emiryj
full scan please!!!!! ^___^
Full scan it is.
So for a first impression I can already say I like how you managed to set up the scenery for the avi, e.g. background, clouds, the moon. It's very nice! The animals to your right also look fantastic to your type of avi. I don't have a name to give what your avi is called though, usually such is seen in deep forest, where deers & rabbits surrounds the woman holding butterflies in her hand.
Either way, Back -> top -> bottom
So for the back e.g. background, I can say it's a pretty nice choice, and unusual as this is the first time I have actually seen it. I went to check it out on MP and found out it had no Moon, so I realized you clashed the moon onto the BG to spice it even further up, Kudos for that! It fits really well, and its a creative use of item.
So for the add-ons around your avi, we got a Deer bear-ish animals, butterflies. They send off a nature/Goddess vibe. I dunno bout' you. But I think It describes your avi really well, and those animals are sure a nice add on, as your avi uses few colour variety, the animals warm colours can for sure compensate for such. It's a nice addition.
Now for the avi itself- I like the hair and how it tangles around the torso area. By doing so you don't have to add detail items to the torso area, nor any "filling" torso equipment, as the hair can compensate for such.
Face: Your face seems to be the weakest point on your avi imo. But that may just be me, but you may often hear people complain about the "No-mouth" situation. Usually no-mouth looks bad on very many avi's some can succesfully do it though if they got the right "theme/setting" for it. But your's benefits more from a mouth, as having no mouth really removes lots of expression/emotion/personality from the avi itself. Apart from that, I really like the eyes because they have a nice size, shape and eye colour. (Grey) lel
Torso+Leg: Not much to say here, as you are wearing a dress which covers up everything from torso-legging especially because you are sitting down, I can't see a lot more than what is to be seen. But It's a nice dress, and fits your overall look well. So no problems here for me.
Overall verdict: The avi itself feels a tad plain, but it's hard to add "detail" items, since you are using some items which limits everything else, e.g. the long dress. But it looks nice nonetheless I wouldn't change it. As I mentioned, the only problem with your avi Is the mouth for me. Apart from that I'm a fan of everything else, Good job!
Suggestions
Try the basic mouths first, if not try to find a happy or poker face expression. That may fit really well on your avi!
Hope this helped!
-Azu