SilverFalco
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I'd love a full scan please :]
Going from bottom off: - Seeing your shoes it seems to me that their purpose is to make a scenery of "Eugh! Its cold"
Leg part: - I see some sort of half skirt in red, and then some green pants behind. It does fit with your shoes somehow, because its "thick" clothing if you are going for the cold of course.
On your back: - you got some fur-ish material. again, it feels like you are going out for a hike in a snowy terrain! although it's quite big compared to your character.
Head area: - Around your neck you are wearing a red bandana scarf, which covers the neck area. It fits well for you imo.
face - Your face itself has no problems with the expression. For this situation it doesn't stand out.
Hair - Your hair has the burning red colour, which is a strong colour, which is covered up by 3 different horns. For me it feels like I lose the connection to the hair, as the horns takes away it all.
Around you I see a campfire, surrounded by clouds on ground height. Better keep the cold away! Not bad synergy. And backmost is the moon, shinin' giving a nightly atmospherá.
Overall verdict: Your avi has very many different colours. Around the middle body part it feels extremely clustered, that I have a hard time finding out what's around your middle leg - top torso part are made of. The cape/cloak behind you is a tad too big for my taste. As for your head part, I spot a third horn from your left shoulder, in combination with 2 horns from your head already. It's way too much with 3 horns, due to them looking different. Having another different colour compared to the rest of the avi which already contains many colours. From my point of view you avi is more dressed up for even colder terrain. The use of your current background, and scenery is fine. A campfire in the middle of the night with clouds sorrounding you is very cool set-up. But i feel you could make it even better! mainly because of your "Brrrr, better keep it warm" look.
Suggestions-
Swap out current background and add one of those underneath.
Background:
Daughter of snows, Holiday wintry landscape, Warzones (The snowy one), Traveler of the Tundra or other backgrounds with snow, but i haven't been able to find the others yet.
Add the astra underneath for alot more spice on the snow background.
Astra: Snowy Winter
Remove your current cape which is more cream-ish coloured, replace it with
Assassin's guise
Perhaps try
Beyond crimson in combination with Assassin's guise without your cape.
Removal of the horns, and give your character a
tomahawk as if he was hunting in the wilds.
If Assassin's guise isn't working well on your avi, due to it not using black colouring. try this
Accessorized Mauling
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That's what i could think of so far for your avi. It's hard putting suggestions, as your avi points very many different roads of which "look" to go for, since you have many mixed items. For the moment you look like an adventurer.
Tell me what you think
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