cherry144
It's interesting. I don't think that Maria's mother should be so weak, though. I
still can't stand her, though. She just gets on my nerves. I'm sorry, but it's true. Some gramatical errors, but not as many as in your first chapter. Keep up the good work!
Yeah but you should try and be in her mom's shoes. Her husband left her because he couldn't handle her or the daughter anymore and then later in the future the daughter becomes a total b***h that she can't even control?
(Yeah it might be different for you guys but for Maria's mother, she just can't handle it anymore and lost self esteem for herself and everything around her.)
Nah that's okay if you can't stand Maria, it's understandable.
Thanks.... I guess but it's all thanks to +Anime Crusades+ for proof reading it for me.
3nodding