leaving without attracting their attention.
“What… was that….” She muttered quietly to herself, flipping through the images. There was no way that these people were normal, or even human for that matter. Those beautiful attacks that were clearly dangerous to receive were unexplainable as to where they came from. “There’s no place for a weapon to be hidden….” She murmured, looking at a close of up the sailor uniforms. “This requires a new look into the matter….”
Looking around and making sure that no one was around to hear her, she then saved the pictures and pocketed her phone, resuming her walk home from school.
Name: Koorie Shizuku
Nicknames: Kor (used by her older brother); Ice Queen
Age: 17
Birthday: September 23rd
Sign: Libra
Blood Type: O+
Fav. Food: Sushi, strawberries in chocolate, apples, pastries,
Hated Food: Broccoli, Cauliflower, and a severe allergy to coconut
School: Crystal Academy
Hobbies: Singing, learning new instruments, and writing music; also likes to train in jujitsu and archery
Gemstone: Peridot
Virtues:
Emotionless – Koorie is incredibly good at keeping her emotions tucked away. This helps her in being able to not only to think clearly, but to protect herself from becoming hurt. The way she lets out her true thoughts and emotions is through her music.
Athletic- Even though she doesn’t work well with others, Koorie is very into exercise; she trains almost everyday at a local dojo in jujitsu, and she has a punching bag suspended in her room for at-home training. She enjoys going running as well.
Flaws:
Lack of Trust- Koorie trusts no one but herself. Generally she avoids group projects in school, and when it’s mandatory to work in a group, she generally covers more than her share. She doesn’t like giving others a chance to show if they’re trustworthy; she simply automatically assumes the worst of everyone.
Mental Problems- While she dislikes people in general, Koorie has an unmistakable hate of men coming from her childhood past. In short, her brother when mentally insane when she was 8 and killed her parents, attempted to kill her, and then killed himself. The aftermath left her in the hospital for nearly 5 years. This incident also arouse several other mental problems that occasionally surface.
Injury- Physically, she suffers from moderate to searing pain in her heart area where she sustained injury from her brother’s attack. It’s a pain that the doctors claim is a mental problem, and it constantly turns on and off like a light switch.
Physical Description:
(half-shot of Koorie)
Hair: Length is to the middle of her back, it’s curled in waves, and the color is a blue-green-blue color.
Eyes: Bright red, tend to be on the narrow side
Face: Her expression is normally emotionless and calm. She hardly ever smiles
Body: Rather curvy, she’s well endowed in the chest area. She has a scar over her heart from a child-hood incident that resulted in surgery there
Fashion: She generally wears shorts and either a tee-shirt or a loose tanktop of some sort, when she’s not wearing her school uniform. She does her best to try to bind down her chest so it’s not as ‘in the way’
THE STORY ENTRY
Koorie walked home in the silence of night alone; she was used to it, as she made this trek every day from school. Her bag was casually slung over her shoulder, and her long, curled hair was pulled up into a pony tail to keep it out of her face. There was something strange in the air though, and it kept her on her guard; she’d heard the news reports about what could be terrorist attacks on common civilians, and she knew she was a prime target since she was walking alone.
As she passed a darkened alleyway, she could hear something bizarre at the far end; the sounds of shouts, curses, and other forms of confrontation. Remembering the reward the police had put out for information, she began slowly making her way through the alleyway, her camera on her phone ready. As she neared the end, she hid behind a dumpster, taking in quickly what she saw. It certainly was a strange site, seeing these sailor-clothed people seemingly glowing with energy, and there were three of them, and then there was the fourth person, who was clothed in quite a different manor.
She watched as the three suddenly shouted out attacks, and the area lit up brilliantly as the dazzling and strange attacks were sent flying at the singled out fourth person, who proceeded to retaliate back with his own attacks.
The flash from her camera seemed to go completely unnoticed as the fight continued on, and after Koorie was sure she had enough evidence of what had just happened, she slowly stood up and backed out of the alleyway in hopes of leaving without attracting their attention.
“What… was that….” She muttered quietly to herself, flipping through the images. There was no way that these people were normal, or even human for that matter. Those beautiful attacks that were clearly dangerous to receive were unexplainable as to where they came from. “There’s no place for a weapon to be hidden….” She murmured, looking at a close of up the sailor uniforms. “This requires a new look into the matter….”
Looking around and making sure that no one was around to hear her, she then saved the pictures and pocketed her phone, resuming her walk home from school.