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First impression: Looking at your avi, it just makes me feel that time slow down, and everything freezes. Gives me a really stale vibe yo! I like it.
Up Above: Black/grey halo. Usually
that certain halo gives a wacky look to many avi's due to the halo not being perfectly shaped. As you probably can see it has some bumps here and there, makin' it edgy'n' stuff. But it looks decent on your avi, so good job!
Hat: I'm pretty sure you are wearing a hoodie, and from what I see some hair sticks out of it. To me it sends of some "movement" but time suddenly stops, and the hair is in mid-air. It's cool. And I like that you split your avi up into 2 colours, (Dark grey, bright grey) That way it's easier to see the "details" on your avi. For example right now, I can see your hoodie and hair. If they both would have the same colour it would be hard seein' what is what.
face: Mask split across 2 colours. Intense eyes lookin' out from em. Not much to say, apart from me liking the eye choice as they really are noticeable, and adds points to the Creepy'o'meter.
Torso: Is part of your hoodie, which goes up to the head as I mentioned above. looks fine. As for underneath that hoodie cover, you got some sort of grey. I can't see what it is. But It's colour is the same bright grey as your overall avi, so it manages to fit in well.
Arms: I like that your avi's arms are covered by the sleeves. Gives "lifeless" feels to the arms, which makes em' appear ... calm, if that's what to say. Kinda hard to put a word for it. But I can say I dig it.
Back: Your avi has some sort of sword mounted to the back. I think it's a nice addition to your avi, as it's quite "small" compared to bigger avi's (in terms of width'n'item size) the sword allows your avi to be more wide, and fillin' out more for a better overall look.
Leggings: This is where I your avi to be weakest. The bottom legs feels kind of "tiny" compared to your top part which is more heavy, (In terms of items) Have you tried some bigger leg mods to make your avi's overall size more flowin'? As for the feet they seem really small. But that's because the shoes you are wearing consist of white in the ends, which leads to it clashing together with the standard white background, if you go non-background.
Overall verdict: From what I see I like it overall, and the only flaw being your legging area as I have stated above. Apart from that I can only say good use of that halo yo! I really am a fan of how you managed to make it
that fitting into an avi.
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Suggestions
I know of only one quite cheap leg mod which maybe would work fine on your avi. But i'm 100% certain the item colouring doesn't flow with your avi. But I'd recommend you taking a peek at it anyways, just for the sake of it. :
Bitter chcolate
If that does not work, try looking into some "loose" jeans to make em' legs appear bigger. Then it'd be perfect yo!
-Azu