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Yes. RWARGH THIS MEANS WAR		63.3%	[ 19 ]
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Post: 96840651_7711 created on Thu, 09 Jul 2015 23:27:10 +0000
Posted: Thu, 09 Jul 2015 23:27:10 +0000

Fine Anon.
Who wants to war?

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Post: 96840651_7712 created on Thu, 09 Jul 2015 23:28:06 +0000
Posted: Thu, 09 Jul 2015 23:28:06 +0000

I'll war.

Also. Time for the thread to answer a question for me. If you were writing a verse or two about someone's beauty. What would you focus on?

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Post: 96840651_7713 created on Thu, 09 Jul 2015 23:34:46 +0000
Posted: Thu, 09 Jul 2015 23:34:46 +0000

Whimsi

that depends on the writers definition of beautiful.

I'd write about their energies, how they feel beautiful and radiate warmth and love.

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Post: 96840651_7714 created on Thu, 09 Jul 2015 23:37:04 +0000
Posted: Thu, 09 Jul 2015 23:37:04 +0000

War at :40 for 15

Whimsi ~ Smile or eyes
Kindness or Joy that they bring

depending on what kind you mean.

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Post: 96840651_7715 created on Thu, 09 Jul 2015 23:37:41 +0000
Posted: Thu, 09 Jul 2015 23:37:41 +0000

CoRoses: Forgive me while I die of laughter. I know Noddle can twist and stretch the truth, but I think that's a little to far a reach and he'd pull a muscle there.

It's not the personality we're talking here. I guess smile can work though... she laughs and smiles a lot.

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Post: 96840651_7716 created on Thu, 09 Jul 2015 23:47:47 +0000
Posted: Thu, 09 Jul 2015 23:47:47 +0000

Whimsi
nope I can't forgive you
That's super cheesy
Maybe try the curve of her lips or her jaw the slope of her nose the manner in which she laughs , the musical qualities of her voice things like that

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Post: 96840651_7717 created on Thu, 09 Jul 2015 23:55:28 +0000
Posted: Thu, 09 Jul 2015 23:55:28 +0000

War ~ 75

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Post: 96840651_7718 created on Thu, 09 Jul 2015 23:57:22 +0000
Posted: Thu, 09 Jul 2015 23:57:22 +0000

War ~ 18 I hate writing dialogue.

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Post: 96840651_7719 created on Thu, 09 Jul 2015 23:58:07 +0000
Posted: Thu, 09 Jul 2015 23:58:07 +0000

Whimsi Eyes or hair are often arrestingly beautiful features. If Noddle is writing it under the Green Dragon's direction, what does she think her best features are?

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Post: 96840651_7720 created on Thu, 09 Jul 2015 23:58:34 +0000
Posted: Thu, 09 Jul 2015 23:58:34 +0000

CoRoses: How it is cheesy/what is cheesy? Since pretty much anything about someone's beauty sounds cheesy to me, and all the things that have been mentioned sound equally so to me.

Ju: Those could work. Since she does have some supernatural coloring to her eyes.....
and I have no idea. Noddle's interesting in being dramatic and writing a proper song.

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Post: 96840651_7721 created on Fri, 10 Jul 2015 00:01:14 +0000
Posted: Fri, 10 Jul 2015 00:01:14 +0000

Whimsi

Eyes/smile/Hair are what people always go for. Also laughter.
So you can do them but I'd say go for a different angle.
Or avoid them all together.

ANd its all cheesy, every bit of it.

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Post: 96840651_7722 created on Fri, 10 Jul 2015 00:09:34 +0000
Posted: Fri, 10 Jul 2015 00:09:34 +0000

CoRoses: I don't care about it being over done. This is a bar song singing about the greatness that is the Green Dragon. It's gotta include a verse about her beauty.

And the conversation went something like
"We have to mention your beauty."
*spit take* "What?"
"Well, if I don't write it, someone else will, and-"
"fine."